Yeah I love the direction that this is headed! And I'm really enjoying this story so far although from the summary I never thought I would, it very enjoyable to read and its very well-done. I look forward to the next update and them fixing Edward...although I'm not sure I'm happy that will effect the Edward/Bella relationship. : /

Author's Response:

Eeeee.. the summary.  I read it so freaking much and every time I wonder how I should change it... If you have any suggestions, you're more than welcome to PM :) 

I'm so glad you gave it a shot despite your first impressions!  What ended up making you read it?

And yeah.. the dynamic will surely change at some point, but I hope it ends up being a change for the better! :D

Thanks for reviewing

- Michelle

This is really great!  I love how you're pacing the story.  I'm glad your keeping your secrets until the last moment *wink* Makes it exciting!  Love it, keep it up!  Can't wait to read any other stories you come up with.

♥♥

Author's Response:

Gah, thank you!!!

I'm glad you're okay with the pacing... and it would lose all of the fun if I let the secrets out! :P

Thanks for reviewing,

Michelle

I love it...the story is awsome and i can't wait for more!!!GOOD JOB!!!

:)   Write more soon please.   SOOOOON!   I'm afraid that I really don't have any constructive criticism to give you, because your writing is amazing and pretty much flawless.   Haha, so, my criticisim is that I can't find anything to criticize you on?  Except for, of course, the obvious fact that I'm impatient and want to know what happens next!

Thank you effusively for the new chapter.  I am HOOKED and I have e-mailed seven buddies about VITB!   I so appreciate your hard work !

We love Brave compassionate Bella! We want to hug the vampire :}

 

Author's Response:

Wow, thank YOU! You deserve a vampire hug for that.......!

 

Thanks for reviewing!

the intensity of the story is so freakin thick

Great chapter. I only wish it had come sooner :) Keep up the great work and I cant wait until Edward is talking.

Author's Response:

Sorry 'bout that.  I think I made it in 5 or 6 days though, so really not so bad, considering it was finals week!

Thanks for reviewing!

Oooh.. progress.

Its very insteresting.. on to the next chapter!

Awww.. I like the story. Its different than anything else Ive ever read.

And, poor.. well Im guessing its Edward lol..

Author's Response:

Fairly safe guess!

 

Thanks for reviewing,

Michelle

The very best thing about your writing for me is how you mix in little bits of humor in this very serious story. Like Alice telling Bella not to be so human or Bella promising to kill herself if she did trip down the stairs to save Alice the trouble....or Bella attributing so many human qualities to her vampire. I was so in hopes that Bella would be able to get him to drink the blood and it was horrible when he started gagging and stuff. Poor Bella....she wants to help so bad! To be honest I didn't completely understand the stuff about the synthetic inhibitors but I'm sure it would take a lot of explaining to get me to fully understand so I'm just taking your word at face value for it. Really hope Carlisle can fix that for him. Also loved the little interaction between Bella and Emmett. Brother bear moments like those never fail to warm my heart! This story has risen quite quickly to become one of my absolute favorites! I can't wait for more of it!

Author's Response:

Yes, BellaxEmm interaction is almost always light in fics.. and in a fic this dark, a little light is a pleasant change!

I'm glad you enjoy the bits of humor, thank you for reviewing!

- Michelle

I love your story, love the pace and the fact that you are builidng to something great.  Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

OUTSTANDING!  I'm so excited to read more.  Bella w/ a purpose, helping a wounded animal back to health - how sweet!  I have so queries about the furture of ?Edward? 

Keep up the great writing!  It's so well written, easy to follow and suspensefull.  I'm glad they finally got some soap and water to him, I'd been aching to do that right away.  What if they put a couch/bed downstairs for Bella so she could stay w/ him even while she sleeps. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing :)

There very well might already be things of that nature downstairs, but Bella gravitates toward the corner because she's only down there for him... if she were to go to a couch, I'm not sure if she'd be able to take him with her.

I think last night she stayed down with him overnight.  It's sort of ambiguous and left up to interpretation, but in my head she stayed with him overnight ;)

- Michelle