Thank you for taking the time to write this. It was was job well done. Now call SM and collect your reward. lol .

Renee is going to be a prblm later. I suspect you will have to 'bribe' her to stay away. Clearly she must have 'eyed'  the fact that the cullens aren't strapped for cash. 

Bella handled herself well at the wedding, although the vowes were weak. you had better lines for expressing love in the earlier chapters.

 

Q: Who here thought bella was going to choke slam her mother???? lmao

All im getting from this is no Reneseme. IN a way thk gawd, since that mean jb stays on the rez. But this new adult thinking Edward & Bella seem to be smart enough not to be put on another guilt trip caused by jb's imprinting. They seem like the couple to tell JB to go fawk himself, 'you're not getting anywhere near my daughter'; instead of following the SM version and just unreasonably and easily surrender their daughters 'virtue' to a hound who failed to get the mother and now is trying to get his rocks off w/ the daughter. SM version of bella did it out of guilt of always hurting him, but that was misplaced guilt.

[ He couldn't take no for an answer, that HiS prblm!]

There is no guilt in the world that would allow the constant presence of jb in my infant daughters life. I would be kicking his ass for even thinking about looking in the direction of my house from the rez. SM version was some SeRiOUsly bad parenting!!!.

Why is she the one w/ the money again?!. She clearly couldn't write about an a teenager able to make an adult decisions to safe her life. Good grief.

“Jake agreed? What did you do, promise him your first born?” - edward.

Please dear gawd, don't tell me you also plan on surrendering reneseme to jb!.

Say it ain't so. Say it aint so!!!!.

Gr8 chapt. Charlie fighting jake for bella was huge. Jake cursing back was surprising.

[Esme yelling] "Please don't doubt that this isn't also directed at you Bella. You hit at the heart of the problem. Everything is about sacrifice with the two of you. You're both ever so eager to throw your lives away, and frankly I'm sick of it! I forbid you both from ever doing it again!"... "What part of pleading with the Volturi for death doesn't sound intentional Edward? Or how about Bella slicing open a vein in the middle of a vampire fight to get your attention? I'm at the point of wondering if you two conspire in her room at night about martyring techniques! Or have you taken up the reigns from Emmett in trying to give a vampire grey hair?" - Esme

LMFAO!!!!!! Now THIS is a version of ESME I could get behind!.

“You really think the sun rises and sets out of Edward’s ass, don’t you? Emmett fulfills the ‘E’ role just fine, so feel free to get lost Edward. We’ll keep Bella, and you can go host Sesame Street and tell them E stands for your Emo ass.” - Rosalie

HAHAHAHA. NIce OnE.

ugh.....“You’ll still be Bella Swan. We’re not getting married.” -Edassward. Once again Edassward makes an appearance. Why is she interested in his shift ass again???????.

" You won't be loved someday. You are loved today, as my friend and as my lover, as my world and my soul. I will hold and keep you Edward. There will never be a day when I won't reach out for you or want you by my side.  There will never be a place I go that you cannot follow. Every choice I make is you. It will always be you. You cannot beg for something that is already and forever will be yours." Everything that I am, will always be you.  - Bella

I can't wait to find love like this for myself. Then i better make room... Anybody know the # of a good divorce attorney?

You went all roman mythology on us, leaving me with the sudden urge to google half of this chapter, but I got what you were trying to say out of the context it was put in.

EXCELLENT WRITING. Gr8 JOB. Bella always did get away w/ way too much. Her need to make sure all around her is happy, is what Jacob was counting on in his manipulation of her goodwill and guilt. Like I always said... JB is an asshole!.

''Today, not in 1918, but this fateful day, Edward had been turned to stone, and yet he continued to bear the weight of the heavens on his shoulders.

Adonis became Atlas, holding up the burden of his shooting star''.- Bella

Excellent analogies...

 

''I imagined as he made his way back to the house, he was awaiting my arrival to send him away and to explain that I wanted Jacob instead. But he would stay and endure until that time; ever loyal; ever loving.

Yes. I knew Edward now.

And I knew myself.

I was Bella Swan, the god killer''. - Bella

 

What a first chapter!!!. Talk about breaking the ice w/ dynamite!.

 

Love, love, love...(I stole that from the Beatles!). Lol...

Love the end!

I love this! I have been reading fanfic since June, and this is THE FIRST ONE I have read that FINALLY forces Bella to man up. All I can say is it's about time! 

Very moving.

This story was awesome, finally someone wrote about how Edward was affected by the BS with Bella and Jake. I always felt bad for him and felt he must of been hurt. Your writing is great and you did a great job showing how he felt and how Bella finally realized he also had feelings, Hope you write more E/B stories soon. Thanks for sharing.