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Reviewer: twilighteuphoria27 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:50 PM · On: The Balcony
I'm not surprised it was Edward. Well, it kinda had to be Edward. If it wasn't him, all your readers, including myself would hunt you down and make you change it. lol
Love your story!!! I squirm everytime I see an alert. :)
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:28 PM · On: The Balcony
I'm not surprised at all. Are the voluturi responsible for what happened to edward?
Author's Response: Not surprised at all?! Pah. My secret keeping fail astounds me ;)
It's always possible that this is a result of the Volturi, ya never know :)
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:18 PM · On: The Balcony
Wow, good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:13 PM · On: The Balcony
i had a shitty long ass day today but your update made it all better!!!...yay for edward and bella!!!..absolutely amazing chapter....i wonder about Alice sometimes, but im so in love with this Edward that I tend to just focus on him and Bella....My mind is going crazy with all the possibilities of him beign turned and then waking up in a cage...oh god..poor Edward with 90+ years of being locked up...ohh god...my heart breaks for him...
im literally giddy now thanks to you...cant wait for more...:)!!!!!
Author's Response: What're you wondering about Alice? Just about her vision, or is there something that I could actually clear up without busting the future plot points? x)
PM me if you have a specific question that isn't necessarily future plot related :D
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I LOVE seeing reviews that indicate this story making their day better. As angsty as this stuff is, I absolutely love that a few words from basementward can put a smile on your face! :D
Thanks for the review bb.
Michelle
Reviewer: LovelyNette16 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:08 PM · On: The Balcony
No surprise here that it was Edward, but if it were anyone else I would just be disapointed! I love what you are doing, so don't stop! This is amazing!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the review :)
I anticipated that it wasn't a surprise, but I had to go and put it out there anyway ;)
Reviewer: bekanz (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:49 PM · On: The Balcony
I was semi suprised it was Edward, more like relieved I guess cause I was hoping that since everything else was the same the name wouldn't be changed. Honestly this story just keeps getting better and better, the little twists in the story are amazing and I LOVE the fact that he's talking to her now! Aaah hope your feeling good about it cause you should be feeling fabuloussss about it! You've put the biggest smile on my face =)
keep up the amazing work! peace
Author's Response: Surprised?! Awesome, my fail A/Ns did not deter you! :D
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:41 PM · On: The Balcony
Just so you know, i think you did a great job in early chaps describing the whole blood lust thing and not being able to drink it...never any confusion about that.
My favorite fic
as usual.
can wait for the update.......poor edward, in a cage.
you left me sad.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
I'm sorry I left you sad, I'm a little sad, myself.
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:39 PM · On: The Balcony
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Pari625 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:26 PM · On: The Balcony
This story is SOOOO good. Please update soon. I adore your writing and your story!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:06 PM · On: The Balcony
OMG i just read all 13 chapters tonight i love this story amazing i cant wait to see what happens next. Your writing is trully wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you decided to give it a shot! :D
Reviewer: Reader-Megan (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: The Balcony
Again, awesome chapter. I loved it. I'm loving Edward's progress, it makes my heart smile but its also heartwrenching at the same time listening to his sad memories. I'm guessing that he isn't 107 years old here, probably a lot younger...? Thanks so much for the quick updates, this fanfic is easily on my top 5 WIP favorites.
Author's Response: Well, his parents died of influenza; make of that what you will.
I'm so glad you're enjoying, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: chrystalplayer (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Balcony
omggggg cliff hanger or wat!!!!
i need moreeee lol its really really good
i cant wait to see what else you hav in store
for us =]
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:55 PM · On: The Balcony
Well first off I just want to commend you on yet another great chapter. I was not shocked the vampire was Edward, however I did not expect him to tell her so much. The intimacy of their relationship is palpable, and awesome. I hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: I think the fact that he's well fed helps him a lot, but we shall see :D
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:40 PM · On: The Balcony
No, not surprised. A little relieved actually. One question though, now that they removed the feeding tube, and he still won't drink, how are they going to feed him?
Author's Response: Reinsert?
