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Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:57 PM · On: The Sunset
I'm actually very sad at this point, I've run out of story to read. But oh well, there will be more and the mystery will be revealed. And don't worry, I'm perfectly alright with this guy being nude. It only makes sense.
I love Bella's moment with him and how he might not even remember the sunset. That's just hard.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Author's Response: Not nude anymore! But I was perfectly fine with it, as well ;)
Sorry you ran out of chapters, I've been loving your reviews!
-Michelle
Reviewer: Evil Black Poppies (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:53 PM · On: The Basement
Awwwwww! Ohmygod, this is sooo cool! But is he in peices of slightly in peices?
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:28 PM · On: The Sunset
I thought it was kind of sweet that Bella put pants on Edward. I love that Edward feels same with Bella. I can't wait for more, I love this story.
Author's Response: I agree! While it may not have been important to Edward, I think it's the idea behind the pants that makes it necessary.
Glad you're enjoying it!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:20 PM · On: The Bedroom
I have to say that this is the first heart warming chapter that I've seen in this story. It looks as though things are starting to look up for our vampire who's name I think I know.
I really love the depth of the connection between Bella and her vamp and how jealous she was of Rosalie.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Reviewer: aquariantwin (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:37 PM · On: The Sunset
I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:20 PM · On: The Sunset
I'm afraid he'll leave. if he is sitting up then soon he will have enough power to leave and that will crush bella.
Pity you had to put clothes on him...I don't know why everyone doesn't like a naked vamp ;)
Author's Response: Lol I don't know either? It's such an odd thing, wanting him clothed. I'd keep him naked ;)
He's definitely getting strong enough, so we'll see.
-Michelle
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:37 PM · On: The Sunset
Loved it, like always.
Imma wonderin what's up with Alice and I'm lovin the BxE interaction(:
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:36 PM · On: The Sunset
I love this story!! but I really wish that Rose wasn't such a bitch. I hope that Edward really starts to get better and they are able to communicate with him!! Post more soon!!~!
Author's Response: Heh, I'm trying to keep her canon-y.. but we'll see :)
-Michelle
Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:15 PM · On: The Sunset
Wonderful as always. This is definitely one of the stories I look forward to all the time!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reviewing
-Michelle
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:55 PM · On: The Sunset
This was one of the most romantic chapters I've ever read in a fancfic! Honestly!
It also gave us a lot of info. It is clear more than ever that he recognises Bella and even needs her presence. It was so comforting to realise that, so we know that the feelings are being developed both ways.
Also, he is getting stronger!! Stronger enough to follow a few of his wills like lying on Bella's lap! That was the best. It made me cry and this is not something that happens often.
And of course Carlile's suspisions that he might have special powers which allow him to know when any sort of confrontation is about to happen. Maybe he can read minds! I don't know from where I took this idea from but sounds like a good idea, don't you think? *roll my eyes*
Anyway... that was a great chapter and I am looking forward to read the next one...
well done to you!
All the best,
Monique
PS-> what is up with Rosalie? If I was Bella I would be sooo angry!
Author's Response: Wow, that's so flattering! No lemons, no kiss, no words, and yet it can still be so sweet! I love that!
LOL, and yes.. MAAAAAAAAAYBE he's a mind reader! That is an interesting thought COMPLETELY OUT OF LEFT FIELD! nuts :)
Thanks for reviewing
-Michelle
p.s. bella is pissed. hopefully she doesn't kill someone. :)
Reviewer: SilverSeaGull (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:55 PM · On: The Sunset
Oh, he moved. That's so beautiful. Small steps, V, small steps.
I had gone with the last reason for him to be naked. I didn't think he cared, although it might bother everyone else's sensibilities. Still though, It'd nice to think fo him dressed; nake people always make me feel awfully cold.
Okay, well, maybe not always.
Author's Response: I agree with the last reason, it's my biggest one, as well. But TONS of people ask, so I figured I'd throw out a few reasons via a/n - let everyone know at once :)
And yes, it'll help the humanizing process.. thing. Yanno. No more animal, self worth inducing, that kind of stuff :)
Thanks for reviewing
-Michelle
Reviewer: starsplash (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:19 PM · On: The Sunset
YEAH!! He is getting better!! Can he talk? I can't wait to read what happens next! I hope you update soon!!!
Author's Response: Well, if he can, there's gotta be a reason that he's not.
We'll see :)
-Michelle
Reviewer: lilroses_89 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:00 PM · On: The Sunset
Michelle,
I think this may be your most beautiful chapter yet.
