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Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:44 PM · On: The Exam

This is heart wrenching and beautiful

Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:15 PM · On: The Basement

This is fantastic so far, I can't wait to see where you take us next.

Reviewer: lilroses_89 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:43 PM · On: The Pillow

I just realized I didn't leave a review for this chapter.

I'm really captiviated with the story you're telling here. The subtle hints about Edward make the suspense very real to me.

I liked the pillow idea. Very sweet.

Author's Response:

Gotta give her credit for trying :D

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Hopefully when the hints start to come together it forms something cohesive.  We'll see!

Thanks for reviewing

- Michelle

Reviewer: justbitemeplease (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:10 PM · On: The Pillow

Oh drat...came to the end of the finished I have to wait like everyone else.


I loved this chapter, and loved Bella bringing him a pillow. It all seems so hopeless, but in true Bella fashion, she is not giving up.


Can't wait for more! - Have a great vacation!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hopefully I'll still get the next chapter out in a timely manner, but it's a little more involved and I need to cross reference a few things :K

But I have high hopes!

Thanks for reviewing,


Reviewer: elsvampirsexisteixen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:01 PM · On: The Pillow

Mmm. Messward. This is just amazingly interesting. And for being a filler, I think it's my favorite! :D

Reviewer: elsvampirsexisteixen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:38 PM · On: The Exam

When we reached the top of the staircase, Carlisle turned off the basement light and closed the door behind us.  As he turned the bolt, I heard the growling slowly ease.

He feels better once she, they are gone... But her too... :/

Reviewer: elsvampirsexisteixen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:23 PM · On: The Face

I find Bella's humanity endearing. So Emmett can just shuuuut up. Haha. But nah I love Emmett.

Reviewer: elsvampirsexisteixen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:11 PM · On: The Basement

Oh my Edward I absolutely love this! And I never say OME so that probably shows how much I love this or something. Yep you're amazing. I'm writing this quickly, I would say more but I want to keep reading! :D

Reviewer: elsvampirsexisteixen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:00 PM · On: The Hunt

So I came across this because of angstgoddess003, and I made an accound and everything just so I could read it. Yeah, your summary was that enticing. :D I'm loving it so far! Ugh I sound like a McDonald's commercial...

Author's Response:

Oh! I didn't know you actually had to make an account to read it.  *grumbles* 

But I'm glad you found the summary appealing enough to give it a shot!  Thanks for reviewing (each chapter!), glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:11 PM · On: The Pillow

gosh. talk about depressing!
I love it though:)

with this story, you have shook up the fan fiction world

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to see you're enjoying it!

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:05 PM · On: The Pillow

My second reading.  This is a very compelling story.  We know the vampire!

I've already imagined his bubble bath - for modesty! (hint,hint)

Bellla hand washing his hair and washing his back with a big soft bath sponge.  HINT  :)


Author's Response:

Haha, I guess dropping the bath line got everyone's wheel's turnin'!


Love it!


Thanks for reviewing again,


Reviewer: justbitemeplease (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:05 PM · On: The Next Day

Awesome chapter!!! You are really capturing the intense emotions of the whole situation beautifully. I think I stopped b reathing when she pulled "her" vampire into her arms. Very ,very cool.



Reviewer: TheSweetestThing (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 06:44 AM · On: The Pillow

Awesome stuff...  I'm hooked!  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:23 AM · On: The Pillow

messward... haha. darkward too. <3

Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:12 AM · On: The Next Day


Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:59 AM · On: The Exam


though i'm not a big fan of changing pov's

Author's Response:

Guh.  I hear that, truly I do.


But with the vamp not talking, if I were to stay in BPOV half the story would remain untold.

I'm not a fan of making characters explain everything to the person who's POV it's told in just so that the audience gets a comprehensive picture..

and since technically the vampire is the focal point, it's his story that's being told, it the plot revolves are him -- and since he isn't a free speaking character, the POV changes are necessary.

I think that my explanation might not have made sense,  I can try again at some point :)

Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:48 AM · On: The Face

love it. =)

Reviewer: helenleiten (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:35 AM · On: The Pillow

Too good....I'm really hooked up with this now ;)

Keep up the good work.
I'll wate patiently :) because I'll now the next chapter will be good...
And I hope the answers of the questiones that bella and I share will be reveald soon :)
Your fan Helen :D

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!

While answers will come slowly, they will come nonetheless!

- Michelle

Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:30 AM · On: The Basement

i really like it. i hope he gets better but i also hope that this story will not lose its dark touch.

Reviewer: helenleiten (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:12 AM · On: The Next Day

too good...I really love this story :)

Reviewer: MiixedCurry (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:10 AM · On: The Pillow

I loved it. I mean, shesh. At one point I almost wanted to cry.

Well, Just keep updating, alrighty? =D

Reviewer: helenleiten (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:47 AM · On: The Exam

it was clearly a hit ;)

Reviewer: helenleiten (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 03:23 AM · On: The Face

it's really good!

Reviewer: Jen2112 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:15 AM · On: The Pillow

I love this story. I want to know what happens next!

Reviewer: hexagonalprodigy (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:45 PM · On: The Pillow

this is wonderfully written, and its a gem of a fanfiction. im definitely looking forward to see where this is headed.

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