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Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I love this! I have to admit, Jasper has become my favorite of the male characters in the Twi-verse. I know, I know! I still love Edward, but there's just something about Jasper... He holds a special place in my heart. I enjoy seeing different authors' incarnations of him, especially when he's not a central character but we get to see into his psyche. Well done, Paige!
Reviewer: Almawitch (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
This outtake was great. I enjoyed hearing Jasper's voice and knowing a little more about his story. And I will not give up on this story- even if it takes you five years to finish it.
Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Great outtake!
Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Great outtake!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Poor Jazz, you just want to give him a hug.
Reviewer: AmyTX (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Enjoyed this chapter. I am loving this story and can't wait to see what Edward and Bella do next. Please say they are going to move back to South Carolina, get married and have babies!
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
That was beautiful! Really, my jaw hit the floor when I got the email about an update, then I find out it's a Jasper Outtake...Wowza! So great! Thank you for putting this up. It's so great to get other stories out of the main one :) We're just h00rs for information!
Reviewer: Colourscollide (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
My heart breaks even more for Jasper now, but I'm so glad that he has Alice!! *squeee*
Reviewer: twilightmother (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Oh no the story is very good. Loved seeing the update! What has Edward done though? Please nothing stupid. He needs to get on a plane and go to her.
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
You could almost take this out take and run with it and write a story about how thing kept going for Jasper and how he got to where he is now with Alice.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
OK not my favorite chapter but I am in love with your Edward and I think Bella needs to get her shit togeather or I will come and take him away he can call me sugar. Love ya
Lilly
Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
This entire chapter was great. Its hard to think of anyone leaving their 12 year old on the side of the road. Its hard to think of anyone leaving any child to fend for themselves. This child was lucky that his road lead him to a family that knew what he needed and embraced it and him as their own. Really wonderful outtake.
Reviewer: Nadiea (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I loves it!
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I LOVE YOUR STORY, YOU JUST TAKE YOUR TIME IS ALL GOOD AND WELL, WE WIL WAIT FOR YOUR WONDERFUL NEW CHAPTERS. STORIES LIKE YOURS, MAKE ME SO GLAD TO READ (a lot), AND WRITE (a little) ENGLISH, THANKS FOR GIVING US AND MAKE US ALL HAPPY WITH YOUR GIFT OF WRITTING, AND I SEND YOU LOTS OF LOVE FROM MEXICO.......
Reviewer: kellyonawa (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I enjoyed the outtake. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
I am so glad he hit him but I have a feeling we have not seen the last of him. Can't wait to read next chapter. Great story.
Lilly
Reviewer: toronto27 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Made me cry. A child, no matter their status, should never be treated like property. The parents should have been wiser and given the true family adoption rights. That is what I wanted for me but that never came either.
Reviewer: cherry_bomb16 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
The one shot was fantastic, dear, and no ones giving up on you. Hang in there. XOXO.
Reviewer: xfirespritex (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
This was an excellent chapter. Two points to Edward for smashing Sam in the face.
Reviewer: jjack2 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
thanks! that was a great little flashback. sorry about the writer's block - hope you find your MoJo for the story soon!!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
First off I would never give up on you and this awesome story. I know that writing is not easy, especially writing well, and then to have idiot people say stupid shit about you not writing or not like how your writing it. I would like to thank you for writing this. I enjoy this story a lot. I really liked the insight into Jasper's past. Wouldn't mind more integrated into the story. Since I can't write a thing I know nothing about writers block. Having had to write papers for college I know that if its not there well it's not there. You kinda stare at the paper or the screen and sigh a lot. But I'll wait till ya get it. Cause I know it has to be just right or you'll never feel good about it. And isn't that why you do it to begin with!
Reviewer: JLW4108 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Wow. I was crying with that car/curb scene. Heartless, horrid people; and screaming at Jasper about respecting his mother and they were disappointed with his behavior??? He was 12!!!!!! Ugh...Jasper is so much better with the Cullens. Thanks for including it, it definitely helps to solidify the bond between Jasper & the Cullens.
Reviewer: xfirespritex (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
This story has been amazing.
Reviewer: VampinGina (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Really good and also very sad. Well written, kind of like I pictured it. You did a great job! Looking forward to next chapter!
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
I LOVED this chapter! I read it with tears in my eyes! Excellent writing!
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