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Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:48 PM · On: The Weekend
I'm glad to see he's improving. Looking forward to when he can not only handle being around the others, but can come out of the bedroom and go downstairs!
Reviewer: Aimee (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:45 PM · On: The Weekend
oh my god what a lovely update. i really enjoyed it. more when u are ready hunni. really loving this story it is my favorite story on here.
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:41 PM · On: The Weekend
Things are moving along! I love it! Thanks so much for updating, you rock!
Reviewer: princessitavalevale (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:30 PM · On: The Weekend
yay! new chap new chap!
i like that edward's healing!
pls continue soon!!!
XOXO
Reviewer: wickedhag (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:30 PM · On: The Weekend
loved it, want more, can't wait:)
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:29 PM · On: The Weekend
Ahhh! The chapter ends to quickly! Hey, I'll take Edward any way (shirtless or not).
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:29 PM · On: The Weekend
It always thrills me when you update. I am absolutely LOVING this story!! I like that he's healing but slowly - that it's not a snap-your-fingers-and-it's-fixed type story. Great character development and reveals in this chapter. Thank you so much for writing!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
I'm glad you're not put off by the pace, it's a necessary slowness. Sigh.
- Michelle
Reviewer: sjfdmf (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:26 PM · On: The Weekend
I love this story. I have been reading since angstgoddess recommended it when you first started it. I am addicted and look forward to every new chapter. It is different from so many other stories out there. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:09 PM · On: The Weekend
Another great chapter! I love how he is talking more to Bella and actually called her name. :)
I'm sure this will be answered, but I want to know why he is afraid of the Cullens, if it's just because they are vampires or if there is something he hears in their thoughts. I *hope* that he will grow to love them as Bella has. I can't wait to read some of that at some point.
Thanks!
~Jenn
Author's Response: Yes! He said goodnight to her! (cue awwwwwwwwwwwwwww). Fuck, I loved that he said goodnight to her. Such progress (and learning.. guh,)
Thanks so much for reviewing bb!
- Michelle
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:09 PM · On: The Weekend
This chapter had a lot of great moments. I never tire of Edward talking whether it is a simple "Goodnight, Bella" or my new favorite "Please don't hurt me." It was so sad watching him recoil from Bella after the kiss on his palm and then when she suddenly moved in his arms while waking. It obviously is going to take awhile for him to feel safe period. I was glad that Bella explained to Edward how she and the Cullens met. It explained their bond and gave Edward a foundation to trust them. Alice and Emmett then reinforced that trust by telling him what the family found out about him and what happened to his family.
We also finally saw that Alice's vision was Bella with red eyes and pale skin, but now have to find out who changes her and why. You are good with answering questions that lead to more questions. That is why I am so hooked on this story.
Author's Response: Yes, definitely deeper meaning there. Teaching him to trust the cullens by telling him why SHE trusts them, how they saved her with nothing forcing them to, etc. It's gotta help him some :)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:00 PM · On: The Weekend
Aww..I love how Bella is so patient with him. You would think that since he can't read her mind he would be even more scared of her because he couldn't hear what she planned to do..but I wonder...when Edward first got to the Cullen's and he was so malnourished (is that what you would call if for vampires? haha)..was he really conscious? I don't mean like awake or not..but could he think clearly? Cause if he could, I would think he would be able to read the Cullen's minds and see that they are good vampires and wouldn't hurt him...but maybe he knows that people can lie with their thoughts...
If Edward has retained all of his vampire memories..he should have some info. about where he had been kept locked up, or by whom...maybe he will tell Bella..
Great chapter!
Author's Response: We'll get more into that for sure :) That's a great question, which has been asked a LOT (how coherent he was in those early days), and the why's behind his trust and stuff. It'll come, in time. Ahh.
Yes, he should have some info ;) Just a matter of putting it to use!
Thanks so much for the review!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:57 PM · On: The Weekend
Hehehe, I love your comments. Don't be amazed, you have agreat idea and you are presenting it in an amazing fashion. I love it! I couldn't see Edward going to school HOWEVER...I can forsee Bella kickcing some serious ass when she is changed and defending Edward (as a newborn) from those who imprisoned him... I am excited and await further chapters...more please! I wonder who will he let into his world besides Bella, which of the Cullens will be first? Alice, Carlisle or Emmet? Oh this is VERY exciting. can I pout like Alice to get it quicker?
