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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:32 AM · On: The Vision

Great chapter. Who's coming? And they left a vampire in Denali too? Hmm...

I loved the E/B bit in the shower. So sweet and beautiful.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:00 AM · On: The Vision

were Bella's dreams prophetic??

Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:38 AM · On: The Next Day

Awsome.     Its 1237am and I should be in bed, but I cant drag myself there. Its just so good. Bella is so compassionate. I already love our sickly vampire...:)

Reviewer: Mommyo2 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:59 AM · On: The Basement

This is a very good story! I am hooked and only on Ch.2! A friend suggested this story saying it was amazing and she was spot on.


I cant help but imagine this poor, sick vampire is Edward. ;)

Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:43 PM · On: The Vision

wow i read it in one sitting my family hates me and i havent slept in two day update soon i need my next fix

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:00 AM · On: The Vision

I was sooooooo excited when I saw that u updated!!! But now I'm super scared for Edward!! I need to know more!! xx

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:18 AM · On: The Vision

Holy shit! Looks ike Bella may have a bit of seeing the future too. Seems like her dreams & Alice's vision are just a little too similar. Loved the shower scene...yum

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:52 PM · On: The Vision

yay for the update! I am on pins and needles here, waiting for more! :) I want everything to be ok and for edward and Bella to grow closer :)

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:38 PM · On: The Vision's gonna get worse before it gets better, isn't it?  Great tension!

Reviewer: drdonald22 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:35 PM · On: The Bath

THANK YOU. I'm officially hooked!

Reviewer: drdonald22 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:24 PM · On: The Pillow

k it's dragging. i like the plot but i would like to see more progression.

Reviewer: Shelljayz (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 03:41 AM · On: The Vision

I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story and have been waiting for an update on bated breath, so thank you.  I hope they keep coming.  And Happy Anniversary on the story :)

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:23 AM · On: The Vision

Thank you so much for updating! I love this story so much and am excited to see where you take it!

I especially love the Edward and Bella parts (because I'm one of those people) and the shower scene was freaking hot! Thank you so much for the mental imagery =)

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 11:29 PM · On: The Vision

noo you can't leave it there and you can't let the baddies get broken Edward non nein nada nope :(....

Reviewer: 1greekgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:14 PM · On: The Vision

NIce to have ya back I'm still hangin in there and it's one of my fav stories keep up the good work MUAH!!!!

Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:20 PM · On: The Vision

awesome chapter wants more! ;o)

Reviewer: Jedward (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:45 PM · On: The Vision

so glad you updated, please don't let us wait so long for the next chapter.

This is still one of my all time favorite fics out there.SO keep up the good writing.

Reviewer: LindyP (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:32 AM · On: The Vision

I was so excited to get your update!!!!! Thank you! Looks like E & B are slowly but surely making progress. But I am worried about Bella's dream & Alice's vision. Is that why she ran to get Bella? Or did she have a vision of Bella having a nightmare? And who is coming???? Looking forward to your next update!

LindyP :)

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:34 AM · On: The Vision

Congrats on the nomination :)  We're on the edge of our seats :)

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 04:28 AM · On: The Vision


Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 03:39 AM · On: The Vision

Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter!!  I am so glad for the update!  Ic an't wait to see where this is going!

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 02:46 AM · On: The Vision

I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:58 PM · On: The Vision

can't wait for more

Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 06:32 PM · On: The Vision

I was SO happy to see this story updated!!! It's one of my absolute favorites :)

Reviewer: mandydavis (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 06:18 PM · On: The Vision

Thank you for the update! i've often wondered if you've given up on this one and I BEG that you don't! There are no stories out there right now that are as original as this one and I've been so sad without your regular updates. I know that life can get in the way and sometimes we feel uninsipired but I ask that you please follow through on this story. Thank you for creating a world where I can lose myself for a while, and please keep up the good work!

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