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Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:26 PM · On: The Weekend
I'm so glad we're finding out more about him!
I hope we find out even more next chapter!!
Amazing chapter!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I try to show more about him every chapter, so I would assume more will be put out next chapter :)
Thanks for reviewing
- Michelle
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:25 PM · On: The Weekend
I love how he's getting more and more comfortable with Bella and how finally she can cuddle up with him. Bliss. (sigh)
Reviewer: Kate17 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:02 PM · On: The Weekend
Love it!
Reviewer: khhc (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:54 PM · On: The Weekend
Again. The best. thats all i can say....i would totally pay money for this.....i just reallly reallllly realllllly hate waiting. oh, and rose too,
Author's Response: Wow! I'm sorry you have to wait :( I understand the frustration there, I have some serious RL business I'm falling behind in just to keep it at once a week though!
I'm so glad you're enjoying it though bb!
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:52 PM · On: The Weekend
I loved how close Edward is allowing Bella to get to him. It's promising! It's amazing how much they care for each other without really saying anything :)
I'm really looking forward to when Edward relaxes, though. I mean, it'll be nice for him to interact with the Cullen's :) I look forward to that as much as I look forward to Edward and Bella falling in love with each other!!
You know, I'm good with Edward having clothes. However, at night, he needs to be shirtless. Bella needs more clothes :D lol
Author's Response: Yes! They're making huge steps, ya just gotta keep an eye out for em! :D
And I'm very excited for some E/Cullen interaction.. hm. It'll be fun maybe hopefully.
LOL @ Edward being shirtless at night. It's so true, but it'd be awkward for bella to be like.. okay, lose the shirt schmexy boy.
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:45 PM · On: The Weekend
Still loving it. Still waiting with baited breath for new chapters...keep up the great work!
Reviewer: chrom (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:45 PM · On: The Weekend
i must say i'm worried that Bella's kisses scare Edward. maybe she should wait some more time? it looks like she's taking advantage of him :D sort of.
From what you wrote it seems like Edward doesn't KNOW WHO he is. But still that doesn't explain why Bella's scent isn't appealing to him. even if he doesn't want to drink blood, he should find her scent appealing.
thanks for the update!!!!
Author's Response: Wait more time!For that reason, I LOVE THIS REVIEW. I'm taking so much crap for pace, I love reviews who tell me to go slower! Bah! THANK YOU FOR THAT! :D
He might find her scent appealing, but he's a master of control, of not giving into his thirst because he knows it'll hurt him.. yeah. Hopefully that makes any sense, but it probably doesn't.
Thanks for the review bb!
Reviewer: singer (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:43 PM · On: The Weekend
I want a cageward of my own:)I really enjoy this story and cannot wait for the next chapter:)
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:41 PM · On: The Weekend
I like the progress Edward is making, it should be slow. he's been captive for90 years.
I also really like the way Bella and Jasper play "emo" tag.
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:32 PM · On: The Weekend
Okay, so been hearing about this story for a while now, and I was all bitchy, thinking things like"It sounds like a version of someone coming out of the closet!"
THen....I read it......
HOLY FUCKING TOAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you I love the story I HATE the fact that I now have to wait for a chapter. Just, yeah, love all around.
I really hope that these weird visions Alice is seeing do not make the Cullens contemplate moving or anything. That would be unnacceptable. UPDATE LIKE NOW
Author's Response: Haha .. someone coming out of the closet! Ahh, no, nothing like that :)
Thanks so much for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:21 PM · On: The Weekend
Oh man, I have no words. This is so beautiful. I love it so much!
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:06 PM · On: The Weekend
I enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the great work and please UPDATE SOON!
Sorry to be demanding XD.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:05 PM · On: The Weekend
Amazing update! He is slowly but surely taking huge steps, I couldn't be prouder of him :)
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:51 PM · On: The Weekend
I really liked Bella and Jasper messing with each other. The story is killing me slowly! Great stuff.
Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked that part :P
Reviewer: Simona (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:48 PM · On: The Weekend
Damn, I was hoping he'd lose the pants not gain a shirt ;-) Such a tragic story, poor Edward 90 years in captivity. Glad to see he's talking and allowing himself to get closer to Bella, but I'm worried he hasn't fed in a while!
Author's Response: He was fully fed on Thursday and it's only Saturday now, so he should be alright for a little bit at least :)
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:38 PM · On: The Weekend
Wow... just WOW... and again ;-) This chapter has been your very best so far!!! Your writing is just amazing. The way you are developing the lovestory between Edward and Bella is so unusual and different from every other I read. And it's so very touching... You're really so hugely talented and I'm so eager for reading more! Thank you for that and pleeeeeaaaase update soon!!! :-))
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it !:)
Reviewer: LindyP (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:36 PM · On: The Weekend
I loved this chapter! I love that Edward is starting to talk to Bella too! I also love that Bella is just talking to him all the time, telling him everything about herself. It reminds me of Twilight when Edward was asking Bella all those questions to get to know her. And now we know how Bella knows about the sxsistence of vampires! Obviously, Alice is seeing her in the future as a vampire. Yeah! I love this story!
LindyP :)
Author's Response: Yes! Some words, wooords! woo!
Haha yes, it does! Sometime, when I run out of things for bella to say, I'll have to reference the book to find more random things she can babble aboiut :P
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:35 PM · On: The Weekend
I dont think that Bella is one to keep him shirtless all the time. If he was in captivity for 90 years has he tasted human blood? Is that why he knew Bella was different but didnt know how - that would explain that if I on the right track. And if he doesnt know what a human is then what does he think that she is doing when she is sleeping? Will this Bella talk in her sleep? Will there be any EPOV's? I keep finding myself waiting for him to speak, it like I can also hear him whispering to her. Loves those parts -Ok, I sorry for the 20 questions-I'm shutting up now :)
Author's Response: No, he likely has not tasted human blood ever :)
It's entirely possible that he knows the diff between human/vamps.. Bella might have been wrong in her assumption of what he meant :)
This bella does talk in her sleep, I'd imagine :)
There will be EPOV somewhere -- likely in an outtake or something, who knows. Probably not within the story though.
Thanks so much for reviewing hon!
Reviewer: twiks99 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:24 PM · On: The Weekend
I love this story! I'm glad Edward has clothes of his own now -- they can always be removed as needed, right?
I think the pace of the story is realistic - agonizing, but realistic considering what he's been through, but can't wait to find out who in the world did this to him....
Author's Response: Oh yes, clothing can certainly be removed ;)
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:23 PM · On: The Weekend
Glad That Edward is making some progress. i am curious about Alice's vision of Bella. Great story. Please keep writing
Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:22 PM · On: The Weekend
I'm always extremely disappointed to see the words "Chapter End Notes"...because that means the chapter has ended. I wish it never would. *le sigh* Wonderful, as always.
I, for one, am glad he has his own clothes. Not that I mind Shirtlessward (would any sane female?), but it was sad he was shirtless because he had no clothes.
I'm excited, as always, to see where this is heading. Who held Edward captive? Why? etc. etc. etc. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I love your penname!
I'm glad he has clothes as well, although I'll miss his barechestedness :P
Thanks so much for reviewing!
-- Michelle
Reviewer: LittleAlice (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:12 PM · On: The Weekend
I love it...but I miss naked Edward :P
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:10 PM · On: The Weekend
gosh edward is so heartbreaking.
despite how frustrating it is, i love howw slow the progress is. its much more realistic and i'm a sucker for those little moments(:
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:58 PM · On: The Weekend
Again you blow me away with this story!! I wait for it every week!! I LOVE that Edward is slowly talking more and interacting with Bella! I can't wait to find out more about what he went through!! That last momnet?? SUPER CUTE!! xx
Author's Response: Shoulda put out a fluff warning for that chapter, eh? x)
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:56 PM · On: The Weekend
I'm glad he's comfortable! I LOVE it! I still have no idea how anyone could get an idea for something THIS good! I just love it! Write more soon, or post more if you've already written it. Whichever.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it bb!
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