Author's Response: Maybe he'll surprise us all and go for Esme -- who hasn't been up in his face yet! :P We'll find out :)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: Folklorn (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:56 PM · On: The Weekend
Can I just say I ADORE their interaction together! They're just so sweet. The way Edward cuddles up to her in her sleep is one of my favorite parts. I love the small steps Edward is taking by his own free will. I was surprised that he changed into the new clothes Alice brought but that's a good sign right? You found a great way to introduce Debussy too. The whole scene with his reaction to the computer is a little sad but it's funny too. Even now I forget just how old he is so the idea of a computer must be beyond comprehension for the poor man. I'm reminded of my grandparents and their issues with technology.
Edward's interest with the outdoors really intrigues me.
And I LOVE the little emotion game between Jasper and Bella. Seriously, why didn't Steph think of that. It's perfect.
Thank you for the chapter!
~Folk
Author's Response: Hey hon! Hopefully you get this response, if not.. I'll link ya to it in the future, I'm sure ;)
I'm so glad you like their interactions (and don't think of it as a zoo, sheesh @ some reviewers :K)
It's a great sign that he put them on on his own volition -- shows that he's learning.. socially constructed things. Yeah.
Thanks so much for reviewing, as always! See you on the thread :)
- Michelle
Reviewer: lanamoosh (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:55 PM · On: The Weekend
Poor, poor vulnerabledward.. abusedward.. I wonder if he's scared of the laptop because he's never seen one or because the bad guys had them. Somehow I picture this lab or whatever as high tech. I can't wait to know what's next in store for our Edward. He has to come out of that room eventually, right? Maybe interact with the other, discover the piano, whatever.
Have I mentioned this is my very favorite fanfic of all time and each new chapter is Christmas to me.
Thank you for your story!
-L
Author's Response: Favorite of all time?! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
It's so nice to hear that you appreciate the work I'm putting into it! Reviews like this make me smile so hard despite my mood :P So thank you for the review!
He'll come out of that room eventually :) (soon, very soon:P)
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:52 PM · On: The Weekend
I love your story!
Reviewer: KRo (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:50 PM · On: The Weekend
I am sad that he now has a shirt on but hey whatever! I'm glad that he is slowly getting better and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:50 PM · On: The Weekend
Yeesh, poor Edward. Labward? :(
I literally make myself read your chapters slowly so they last longer....they're so good!
Reviewer: WiththeMurf (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:46 PM · On: The Weekend
I think it's so cool Alice and everyone did a little (or a lot) of research to recover Edward's past. That was a pleasant, albeit, not a totally surprising, gesture (considering it's the Cullens and that's what they do...research). I love how the story is moving along, as I've said the last 13 chapters! Still loving it! :)
As for shirtless-ward, that's funny! Yeah, he's missed, I guess, but I'm sure he'll reappear in later chapters! :) I'm hoping...Ha!
Can't wait for the next chapter, as usual. Love ya and you're amazing writing!
-Rebecca :)
Author's Response: Yes, the cullens are always researching things! Glad they were able to turn something up (finally!)
Hehe, we can hope that he'll reappear! :P Thanks so much for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: naty1121 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:44 PM · On: The Weekend
My favorite chapter so far!!!!!!! I know that I have told you before but I absolutely love the relationship between Edward and Bella!!!! I love it!!! love the story of Bella and James and how Alice was the one that saved her!!!!
keep up the excellent writting and please update soon!!!!!
ps. besides the Edward in the book this is my second favorite ;p
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! It's so nice to hear that this is your second favorite edward!! :)
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:44 PM · On: The Weekend
wow great chapter i cant wait for more glad to see him opening up:)
Reviewer: adipocere (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:39 PM · On: The Weekend
Lovely as always, I like how you're not rushing through his recovery, it adds a touch a realism to your work. Delightful prose, grammar, and punctation. ;)
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:33 PM · On: The Weekend
Love love it! It's neat to see a new perspective on their relationship, most stories they are in love and making out in two seconds, but this shows it building on something more than just a spark and a feeling.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:30 PM · On: The Weekend
I'm glad he has his own clothes, but minimal clothes is always nice- maybe it's time for another bath???????:)
Author's Response: Hehe, probably not quite :)
Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:28 PM · On: The Weekend
Fucking A, man. It never ceases to amaze me when this is updated! As small as it was, my favorite part was when she fell asleep and during the night she rolled away from him. I imagined Edward's face completely confused and scared, but when she woke up realizing she was in his arms again, I smirked. She scared the crap out of him! I knew waking up abruptly was a jolt, but poor Edward.
Gah, waiting is still a hassle for a human.
Author's Response: Yeah, the abrupt turn frightened him, but he overcame it alright. :) I'm glad you liked this one!
Reviewer: Eline (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:04 PM · On: The Weekend
Yay, update's for this story make me sooo happy :D
and yet another great chapter, nicely done! I love clothing-ward also :D
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