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Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:33 PM · On: The Hunt
Sounds great so far!
Reviewer: 2angels_mama (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:56 AM · On: The Bath
I'm so freaking happy he's getting better! I can't wait to read more!! Soon!!
Reviewer: 2angels_mama (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:30 AM · On: The Sunset
You have captured so many different emotions with this story with such ease. Well done.
Reviewer: Polyphany (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:59 AM · On: The Bath
Amazing story so far!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Purplestars (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:28 AM · On: The Bath
Ohh crappp! My jaw dropped when he spoke. And not only that, but for him to say "Don't leave me?" that's heartbreaking. I'm sort of without words here. It's unbelievable. My eyes got watery.
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:13 PM · On: The Basement
I have been tempted t read this story for a while but for some reason or another I hadn't got around to it. I have read several people on the IVO and Wide Awake thread rave about it --- so I decided to give it a try. After just 2 chapters----I can tell that it will have to be added to my favorites. It is very different & I like that. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: AboveTheWeather (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:10 PM · On: The Bath
Yay Talkward! Yeah, doubt that one will catch on. But I'm still so diggin this story. Curious to find out more about his past and how he ended up like he did.
I think I must have forgotten the layout of the bed in relation to the window and door cuz I can't quite picture it in my head. But don't worry about explaining it if you don't have the time. I promise I'd rather get another chapter sooner. :-)
Keep it up!
Author's Response: It's actually just my own invention of a guest bedroom -- as there are no beds in the Cullen house until they get one for bella, yanno?
So it's my own personal layout. I'll totally draw it sometime :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: The Hunt
oh pls update, he finally said somthin yes lol, well done pls pls pls update soon soon soon!
Reviewer: Linda cullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:08 PM · On: The Bath
Aaahhhh, you cant stop there. Please whrite the next chapter soon. Very , very soon.
Reviewer: jerrilane (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:38 PM · On: The Bath
Oh my God! I love this story!! You are a fantastic writer, and I am so looking forward to an update. Please don't make us wait too long!
Reviewer: Say It_Out Loud (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:01 AM · On: The Bath
I thought the pace of this story was going to kill me at first. I was so impatient to find out what was going on. But you were sooooo right. It is proceeding exactly as it should. It is a great story! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Peyton (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:31 PM · On: The Bath
very happy the vamp is getting better!
Reviewer: sashasimon (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:53 PM · On: The Bath
I am so happy the vamp is getting better! I'm not opposed to a tragedy (I don't always need a happy ending) but it's nice to have a bit of relief. I looove your story and can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:00 AM · On: The Bath
YAY!!! HE TALKED!!!! Next chapter up as soon as possible please, I'm completely hooked? when is he going to tell them his name? have the Volturi been experimenting on him? or a secret government agency? or wolves? arrrrgh, so many theories!!!
Reviewer: omgzombies (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:54 AM · On: The Bath
He spoke! Yaaaay. Fantastic update, I teared up. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 09:23 AM · On: The Bath
Wow that chapter made me tear up at the part where bella had to leave wow your an awesome writer. I can't wait for another chapter.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 09:13 AM · On: The Sunset
Yay i love edward soo much he's so cute.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 09:02 AM · On: The Bedroom
YAy naked messward i'm sad basementwards gone but happy that he's healthier.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:45 AM · On: The Antidote
I don't care if it is vague this is my new favorite story. It is way too good. I love it.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:34 AM · On: The Trial
Aw so sweet edward and bella i love them so much.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:22 AM · On: The Venom
i love that you spent alot of time researching for the story. It was so cute that bella was a little bit embarissed at having to clean his groin.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:06 AM · On: The Pillow
Wow messward is so cute and vunerable i love him more than the edward in the book. I love how you write it like with showing that he doesn't really like bella but then he does want her their. Great job.
Reviewer: SkyBlueHearts (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:01 AM · On: The Bath
AHHH! I JUST REALISED YOU HAVE EVER SO CRAFTILY AVOIDED SLIPPING
DETAILS ABOUT WHAT THE VAMPIRE LOOKS LIKE!!
I swear, if you do some fancy 'unseen turn of events' and make him James or something, I'll break down and cry.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:56 AM · On: The Next Day
Aw i feel so bad for edward and his hunger. Can't wait to get on with the next chapter.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:50 AM · On: The Exam
Aw that was so sad when bellas heart was breaking. Stupid, freaking vampires(aside from edward) not letting bella stay with edward.
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