Typical Bella putting herself in potential harms way.  The pain that 'this vampire' has endured I find myself needing to find out about his past.

Alice not foreseeing this hmmm, just how did Bella sneak this past her.

I'm assuming the vampire is Edward? What happened to him? Why won't he eat? I'm thinking some sort of captivity/experimentation form his reactions to Carlisle's examination. Why is he allowing Bella close but not the others? Can he read minds in this? Keep up the great work!!!!

Author's Response:

The vamp is Edward, that is a fair assumption!

 

Thanks for reviewing :)

I realized in my last reveiw I automatically guessed it was Edward, and I'm hoping it is. The ending of this one was just so adorable and well written. The reactions of both 'Edward' and Bella were perfect. Please update soon !

Author's Response:

Yes, it's fair to say that the vampire is Edward at this point.

 

Thanks for reviewing! :)

loving this!

This is a great story!  I'm interested to learn about the backstory of Bella being friends with vampires, and I'm very intrigued about who has had Edward up until this point.  This almost feels like a little bit of an X-men crossover, like people with abilities were being experimented on by the government, etc.  I really dig it!

Author's Response:

Haha, I've considered this story in relation to several things, never once has xmen crossed my mind!  But it's so true, there are definitely some xmen parallels :)

 

Thanks for reviewing!

really great story!!

hope you continue soon=)

XOXO

Perfection.

Wow!  What an intriguing story!  I'm loving this and I can't wait to see where you take us!  You've done an excellent job at building the suspense and the mystery.

Wow. Just wow. XD

 

I've read stories of Human Edward being broken, abused etc but this is one of the only and the best stories where Edward is a vampire and the way he is. I'm so glad AngstGoddess gave me the link to this. It's stories like these that actually made me sign up to twilighed because I usually use FF.net

 

Please update soon

 

Olivia xx

I like this.  Although part of me keeps thinking through the whole thing, "Get some food in that poor boy!"  (Must be the mom in me.)  I look forward to more!

Wow wow wow. This is just amazing. The emotion and the actions, it's just amazing. Now I really think someone should feed Edward, but is that really a good thing? I know they're trying to. But in general, even if it's human, I can't see a paper bag appealing to him more than an animal...Hopefully Carlisle tries that next? Although once he gets some blood in his system he may want Bella's a bit more...Granted, I can't see him trying it....I think.

So I'm guessing Edward's been experimented on in some way? Then I get curious how he was made and all those good questions I'm sure I'm supposed to be curious about. Awesome story. Keep Going!!

Author's Response:

I'm not sure if you're saying animal blood would be more appealing than bagged human blood?

 

Either way, I think they put the human blood in a cup or something.  Just leaving a bag down there wouldn't have been cool of them ;). 

 

Thanks for reviewing!

I'm so enthralled in this story. You seriously captured my attention from the first chapter. Every single detail from BPOV when she's just touching him is amazing. It's heartbreaking and so amazingly written. I can actually feel his fear and her courage. I cannot WAIT to see where you take this! I hope the next update is soon because seriously, I brought this story up in regular conversation today with someone who does not appreciate FF, and I thought to myself.."hmm.... I need to go back to my world of stories... the world outside is soo incredibly boring!" So, in conclusion: LOVE this story, keep it up, and Update soon for my sanity. That is all.

Author's Response:

Haha, RL <<<< FF.  It's so true!

I sit through class and think about how I want to tackle this stuff.. it consumes at least 90% of my thoughts.

Win.

 

Thanks for reviewing!

I know that I am impatient but I can't seem to help it: Any idea of when the next update will be? I check at least once a day to see if you have updated and I really do appreciate knowing when to expect it. Thanks and keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Haha, tomorrow or Thursday.

It's no problem to want an ETA, just know that it's finals week at my university and I'm trying to keep them coming in a timely manner, but I've never been (and will never be) a daily updater. 

So yeah, I'd say Thursday at the latest is my goal, unless something happens............