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Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 04:16 PM · On: The Vision

ooohhhh...  awesome chapter!  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: M Logan (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 12:58 PM · On: The Vision

Happy Anniversary! Please don't let us wait too long for an update. You left us on a cliffy!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:40 AM · On: The Vision

It's great to see a new chapter after so long, hope life is treating you well though amongst all that? :)

Looks like the anxiety level just got raised a notch for everyone concerned, even people like Charlie, who's not even sure what he's worried about just yet hehe

Alice's arrival at Bella's, coupled with the dark visions, are more than a little worrying. I would've expected her to show up with a thick coat or something to cover Bella during the run, even if having the car down the street wasn't viable.

Looking forward to more, when life lets you type :)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 04:42 AM · On: The Vision

Oh dear lord, I sure hope Bella's dreams don't come true...gasp what horror for Bella to have to witness that. I can only hope her changing into a vamp will be Edward's saving grace. God help anywho hurt Edward while Vamp Bella is there to protect him. Oh things are picking up a notch, I can't wait for the next update.

PS Congrats on your one year anniversary.

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 03:15 AM · On: The Vision

Nice cliffie!  Keep the updates coming, this story is fresh.  :) 

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 03:08 AM · On: The Vision

I was so excited to see an update...although a cliffy ...I hope we get an update soon.....That was a horrible cliffy..or a good one depending on how you look at it.

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 02:35 AM · On: The Vision

Who is coming for Edward and how in the heck are they going to get past the CUlen's? I loved that Edward and Bella showered together, some real intimacy progress! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 01:38 AM · On: The Vision

Yep!  Updates are few and far between, but they're worth the wait.  Hope to hear from you sooner next time.  Please!  :)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 01:16 AM · On: The Vision

Love the shower KISS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 01:09 AM · On: The Vision

Definitely not hating. I seriously missed this story and was really happy to see an update. Amazing as usual, girly! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:00 PM · On: The Vision

glad to get an update - still wondering how someone will come and get at Edward and who will be able to help him and who else will be in danger.... Hope to hear more of this story soon! ;)

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:57 PM · On: The Vision

i love this story :D vitb is amazing i cant wait to see what happens poor alice hell poor edward bella carlisle esme rose emmett and jasper its all sooo sad i cant wait for more you are brilliant

Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:51 PM · On: The Vision

I just found this story and couldn't stop reading. (My family just glares at me and wonders if they'll get dinner.) I want Bella to be changed but I worry it won't be safe for her if they are coming for Edward, whoever "they" are. She could end up being taken too. Interesting that Tanya and her coven found a vamp too. Great writing and original plot line that keeps me wondering what will happen next.

Reviewer: lequire (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:51 PM · On: The Vision

You know what today is? The best day of my life...thank you for updating!

Keep writing, my friend! I love this fic and they way you have written it.


Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: The Vision

I have had this on my favorites for quite awhile.  I am so glad that you have updated. 

Reviewer: bismarckfairy (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 08:02 PM · On: The Vision

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 06:23 PM · On: The Vision

I am SO GLAD more has come.  I literally almost cried when I saw that this was updated; I LOVE IT!! I'm wondering how many more chapters can I look forward to?

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 05:35 PM · On: The Vision

Thanks for the update! - and the hot steamy shower! Charlie really is an understanding Dad and really trying his best. Concerned about Alice's (& Bella's) visions. Not looking good at all. Please update soon, I love this story!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:39 PM · On: The Vision

I'm so happy you've updated!!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:27 PM · On: The Vision

hmmm there is nothig more OOC than bella hesitating if she should have a shower naked with edward or not. Please..... we all know she was a total perv, and couldn't wait to have her wicked way with poor virgin edward.. hahaha!

You know it is true!! ;)

Now, I am really happy you are back! I hope we won't be celebrating VITB's second anniversary before we get another update hahaha! But in case it happens, know we will be here waiting :)

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:13 PM · On: The Vision

I am still here and with this story.  It is haunting and beautifully written.  I hope the next update is soon.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:36 PM · On: The Vision


There's no hate here from me!  When you can give me an update I know you will!! 

I really have enjoyed reading VITB!!!  Thanks for writing it and Happy Anniversary!  I look forward to your updates!!!

Remember - no hate only love here for VITB!!!

dhull (Austin, TX)

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:12 PM · On: The Vision

So glad to see an update!! Please keep them coming!

Reviewer: ToTheEights (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:09 PM · On: The Vision

Whew that took awhile.  But that's okay.  Totally worth it.  Great work with this lovely story, again.  I'm really excited about the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:01 PM · On: The Vision

Good chapter, hopefully the next one will not take as long to get posted. : )

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