Edward is taking small strides and it's wonderful. I love that he squeezed her hand as a signal for her not leave when she had to go to the bathroom. Him putting his head in her lap was ADORABLE.
But, still this chapter wasn't all fluff. I think you left some great hints for future chapters. Edward's sensitivity to his eyes was mentioned once again. Alice and Jasper are actually considering what Bella's feelings for Edward may be -something that Bella has tried to avoid doing. How Bella found about the Cullen's was also hinted at.
All in all, you're doing a fantastic job with the suspense and leaving enough subtle clues for the reader to engaged. I love reading stories with this kind of pacing -it makes it really fun to track the progress of the characters.
Loved this: It wasn’t a smile, but it was close.
Beautiful job, hon. =)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! I was so nervous :)
It was so dangerously close to fluff :) But it's like dark fluff, so I let it slide ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
-Michelle
Reviewer: ejh0904 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:54 PM · On: The Sunset
This was my favorite chapter thus far. I love that Edward is becoming more himself now, and that's he's reaching out to Bella - slowly - but in his own way. I'm not sure if your Edward was ever the vampire Edward that we know from canon, but if he was, I'm very sure he'll appreciate Bella clothing him again, at least eventually.
Looking very forward to his next feeding and hopefully next improvement. I hope if anyone's looking for him, they do not find him. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: We'll find out if he's been Edward ever -- yanno. All will be revealed! :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this, thank you for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: mcc101180 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:46 PM · On: The Sunset
That was great. So touching. The nakedness totally made sense but I am glad that Bella took some action to cover him up. It would've been a little weird for her to be snuggling up with him on a regular basis with him being naked all the time. Curious to see who Alice saved Bella from. As always looking forward to what's next.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's time for him to be clothed, I agree!
She's snuggled nakedward for long enough, time for her to get some clothes on the vamp :( As much as we may miss him!
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:43 PM · On: The Trial
Don't worry about a thing, the science was sound to me and made perfect sense. I always love it when they put science into stories, even if the science is faulty I always find it wonderful.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:35 PM · On: The Sunset
awwww so cute!
Reviewer: Killacali (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:50 PM · On: The Sunset
Cant wait to hear what his first words are to Bella!!!!!!!!!! :) I'm giddy with anticipation, you already have me hooked :) Take your time and I will definetly read whatever comes next!
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:08 PM · On: The Sunset
* squeak* *faints*
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:49 PM · On: The Sunset
oh omy freaking gosh , i see development . first off i'm happy he finally has clothes on. and i and ECSTATIC he is finally trusting bella and comin closer to her. so so so happy. update reeeaaalll soon . i am addicted to ur updates. sout my thirst.
Author's Response: Definitely development!
Reviewer: mistressbionerd (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:31 PM · On: The Sunset
OK, what's got Jasper and Alice on edge? It's making me nervous. Also, was Bella attacked by a vampire? I'm referring to the part including "if Alice had come just thirty seconds later". Is that when she met the Cullens? Grr. I know I'll get the answers, but I have to wait to get them! Ack!
Loved, loved, loved Edward putting his head in Bella's lap!! I really had to suppress the squeee because I was reading at work.
Great chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's likely that that's when she found out -- but we'll get further into that in the future!
Glad you liked this one!
- Michelle
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:27 PM · On: The Sunset
I loved the fact that he intiated coming over to sit with Bella, then he laid his head on her lap....I almost cheered!!! So it kind of sounds like Alice saved Bella from being bitten by another vampire??? Will you go into how the Cullens and Bella came to know each other? I love this story!!! It was neet hearing from Carlisle to see that this whole situation is tough on him too..and that it is starting to wear on him.....that he is just as frustrated by the constant resistance from Bella as she is by the constant lectures from him. Ok I think that is it for now........oh yeah, you rock!! Thanks for yet another installation of my "fix" haha! I'm a dork I know but I love your work!!
Author's Response: It does seem that way! I'd actually venture to say that was the night she learned about vamps "the night when fantasy and reality merged" yanno.. but more will be said on that!
I'm glad you liked this one, thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:15 PM · On: The Sunset
A really nice chapter. I'm glad things are progressing.
Reviewer: RushGirl (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:03 PM · On: The Sunset
I never want the chapter to end.. Great job, love this story.
Reviewer: Spike82 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 11:24 AM · On: The Sunset
So sweet.
More Please... ^^
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