i liked the change of pace, it's good for the story and livens things up alittle bit, or in this case, helps to explain things that have happened earlier in the story. Well written and enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 i liked the change of pace, it's good for the story and livens things up alittle bit, or in this case, helps to explain things that have happened earlier in the story. Well written and enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow it's letting me review from my phone! YAY! Any way love that Bella took out James. Looking forward to the discussion she was to have with Edward. Get moved and update when you can!

REALLY?????????? ALL the beautiful tear-inducing love fest-iness for several chapters and then we get this angsty chapter? You are some talented albeit frustrating author. Im totally hooked. James is an ass in every universe, eh? Hmmm, people just can't hide who they really are, even fictional people.

So glad I discovered this story late, so that I don't have to wait for updates. I am not a patient person...in any universe:-)

 

Ok, just Thank Heavens that SM had the divine inspiration to introduce us all to these beloved characters if for no other reason than you, right here in this chapter, and building from the beginning of your story, bring a new dimension to the love I feel for them. Just like real honest to Goddess people...friends. This was a lovely chapter and it brought tears to my eyes. The whole reason that I love Twilight is that at the core of it exists a great ageless love story. Like Romeo and Juliet, if Shakespeare had bothered to really involve us in the stories of their friends and family. The relationships between each of these couples in your writing mirrors what is truly great about the original series which is why I love it so. Like that perfect chocolate salted caramel torte, the kind of dessert that makes you spontaneously hum...your writing, and the other beautiful fanfiction Ive discovered here just expands the beauty of the Twilight experience. I feel a bit corny even trying to articulate it, but seriously if you are anywhere near Twilighted, then you already get it. Bravo, Baby...I'll follow you anywhere.

yes a frying pan was an awesome choice

that was an intense chapter alot of things happend! and i cant wait to see what you have planned nw and wow but i loved the way Bella took James out that was amazing!

And the plot thickens.... bring on the angst.  yay (I love some good angst)

Awesome!  One of my favorite chapters!!  Great work!

wow this chpt was awesome.

great chapter, good to see james is finally taken care of!

I just indeed to have James hurt with a frying pan. 

I am wondering if now Bella gets her wish when she cant live in the house where she took James out?  I have heard a lot of people sell up after something like this happens.

But as I say you are the writer and you are taking us on this fantastic journey, and for that I thank you, and I am sure we would all love regular updates but the real world has ways of not making that happen, so good luck with the move, I do not envy you at all, especially the unpacking.  I always enjoying packing everything up, because you have a good clean out, but I always hate the unpacking, it seems to take longer. 

But I hope it is a safe and happy trip to your new home town and home.  

U. R. THE. FLIPPIN'. BEST. FANFIC. WRITER. E.V.E.R.  100000000 OUT OF 5 STAARS.

YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH. Yes I agree Bella should be the one to take James out. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter excellent job.