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Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
What artwork can be worth 60 million?
Reviewer: HSE (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
its a really good story
but i was thinin wouldnt it b obvious tht bella will be disappearing right afta the painting has been stolen? wouldnt he put 2 pieces togthr and realise tht expecially wiv wat mikes been sayin?
and poor alice she always ends up being on th wrong side of bellas anger mind u she did get a pretty good gift for it last tym :D damn id take an angry bella anytym if thts how she sed sorry
Author's Response: Hmmm....Interesting. All will be revealed.
Alice sometimes gets the snarky Bella, it's just out of frustration and tense situations, and they both understand that even though they are all a close-nit unit, there are times when they all get a bit grumpy with each other.
Reviewer: newbie20 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
Holy heck, they finally did the deed after 10 chapters of URST! As always, great pacing of this chapter and pay-off to the relationship build up that's lead Edward and Bella to this point. Loved Alice's volleying between being a friend to Bella with her gentle hints about the possibility of having something more meaningful with Edward and then her professionalism spurting in regarding planting the bug in the midst of foreplay. I'm waiting with bated breath to find out what happens next. Hopefully not too much angst please!
Author's Response: Yep, it happened, it finally happened. Even though I knew that this chapter would be THAT chapter, the mention of why Bella was there was still a priority. The surveillance equipment and Alice's curiosity added the link between her emotional attachment to him and her reason for being there. Thank you for leaving such an insightful comment it's very much appreciated.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
Great chpter. I don't know how or if one cn get on story alerts onTwilighted, so I just keep checking. I love this story and arrogant, possessive Edwrard!
Jenna M.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review...He gets much worse!!!!
Story Alert: End of a chapter gives you a long box titled option, click on the arrow, add story to favourites, scroll down the new page your in and click on submit. Remember to click otherwise it won't save it as a favourite.
Edit Preferences: go into account info click on Edit Preferences make sure the first 3 boxes are ticked...Hope that helps!!!
Reviewer: bluemaybits (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
I can't wait for the date!
Author's Response: It's with my Beta now.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
Hot little park bench, loved it!
Author's Response: I'm hoping to stumble across it myself!!!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
I really like this story, it's interesting, as I said after reading the first chapter. I'm definitely interested in reading from Edward's point of view too:D So I'm a little curious (though I bet you won't tell me a thing;)) is James romantically interested in Bella or does he just think of her as his sister or something like that? That last part of the chapter confused me a bit... Anyways, I can't wait to read more, hope next update (or the outtakes) will be soon!! :D :D
Author's Response: I do think the dynamics of Bella and James are complex. I don't want to give you round about sentences that actually don't contain answer. But I will be honest with you, the story is done, each chapter has been outlined and written on my chapter planner. I do find it difficult to keep to it and I have fallen for James, I love this character and when he and Bella are in a room the conversations between them just flow. I have sneaked in the odd wishful thinking moment, which I need to stop doing. This was always a B and E story, and James just got in the way a bit. He will play a major part in this story though!!!!
Sorry for rambling, would love to talk more about this and the impending Edward chapter, but I don't want to hog the review page!!! I do have a thread, though it's probably far down on the list of threads!!!
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Btw Edward's up in the next couple of days...would love your thoughts on him!!!
Reviewer: JuicyT (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
Hmmm. Edward got a little demanding in there didnt he? Enjoyed it as always!
Author's Response: That's why we love him so!!!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
Oh, you;re genius, and I just cant cant cant wait for e and b's dinner, lol.
Author's Response: 7pm don't be late, casual dress for easy access!!!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
Interesting... :)
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
I can't believe we didn't get the phone sex! (tee-hee) Can't wait for their date.
Author's Response: I know!!!!
Seriously I was so up for it then I chickened out...WTF!!!
But I have redeemed myself... Chapter's 12, 13 and 14 are smokin...
I no longer have frigid fingers!!!!!
Reviewer: nastey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
i'm really enjoying new chapter of your story. i think it's the first time that i actually like james character, i love how he interacts with bella. i'm glad that you didn't make him bad guy in this story.
i've made another banner, because the last one had a crappy quality of robert's picture and aghh i just wasn't really happy about it. i don't want you to feel obligated to use it. i just, i don't know i want you to have a really pretty banner so people will get interested in your story, because it's a really good one. hopefully you'll like it. can't wait to read edward's pov!
if you'll need help (graphic one) let me know :)
Author's Response: We SO need to talk about the banner, pm coming your way in 10 min's.
James, what is happening to me? I'm getting a serious crush on this boy!!! Am I the only one that can see good in the bad! Yes I know his character in the books and movie was a bit of the wall, but I know he can be nice!!!
I always smile at your reviews and you always send me lovley pressie's xoxo
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
Just found and read this fic, and wanted to say i am really enjoying it. Was a little worried about the James / Bella interaction at the beginning, but can see he is just looking out for her best interest.
Can't wait to see what Bella does, and how Edward wins her heart (although he sort of has it already)!
great fic - love it.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Your right, James is looking out for her, and even though she is her own woman she sometimes needs the words of James to help her through tough decisions.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 Forever
Oh I wish they'd gotten that room!
Great chapter. Jeanna M
Reviewer: nastey (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 Forever
you're making me want more of this :) great job!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 Forever
I'm sad for Bella that Charlie is slowly slipping away. Maybe Edward will be able to help her through it, that is if she lets him in.
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
I got really excited about this story because I am an art lover and always thought that it would be cool if somebody wrote a fanfiction involving it!
I'm lucky I came across this story considering that fact that I dont usually get to read ffiction that much due to a busy scheduel, but since I'm home with the flu, I have found out that I have plenty of time to catch up with the fan fiction world.
Thank you for the wonderful story
I will be sure to keep my eye on it ;)
-twilighted007
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind reviews.
It was a story that was whirling around in my head for quite awhile, so I took the leap.
Get well soon.
W.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
Oh, mercy. Those last ten lines or so were absolutely mesmerizing!
Cannot wait for the next grest chapter!
Jeanna M.
Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
possessive much?
Author's Response: Edward mention's his...shall we say ownership issues in a later chapter!!!
Only-child-syndrome!!
Lol!!!
Reviewer: catloves18 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
must say i love this stoey please keep updating....dying to see where this goes!!
Reviewer: jbran52 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 Raised Questions and Deflated Answers
!! This team is so bad!!! Poor Edward...Things are going to get so inappropriate and I love it. BTW...one of the most well written fics I've ever read, very intriguing!
Author's Response: They are kinda naughty!!!
Poor Edward!!!...Mmmm maybe, maybe not!
Wow (I'm saying that a lot today... sorry) well written fics is a massive compliment. thank you.
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
I'm loving this story. The plotline is original, it's well written, and Edward is dreamy, haha. Anyways, please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Edward is dreamy, is'nt he?
The Banner edward is so how i imagine him when i'm typing away... smokin hot!!!!
Reviewer: JuicyT (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
I am totaly enraptured with this story!! I LOVE it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
It makes all the difference, when such nice reviews come my way.
Reviewer: newbie20 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story. Loving the the way you've paced this story with the tension building both between Edward and Bella and also in the mystery of the overall plot. You mentioned that there will be one chapter with EPOV - can you tell us where in the sequence this will be? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: First I'd like to say how grateful I am to receive such positive reviews.
It's so nice to hear how the pace of the story is doing. I'm going to start to leave little nibbles of future chapters on my thread, which up until now as been pretty much dormant.
So to answer your question regarding the EPV chapter... I'll post it on the thread!!!
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
Yes. *pump fist* I love hot lovin'
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