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Reviewer: jazsaimin (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:42 AM · On: The Trial

this is majorly addicting.

no joke, you are my dealer now.

i am eating your lines up like water, this is amazing. MORE MORE MORE!!!



Author's Response:

Bah, this is.. exactly.. your brand.. of heroin.

I still can't resist it.  Like 9k times later I still type it and laugh.

Mmkay, ch.9 is up!

Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: Sic Et Non (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:17 AM · On: The Trial

Okay, first Im gonna say sorry. I dont know if I need to but I feel like I should. I know Im being incredibly impaitent and always telling you to hurry up and update and I just want to say that if you feel pressure from me then thats really not what I wanted. I think this story is amazing/brilliant/unique/genius and lots of other nice adjectives. And Im very much hooked so its my impaitence and want for the next installment that urges you to hurry up. So, sorry about that. Like Ive said I think this story is one of a kind and you have write it at your own speed. Its your story. Just know that while Im telling you to update faster or the like I mean it in the best possible way. And that it wont matter how long you take coz as soon as I know youve updated Ill be reading it.

And I loved this chapter, I liked seeing the situation from Alice's point of view and knowing that she backs Bella. It makes the whole situation even more interesting. And Bella's vamp is learning to trust her even more. Thats good. You wonder now how far that trust will go or if theres going to be any backlash. I hope not.  Brilliant writing and I hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Haha no worries, I'm new enough to writing FF that the 'update soons' don't bother me in the least yet :D

Ch. 9 is basically done and with the beta, but I'm not sure how long it'll take her (she's out of town)..

In the meantime -- head over to the AU forum to talk about it???? :P

Thanks for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it!

- Michelle

Reviewer: twilight_stupor (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:42 AM · On: The Trial

I just stayed up way too late reading this entire story.  But once I started I just couldn't put it down.  You have made the situation with Edward so intriguing, and literally, my stomach has a pit in it just waiting to see what happens next.  As a pharmacy student-- I commend you on your use of pharmacology in this story!  :)  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Cougar (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 11:54 PM · On: The Trial

Very interesting-I look forward to more.

Reviewer: ddjayde (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Trial

Great job. As always I am on the edge of my seat. Cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:46 PM · On: The Trial

Love this story!  Quit reading what I've written and go write more.  Shoo!

Reviewer: angstward1978 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:53 PM · On: The Basement

Oh poor Edward!  What awful life has he endured?  You have me hooked...

Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:03 PM · On: The Trial

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. This one captures my interest and I wonder what happened to Edward. I love how compassionate Bella is in here and can't wait to see what happens when their relationship continues to grow. Please update soon because I am practically dying to read more of what comes next. Thanks for coming up with this wonderful fanfiction!

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:08 PM · On: The Trial

So I've been waiting to read this story, with the threats of dark themes - hoping I could come in when it started to look up.  Man I should have waited longer!  I feel exhausted from all the pain, but I love it.  Your writing is excellent. 



Author's Response:

Haha, who knows how long that could be!

I'm glad you broke down and read it! :) And that you're enjoying it depsite a whole boatload of dark :D

 

Thanks for reviewing

-Michelle

Reviewer: SkyBlueHearts (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:33 AM · On: The Trial

Ooooh, I wonder if Bella will sacrifice a little blood?

Just caught up with the story, and I'm LOVING it btw. Slow, but it's building well.
I'm 99.9999999999999999% sure the vampire is our Eddie, but you're yet to even mention his hair colour...

Go on Bells, kiss him for a little comfort :D

Or maybe just give him another sponge bath.

I will love you forever if you post again soon. *Rates 10*



Author's Response:

That is pretty damn confident, if ya ask me!  We'll find out soon enough :P

And hey -- I'm pretty sure bella mentioned it was dark! :) you think if it were edward the drugs and lack of food could make it lose it's awesomeness?  j/w.

Thank for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it!

- Michelle

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:33 AM · On: The Trial

Awwwww, Edward.  Does he understand Bella?  This is so sad.  I just keep waiting for him to either bite her accidentally, or break her in some way, or just to even say something.  I bet he says her name.  Oh, what is he going to say first??  I'm excited.  Man, but how is Carlise gowing to get a sample from his stomach?  I don't think Bella is going to be able to do that.  Maybe she can give him some water and he can throw it up.  Hmmmm.   Why is it that women always find these pitiful creatures called men and try to nurse them into healthy, well-adjusted beings?  Are we saps are what?! All I know is that I am now addicted to this story and will see it through until the end.  You are lovely, Michelle.  Thank you for such a beautifully written piece of fan fic.  Looking forward to the next installment.   



Author's Response:

"I just keep waiting for him to either bite her accidentally, or break her in some way, or just to even say something. "

One of those 3 things.. might happen rather soon. :)

So - the stomach thing -- the antidote was dissolved in alcohol, and his body would only keep down the drug part, so in theory, the vamp would eventually have to vomit the alcohol part (not the drug part).. make sense?  Hopefully. 

Glad you're still enjoy it! Thanks for reviewing again! :D

-Michelle

 

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:04 AM · On: The Venom

“Don’t get eaten,” he whispered into my ear.  I could feel the smile on his lips and I hugged him back.  “Crazy lady,” he mumbled as he pulled away, guiding me toward the basement door.  I squeezed his hand as tight as I could, looking up at him hopefully.  “Couldn’t even feel it,” he smirked.  “You’ll have to do better than that when Dracula flips his shit if you want to make it out alive…” BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! 

