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Reviewer: PinkPrincess (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:18 PM · On: The Bath

is the vampire edward?

wowowowowowowow

:) :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: PinkPrincess (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:38 PM · On: The Trial

i know this is  a parralell universe + that

but why isn't edward here?

where is edward?

edward...

i keep crying at this, its SO sad

but its amazing

i need to keep reading

WOW

x x x x x x

Reviewer: PinkPrincess (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:38 PM · On: The Trial

i know this is  a parralell universe + that

but why isn't edward here?

where is edward?

edward...

i keep crying at this, its SO sad

but its amazing

i need to keep reading

WOW

x x x x x x

Reviewer: Loving It (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:54 PM · On: The Dance

Your story it's really sweet but i hate weak Edward it's wrong and slightly heartbreaking. And will hurry up and say who THEY are! You're killing me. :) You've written a great story, keep updating! x

Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 12:16 PM · On: The Bath

wow - that was soooo awesome. When he said "don't leave me" i wanted to cry. just cry!! I wish she broke her curfew and stayed with him. What a great story!!

Reviewer: fmlife (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:27 PM · On: The Bath

I CAN'T BELIEVE HE SPOKE!

MY HEART LITERALLY JUMPED WHEN I READ THAT!!

Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:36 PM · On: The Dance

I really enjoy reading this! It's actually got a plot - a damn good, keep you on the edge one at that! I love how Edward is slowly coming around more and more to Bella and even Carlisle. It's almost driving me insane, wanting to know what his past completely is and then the Volturi situation, but I'm gonna attempt to wait patiently! Attempt being the key word! :)

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one!!!

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:04 PM · On: The River

I've already reviewed this chapter on ff, so you know how much I liked it.  I'm re-reading your story here because the dark screen is easier on my eyes.  Just had to tell you again how very tender and touching this is.  Thank you for writing.   :)

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:50 PM · On: The Dance

wow.  i have seen this fic on here for a while, but hadn't taken the time to read it and see yet, but wow!  this is amazing!  every time i got pulled away i was thinking about the next time i would get to read it again.  LOVE IT!!    i really truly feel the emotions.  you are an amazing author/writer.  again...wow.

Reviewer: Animaiden126 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:48 AM · On: The Dance

You rock! I'm really liking this. That is all; please continue.

Reviewer: darklightprincess (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:55 AM · On: The Dance

this story is amazing!

Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:38 AM · On: The River

Did Edward know that he was a vampire before the cullens found him?

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:24 PM · On: The Dance

a cliffhanger? you r so mean!:) please update!!!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:00 PM · On: The Balcony

Of course, it's Edward. No surprises here. Still the story is totally captivating. One more chapter and I'll say I love you:)

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:20 PM · On: The Trial

I've got lots to do. My boss expects a report from me in the morning. But all I gonna do is continue reading your story all night long. Take it as a compliment:) You're brilliant!!!

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:56 AM · On: The Exam

HIT!!!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:53 AM · On: The Basement

Oh my god! I think I gonna comment on every chapter! This one was just great! I guess the story's gonna be even more fascinating.

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:30 AM · On: The Hunt

Just started reading. Love it!

Reviewer: Chakrakhan (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:30 AM · On: The Dance

I love your writing.  This story is so addictive.  I like the way you spin traditional Twilight nods in your very original theme.  Awesome job.  I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Please keep up the good work, and thank you for writing this!

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Reviewer: SnoopyPuppy1106 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:52 AM · On: The Dance

More Please, Like YESTERDAY. This is a wonderful story and I need more chapters fast.



Author's Response:

I'm thinking this weekend for ETA :) Sadyl, RL caught up with me this week, coupled with having the flu for the past 4 days and.. there just wasn't time.

But tonight and tomorrow I will write it, I hope.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:31 AM · On: The Dance

LOL even before the A/N I knew Alice was letting Bella off the hook...like you said because she referenced Prom...

Edward is so scared....sniff, sniff...and EEEEK!!! The Volturi are coming! Holy Hale! This story is just simply too good!!! WOW! Brilliant writing, fantastic storyline! Just. WOW!. Thank you so much for sharing it! I aniously await whatever's to come next! SQUEEEE!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:59 PM · On: The River

ok ok, so I couldn't go to sleep...and no, I didn't try. LOL. WOW!!! So Edward hadn't come acrosss Vamps before the Cullens....interesting....

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:32 PM · On: The Weekend

WOW! Learned a lot here....Captivity for over 90 years? Harsh! I'm dying here to read the next two chapters but it's super late and I must get sleep or I won't be able to get my daughter to school in 5 hours....OYE! I WILL BE BACK!!!! I can't WAIT to read the next two chapters!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:02 PM · On: The Balcony

OME Poor Edward! He woke up in a cage?!? 

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:45 PM · On: The Bath

Oh my heart broke when he spoke...HOW THE HELL DID SHE LEAVE!?!?!? I know she "had" to....but I'd totes be sneaking back! LOL.

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