Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Love this story. Glad you're planning to finish it!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Thanks for the update. I love this whole chapter. Yeah they're moving back. And I still wasnt to be called sugar.
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Thankx for the update xx
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Love this. Read it all in one day!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Very good!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
i love this story doll its always worth the wait for this fic :D gotta love rose haha and i love that edward is finally convinced that moving is the best plan you are amazing doll and i cant wait for more :D
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Aw, so nice to see things work out for everyone. And definately nice to see some hot E&B lovin!
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
what a nice surprise to have this update waiting for me. Loved it! I hope the rest of the gang gets to move as well, I like the idea of them all being together.
oh, and I enjoyed the balcony scene as well hot hot hot!!!!
Reviewer: jdogggz (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Ahhh.... I love a good wedding!! And a good smutty scene! Way to kill two birds with one stone, Paige! ;-) That was well worth the wait
Reviewer: crush-on-lush (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
loved the chapter
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Aww they're moving back! :)
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
I won't be able to listen to that song in quite the same way again. :-)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Loved it! Rosalie's just jealous!
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Thanks for the chapter. I love this story.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Bella and Edward have been recovering from James's appearance in their home. The entire family is back at Hilton Head for Jasper and Alice's wedding. Bella still has the opportunity to open a restaurant back east and be co-partner in the enterprise. Edward always wanted to work in Seattle, but job isn't as rewarding as he imagined. The only reason he hired with other company was to be close to Bella. Jasper was funny with his jitters. Men are nervous before the ceremony. My husband was left in the groom's room alone while all the groomsmen and his mother and sister all came to visit me. He was smoking back then. Kept lighting up another cigarette even though he had 3-4 burning in the ashtray. I had everyone with me keeping me calm. Of course we didn't see each other until I walked down the aisle. Bella must have looked amazing based on Edward's reaction. Alice was beautiful. Everyone had a great time. Edward made a decision to move back home leave Seattle. Carlisle wants him back. Emmett and Rosalie will still be in Seattle now alone. Bella and Emmett's parents will be in Florida soon when Charlie retires. Edward suggested Emmett move and they'll expand the business to be full service for building, renovations, etc...They have drafting, blueprints, interior designers, and accounting services. They will be able to draw up plans, be the contractor on the job, and finally decorate the interior while accounting records will be dealt with at the office. Bella will be running the restaurant. Alice and Jasper will concentrate on interior designs, Emmett will be general contractor and do all the building, Rosalie will be their financial accountant and Edward/Carlisle will be the architects. Emmett will need to leave his contracting company in Seattle. Edward pitched the plan to expand the company the night of the wedding everyone had too much to drink so further talking was reserved for following day. Edward was providing his ideas to Carlisle and Emmett the following morning. Edward has all the planning and preparing to make the move home with his family. Bella is excited about it. When Jasper and Alice return from their honeymoon both of them will be overjoyed. I liked the way you had them walk down the aisle together Alice/Jasper since both of their parents abandoned them to their own devises. They each gave themselves away to the others.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
That was a great chapter! The wedding was beautiful, and there were all kinds of great revelations. *claps*
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Happy Birthday to me, Happy Birthday to me, Happy Birthday Dear boulderpa, Happy Birthday to me. It isn't really my birthday, of course, but I was so happy to see an update from you today that I did a happy dance when I got the alert. Thank you for continuing even after RL took you away for awhile! We also need some more Something Stupid, of course.
I am not ready for the end of this story. Do you think you could somehow find a way to drag it out? Like maybe add a hot one shot Em and Rose before Rosalie came out on the balcony, and maybe a Jas and Al one shot before the wedding, and maybe a little wrapping it up in Seattle then getting everyone settled in Hilton Head and perhaps Rose and Em's then Bella and Edward's weddings...this story is like an old friend, who went away for awhile and then came back to visit. I would just like the visit to last a bit longer please.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
oh no not the end of this story. I have really enjoyed your story and this was a great and loved the ending with Rosalie. Thank you for sharing your talent
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
yay, so glad u updated i have absolutley loved this story from start to now so keep going girl, we need a wedding & bambino's befor eu sign off from this baby lol
Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
I was so happy for this update... and it was worth the wait. Very good chapter and I'm really happy that they are moving back, just hoping Emmett and Rose will follow them ! Please, make another chapter before the epilogue; because I want to read more ot this awesome story :)
Reviewer: atxcullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Thanks for finally updating. I'm sorry you had to move across country again. I can only imagine how much that would suck, especially if you have kids. But hopefully you're where you really want to be now.
Hmmm, not sure about the balcony sex at the parents house. While it was certainly hot, the voyeurism was a little disturbing. There would have been serious issues if it had been Emmett!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Loved the chapter - laughed at the reversal between Alice and Jasper before their wedding and cried a little bit when they walked down the aisle together because it was perfect for them! So glad that Edward and Bella are going to move back to HH and I hope that Rose and Emmett will join them! And the end... now I won't be able to get that stupid song out of my head!!!!
Glad your move is over and can't wait to see how this ends! keep up the great work! :)
♥ BethMasenCullen :)
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
Yay! I'm so glad for the update on this story. Things worked out so well for these two. I can't wait to see how you choose to end it.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: idyllic world (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
I was soooo excited for this chapter. And you didn't disappoint. Alice and Jasper's wedding was so beautiful. And Edward finally gave in on moving back! Rose was absolutely hilarious! What a fabulous chapter!
I definitely vote for another chapter before the epilogue.. we gotta see if Rose and Em move to Hilton Head too! Can't wait for the next enstallment! :)
Reviewer: Tina18 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 33 Missionary Man
I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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