I am so sad for him!!!  I am glad that he is getting better, and I only hope that he and Bella continue to form their bond.  I am glad that he finally spoke to her, but how heartbreaking.  I wanna just say, 'screw Charlie and curfews' but I am hoping that their seperations will be for the best.

 

I just want to hold this Edward *ahem* I mean vampire...it's like you can feel his pain.  :(

 

 

Author's Response:

I hope they continue to grow, as well, but we'll see x)

Curfews are necessary, sadly.. Well, maybe not, but he'd be remiss if he didn't lay down the law, IMO :)

Yes, not edward, VAMPIRE ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

Everytime I see there is a new update to this story, the first thing that comes out of my mouth is "yay"!. Of course I'm happy the vampire is getting better - you've still kept him and Bella on a relatively equal footing with each other but building such an intimate connection on it.

Love it.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you still get excited about this one! Time to start gettin down to business.. ee.

I'm glad you see equality here! Right now I sort of see BElla as holding all the cards, but, there are definitely aspects of equality that I could pick out if I must.. :)

Thanks for the review!

Awwww, I feel like crying along with her, really. I absolutely adored this update, every line of it. Great work!!

That is so sweet!  I just love this story.  And even though we all know this vampire's  name is EDWARD, it is wonderfully enjoyable to read about his slow but steady progress.  And just think what he'll be capable of when he is fully recovered - ohh la la~!

Author's Response:

LoL, well, not everyone knows that! you'd be surprised :P

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review!

Awesome, im addicted....please keep writing.

when comes the new one i càn not wait it is really good story

Agh, dang. I hate when I'm going good, reading a story, and then BAM! I'm at the last posted chapter. Dang. Now I have to wait.

Author's Response:

Haha yeah, it's no good!

Luckily I should be able to post ch.12 within the next couple days!

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!

- Michelle

HOLY CRAP!!!!!

its honestly 5:45am on a sunday night/monday morning!

luckily i dont have school tomorrow ( yay long weekend) but DAMNN

ive been reading this since...12???

ITS SO GOOD!! like HOLY SHIT!

i hope you dont get fed up with this anytime soon!

XOO

Oh my gosh, I'm am so completely and irrevocably in love with this story, its not even funny.

I was on The Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster site and I saw that Ninapolitan reccomended your story, curious, I decided to take a look, and holy shit (pardon my french :D) this story is amazing. I can't help but feel for broken Edward and the last part of this chapter made me cry! I love Bella and Edward's relationship, I love love love how she is the only one that calms him (take THAT Rosalie! muwahahahaha!) The mystery you've created surrounding his character really pulls the reader in, and I can't help but guess at what has happened to poor Edward! Oh gosh, I'm still having trouble getting over how perfect the last part of this chappie was. I'm so glad that he trusts her! ugh, and I'm still crying like a baby. -sighs- I am so excited to read more that I am actually shaking! hehe, this story has already made it into my top five favorites! its so good! You are a great author with real talent for writing, and this story you've created is amazing. Truly amazing. I am so exxcited to read more, and am going to be checking my inbox like a madwoman until the next update!

Can't wait to read more! :D

love, smile for the paparazzi

That chapter, and in fact this story, is all kinds of awesome!!  I just love it.  I'm delighted the vampire is finally learning to trust, to relax.  I can't wait for more! :o)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it!

- Michelle

I am SO addicted to this story! I cannot wait for Edward to get healthy and when he actually starts talking! I keep getting more and more excited each time Bella sees him. I mean...it's so sweet.

I'm eager for Edward to get to know the Cullen's. This is going to be fun and interesting.

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response:

I'm SO SO SO excited for the vamp to get to know the Cullens!  That's easily the part that I most anticipate writing, I hope it works out :P

Thanks for the review

- Michelle

I started reading this based on all of the wonderful suggestions from other fanfiction authors.  I must say it definitely does not disappoint.  This is such a different take on Edward/Bella, and I absolutely love it.  I am really looking forward to discovering how Bella befriended the Cullens and how Edward ended up hurt and vulnerable.  Excellent story!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad it didn't disappoint the recs!

Thanks for the review :)

- Michelle