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Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10 Father's Day
As sad as the moments between Bella, Charlie and Rose are, I do like them.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 Forever
Poor Charlie, it's so sad that he's dieing and that Bella has to sit back and watch.
Alice.x
Author's Response: Ugh!! I find it very difficult to write Bella and Charlie's dialogue.
It can sometimes be very sad to write their words.
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 8 In the Company of Others
You can say one thing for Edward: he's persistent.
I like how he saw though her lie and how he's trying to figure her out.
Alice.x
Author's Response: His persistency and jealously are his qualities or maybe his down fall...not sure on that one!!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 7 Broken Bones and Smiling Faces
I've never liked Jacob, so I must say I did rejoice slightly when Bella hit him.
I'm glad that at the moment I don't have to wait for updates.
Alice.x
Author's Response: Yep!! I'm team Edward too, how did you guess?
;-)
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 6 A Personal Invitation
I love the interaction between Jacob and Bella, it made me laugh.
Alice.x
Author's Response: I'm very excited that you are very excited, is that weird?
The next chapter (7) is one of my personal favourites.
You are so kind and thoughtful with all the reviews that you are leaving.
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 5 Raised Questions and Deflated Answers
I'd never thought I would say this, but Mike is funny. Lol
Alice.x
Author's Response: I kinda think that Mike gets a bit of bum deal, so I wanted to mix it up a bit.
This chapter has a clue for a later chapter (12).
I've reached the 80 mark (reviews not age!!) and it's all because of you...
Thank you.
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4 Maria who?
I really am liking this story so far, it's good, it's really good.
Alice.x
Author's Response: Wow!! Um...You're too kind.
It's my first time writing anything, so it's very overwhelming when such lovely words of encouragement are directed at me. I know there is quite a bit of plot building which isn't to everyone's taste. So it's nice to receive such promising comments...
:)
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Man In A Straw Hat
The moments between Charlie and Bella were sweet.
This Edward is intriguing me.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Gift
Damn, that's a pretty nice gift. Haha.
Good chapter.
Alice.x
Author's Response: I bet you wish you were that Alice!!!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
Wow, I'm liking it so far.
Alice.x
Author's Response: Thank you. It's always nice to have a new viewer on board.
You have the advantage Alice you can read the next chapter without having to wait!!!
Lots of plot development with a pinch of flirting. Guaranteed juiciness from chapter 10 onwards.
Let me know what you think of future chappie's
Reviewer: Elli_goes_into_the_Twilight (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 13 Jasper's Day
this story makes me cry. bet you he's targeting her like she is/was him and now they are in one fuck of a delema lmao
Author's Response: Ah!! I'm not a gambling chick I'm afraid!! LOL..
Your right though they are in a mucking fuddle!!!! :)
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
D: Nice cliffhanger.
Author's Response: I was a cliffhanger virgin before this!!!
So thank you :)
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
The intimacy, her guilt about placing the device in the alarm box, Her looking at his photos in the house. Telling him her Father's dying. The girl is in as much trouble as Masen himself. Great chapter!
Jeanna M.
Author's Response: It's never a smooth ride when it comes to these crazy kids, and this story is no exception.
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 Raised Questions and Deflated Answers
thanks;)
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
Hmm...I can't remember if/where Aro was mentioned before (what his place in the story is) :/ Some help please? :)
Author's Response: Chapter five: Questions and Deflated answers that should help...
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
poor bella! i feel bad for her! i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
Why was Alice so mean? Maybe she's jealous of Marie's orgasms? I forget...was Aro mentioned earlier? I'll have to re-read this story again..
Author's Response: Chapter five will give you insigt to Aro and the plot
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
Loved it as always, what a quandary! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: JuicyT (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: Romance and Rules
Super Hot Chapter!Thanks for the update
Author's Response: I love the 'super hot' reference.
Thank you.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
GREAT FIRST TRY! how's she gonna rob him now??? jeanna M.
Author's Response: Gosh. I was so nervous had a shot of tequila to start me of (not like that!) and then it kinda flowed. How is she going to rob him? ...I wonder!!
Reviewer: lnb2107 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: twilght-princessm (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Background Checks
Your story is utterly fantastic just by reading the first chapter. I believe it has an avant garde flair to the beginning.
Author's Response: Wow! What a wonderful comment thank you. Avant garde I like the sound of that.
Many thanks for taking the time to read my story.
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
Good chapter as always:D Looking forward to read more!! :):)
Author's Response: The next chapter continues on from where it left of... The bedroom
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
wow..that edward has some temper...and how awkward to have your co-workers hearing you have sex??? Please continue. I am loving your story!
Author's Response: Lol. That's something to talk about around the water cooler!!!
I think temper-Edward is the best Edward!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 Elephant Ears
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you x
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