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Reviewer: twivampchick (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 22 Demon Scotch and Brotherhood
Bella's got balls! YOU GO GIRL!!! God, James is an ASSHOLE!
Reviewer: twivampchick (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 21 Homecoming
I loved the James "burn". God he's an Asshole. BTW, who is Tony that was mentioned a couple of chapters ago? Did I miss something or what?
Reviewer: twivampchick (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I just knew James was going to be proven an "asshole extraordinaire", and not tell anybody about the emergency trip. I think Bella is going to get pissed of and tell of Bruce/quit and Edward is going to decide to stay working with Carlisle. They will cancel buying the house and stay in Hilton Head and Bella will become the next Paula Dean and open her own restaurant which Edward will design for her and Emmett will build. Am I close? God I hate that fucker James!!!!
Reviewer: Rob Lover (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
I totally love this story and had to come over here to read it since it's not complete on FFN. At least everything is finally out in the open (aside from the James apprehension) and they are all talking. Alice is pregnant, yay!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
Awww! I was trying so hard the entire chapter not to cry! I loved it!
Reviewer: SierraJaneSims (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
Oh why do I always get addicted to the unfinished stories of Twilighted? I just want to say you're an amazing author, and I really enjoy your book. I wish you luck in your move!
Reviewer: lovablegirl33 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
mmm love it!<33
Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
really nice one with the pan!! go go bella!
pls update asap with bella's proposal-r they gonna move?
love, elina
Reviewer: nic5872 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
Aaack! What the heck is wrong with these two crazy kids?!
Reviewer: Skippy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
awwww, I read this fic thinking it was complete. I have to say I'm a little disappointed, but I've been working on reading it all day and it was lovely. Thank you for sharing it and I can't wait for another update.
Reviewer: twilight fan (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 19 Riptide
I love this story. Haha out of all the times they have had sex it seems they only used a condom twice. Am I correct?
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 17 Yes! Yes! Oh God, Yes! (V)
I love your Bella. If a person has ever had their heart broken and than jumped to another love that kind of "hold-back" is needed to be sure not stupid, so I got it. But Edward is trying so hard, I want him to win too.
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
I'm on Edward's side. She really is finicky. I got whiplash. Love your story though. Cant wait for more.
Reviewer: clumsy318 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
When are you going to update? I am hopping it is soon. It has been a month today. It never took you this long to update on Fanfiction. So please I am on my knees begging you to update you left off on this HUGE clif hanger I want to know how Edward and Bella are going to handel this!!
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 S.T.37
I am so hooked is not even funny. I love this Edward and Bella. I cant wait to see their story evolve. thnks for a great read.
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
loved it overall, a little dissappointed with the ending,
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 25 Several Ways to Lose Your Lover
what's a lemon?
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 Fallout (V)
starting not to like Bella
Reviewer: ShadyLane (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
I ADORE this story. I feel like you really get Bella and Edward, letting the characters remain despite their not-so-subtle situational difference from the books. I also like how you play with using characters in similar ways (James stalking Bella, Jasper's adoption etc.) so that they parallel without distracting from the storyline :)
Oh, and SouthernComfortward is abso-friggin'-lutely AWESOME.
Reviewer: sacaco (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
oh! i so can't wait for you to update again! it makes me sad that the writers on twilighted actually have a life. haha.
mucho love for your story, btw!
Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
what an amazing story!!! but what about edward and bella's wedding? are they going to have a bundle of joy as well? what about alice and jasper's pregnancy, what's going to happen!!? and ofcourse i couldn't forget about emmett and rose!! what's going to happen next for them!? i'm anxious to find out and i can't really leave it up to my imaginations could i?... lol well overall it was a good story, i always hated james, he had it coming! lol
Reviewer: Saxyad18 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
I am absolutely addicted to this story. Wonderful job. I can't wait to see where you go next.
Reviewer: ShadyLane (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 Piggly-Wiggly (V)
Just a minor note, as a resident of the Puget Sound, our "open air market" is universally known as "Pike Place Market" or just Pike Place to the locals :)
Love the story so far! Great job!
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper
wow, so much happened. Glad Bella took james out and saved herself and Edward. now they can move on from that freak show and just be together, whether it's in Seattle or Hilton head, as long as they are together, it won't matter. Can't wait for more. I hope the move went ok and you're getting settled alright. :)
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found
That was so sad what happened to Jasper, but at the same time, he is much better off with the Cullens. I loved that they opened not just their home, but their hearts. And they are all much better off as true family, even if it's not in the legal sense. What a good thing to share with us all. Great job giving us another peek into Jasper.
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