I'll get into WHY they removed the tube next chapter.. :)
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:31 PM · On: The Balcony
Sorry to say that your not that good at keeping a secret! I knew it was Edward since chapter 2 when you outed him as the vamp...
Big shocker.
This is my favorite chapter. I couldnt stop reading it for a minute (even though I had to pee really bad) & nothing could stop me from finishing it - not even my 6 year old cousin who was having a fit over not being able to eat more ice cream. Not many fanfictions can do that for me.
I guess your special:) [(not special ed)]
Keep up the good work & I'll keep reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: LoL, thanks for reviewing ;)
I know that everyone knows, no worries. It isn't a surprise to me that people knew it was him :P The summary even tells, yanno?
Anyway -- I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! As always, thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sally_Deluca (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The Balcony
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I have a lot of stories on my favorites list but this is one that I get utterly giddy about when I see there is an update ;-)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I get pretty giddy when I get reviews, myself ;)
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:26 PM · On: The Balcony
AMAZING chapter!!! My heart leap when I saw that it was posted. It didn't disappoint. I love that he is talking. And he is Edward. I am looking forward to hearing more of his story and seeing him continue to heal.
Reviewer: Twilight Addict (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:24 PM · On: The Balcony
Fascinating story! I'm thrilled that Edward is finally talking. I'm dying to know what Alice saw in her visions!
Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:06 PM · On: The Hunt
I kinda loved the different POV's.
I wished I had got to your story earlier so I could give some inspirational or some raving reivews.
I really like this.
I don't know, if Edward and Bella are together?
Are they aren't they?
No one mentioned him once!
Does Bella just know they're all vamps because of her friendship with Alice?
I clicked on the icon from someone's signature on the forum, so If a lot of these answers are in the summary, I'm sorry!
Haha, I really liked it.
:D
Reviewer: sothliche (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:05 PM · On: The Balcony
This story is amazing! I love what you've done with the characters while still staying true to who they really are. Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've tried to keep their base traits the same while tweaking their outward actions just a little, I think their characterizations are similar to that of SM, at least that's what I was going for! :D
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: bp88 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:55 PM · On: The Balcony
Can't wait for the next chappy! hope u update soon! once again i'm still addicted and can not wait to find out what Alice and the Cullens are hiding from Bella! - Though I think I can guess!
Author's Response: There are a lot of guesses floating around :) We'll find out!
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:46 PM · On: The Balcony
"in a cage"?????? Oh, what did someone do to our Edward???? Now what will happen??? OK, I don't think I've ever reacted quite this way to a story. Bella is so incredibly brave. And there's so much we don't know - ok, he's Edward, but are bella's thoughts blocked to him or can he hear everyone's thoughts? Great, great story!!
Author's Response: It would appear that someone did something not very kind to him, IMO :)
And the rest of those questions.. they'll be answered in time!
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:44 PM · On: The Balcony
Omg. I dont even know what to say... just... wow. This story seriously keeps getting better and better, and its good because there are no other stories (that I know of) that have a similar storyline, which is good because we dont know what to expect. I can't wait to find out what actually happened to him.
Oh and I wasn't that surprised to find out it was Edward, although I did have the stupidest thought go through my head before I began the chapter. I thought "Wouldn't Edward be all pissy that Bella's spending so much time with another vampire?"
Yeah.. don't ask lol. Blonde moments are a regular occurrence with me..
Keep up the awesome work XD
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying it -- definitely don't know what to expect!
I've gotten a lot of reviews telling me I suck at secret keeping, but I really don't think that's the case ;) Or there might not be such a mystery afterall :P
And lol @ the blonde moment! they happen bb, no worries :)
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:39 PM · On: The Balcony
Damn I wish these chapters were longer. Great story.
Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:36 PM · On: The Balcony
If by "lurker" you seem one who was reading but not reviewing I guess I can own up to that. I really like your story. I usually don't read AU-vamp stories but I was recommended this story by a friend and it doesn't disappoint. So congrats on getting me to stray from the au-human stories. As much as I would love to open one chapter and know everything about edward and how he came to be the way he is, I love the mystery of it all.
Author's Response: That is what I mean by lurker! THANK YOU SO MUCH for coming out of lurkdome! :D
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