 God, i love him...can you tell?  You have the essence of Emmett down perfectly.  Wow, i'm loving the scientific aspect you are bringing to the story.  You write very well.  This story has just captured me and won't let me go.  Its 2:00 am and I have to get up soon but I can't stop now.  Dammit.  I didn't want to start reading another fic because I get so anxious waiting for updates.  How am I going to stand going even one day without knowing how Bella is progressing with our sad and abused Edward?!  One more chap to go...

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:37 AM · On: The Pillow

Oh man, Emmett is freaking halarious.  And i was laughing outloud at picturing this emaciated Edward, his head slowly sinking into a feather pillow.  Oh man.  Did I tell you I love this story?  Well, i do.  Can't wait for the spongebath! LoL...moving on...

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:22 AM · On: The Next Day

Awww that is awesome.  Good boy Edward. LoL.  I feel like he is an abused little puppy.  Alice just up and leaves huh?  Wonder what she saw.  Carrying on...

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:06 AM · On: The Exam

For some reason I thought it was only three chapters long.  Duh. Hahaha.  Wow, I wonder what kind of freaky experimenting has been happening to our dear Edward.  Its so sad to think that he has been mistreated like this.  And Bella, my word.  She is obsessed!  I wonder what Edward thinks about her.  Hmm...reading on... 



Author's Response:

3 chapters?!! Strange.. wonder why you thought it was only 3?  3 seems like an odd number. 

It is most certainly more than 3.. ee.

And yeah, Bella is not so wise.. but maybe she is???

Hopefully you're enjoying it so far! Thank you for reviewing again!

- Michelle

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:44 PM · On: The Face

Oh my lord, I am LOVING this story.  It is very original.  Bella is so nuts, but you can't help but love her for it.  I'm scared that any minute, Edward is going to snap and feed on her.  The suspense is the best part.  Can't wait for an update!!!

Reviewer: Cendy Hale Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:43 PM · On: The Trial

I love your story! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: venusenvygrrl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:53 PM · On: The Trial

This is such an intriguing and different plotline! Great job! Keep it comin :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :D

Reviewer: Pumpkinette (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:28 PM · On: The Trial

I am truly loving this story, its kinda got that on the edge of your seat feeling to it. I really cant wait to see whats gunna happen next, also the science stuff isnt bad at all, it actually makes it all the more interesting. Great story so far, I truly am excited to see where this is going to end up!

Angel....



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that the science is going over well.  Yesterday when I was reflecting on the story I sort of had a 'WTF?' moment in regards to going so deep with it.. so it makes me happy that it's actually possibly helping the plot some! :D

 

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

- Michelle

Reviewer: Pumpkinette (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:03 PM · On: The Hunt

Im sucked in, hehe very good first chapter I love it already!



Author's Response:

So glad it managed to suck ya in early! 

I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: melizzymoo (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:08 AM · On: The Trial

poor poor vampire. =( this plot line totally intrigues me though. i'm loving it. are you ever going to mention how bella got to be friends with the cullen family in the first place? i'm curious about that. but other than that, i'm ready and waiting anxiously for the next chapter. =] 



Author's Response:

Yep, I'll most definitely mention it at some point :D It's probably gonna be hella anticlimactic........... but I guess it is what it is! :D

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you for reviewing!

- Michelle

Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:52 AM · On: The Basement

An interesting premise!  I can't wait to find out what happened to Edward and how the road to recovering is going to be travelled.  Will we also find out how Bella knows that the Cullens are vampires?



Author's Response:

Yes.. although I can safely say, not before chapter 9 :P

It's not a crucial element of the story, so it won't be a big huge unveiling, but I will definitely tell how she came to know about them before the story ends!

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you for reviewing

- Michelle

Reviewer: struck_at_the_sky (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:55 AM · On: The Trial

What a wonderful story! I started reading this last night after a friend of mine insisted that I check it out. I am very much thankful that she reminded me of it.

You're pacing this story perfectly and your ability to create the desperate ambience surrounding the characters, not to mention their turmoil, is refreshing. I absolutely love this story so far. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's beautifully written and definitely a story that I plan to continue reading. Thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm glad it didn't disappoint you!

Thank you for reviewing (and giving the story a shot!)

- Michelle

Reviewer: lambcullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:47 AM · On: The Trial

Oh, every time he put his head on bella's lap, I want to weep. Its so beautiful. I'm loving the science, adds a whole sci fi aspect....yes im a geek! an overused phrase but - I can't wait for more....



Author's Response:

Ahh thanks for reviewing each chapter! 

And yes, it's getting dangerously close to full out, star-trek meets roswell science fiction and.. I'm not sure that I even wanted to go there?? So toning down the science pronto! :P

- Michelle

Reviewer: lambcullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:24 AM · On: The Venom

i think this was my fav chapter so far. I'm actually enjoying the baby steps immensly.... i can't tell you right now how much im loving it....thank you



Author's Response:

Sponge bath?? Big answer?? Trust build??

I'm very happy that one of the later ones is your favorite! Thanks for reviewing (x8?)

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