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Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:55 AM · On: The Party
Yes, indeed, how did humans do that to a vampire....That's the big mystery!...Well, finally Bella admitted her feelings and I liked Edward's reaction to Alice's mental revelation! :)
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:51 AM · On: The Party
Awesome - thanks for the update. You made my morning. I've missed you! No real surprises - but I enjoy the ride more than the plot exposition most of the time. It was nice getting to know everyone and seeing Alice spill the beans and Edward get a little more comfortable.
Reviewer: Taigh (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:38 AM · On: The Party
I wonder what Edward thinks now that Alice has let slip that Bella loves him?
Plus, I'm really getting worried about the Volturi :S
Reviewer: THBS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:18 AM · On: The Party
Is this some kind of Weapon X kind of project? Hm. Poor little Edward. Keep those chapters coming!
Reviewer: Katastrophe (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:11 AM · On: The Face
Where is Edward during all of this? Or is the vamp in the basement Edward? If that is the case, then how did she become so close to the Cullens?
I'm confused, but loving the story so far.
Kat
Reviewer: mistress_kisara (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:06 AM · On: The Party
*pats Edward on the head* He's soo adorable!!! and more development for Edward and Bella! Humans!?? I don't know how to make of that..
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:30 AM · On: The Party
i love this story, its pretty incredible
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:20 AM · On: The Party
I love this story. I am sure that I have said this before but it is all I really need to say. Keep writing please! I always need more of this story. Thanks for the brillance.
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:14 AM · On: The Party
Well, I knew it was Humans last chapter so I am not suprised. I loved this chapter though. It felt like the calm before the storm. Emmett pulling the fist bumping move with Edward was classic. Is Bella the only one who knows how long he was in captivity? If not, then someone needs to remind Emmett.
I really like watching the interaction between Edward and Bella. It seems easier each chapter. I missed not having an update last week, but this was worth the wait! :)
Reviewer: SkyBlueHearts (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:07 AM · On: The Party
Wait, I thought she said she recognised she loved him in the last chapter?
Great, of course. (I don't know, your chapters are ALWAYS excellent, I'm running out of descriptive words and therefore posting less reviews. Bad, SBH, BAD!)
So, post again! Soon! :)
Reviewer: Gabriel Wolfe (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:58 AM · On: The Party
KYAH =] Beautiful chapter, and I'm so happy you update lol.
Happy writing!
Reviewer: ptoricanjewel (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:48 AM · On: The Party
Awww Edward is interacting somewhat...great update! Can't wait to find out who is responsible for Edward being that way!
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:43 AM · On: The Party
Not surprised since I thought that was established....two chapters ago? Or was it three? Anyway, I'm asking the same questions as Bella, so I assume if you're going to answer hers mine will eventually get answered.
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:38 AM · On: The Party
i remember that he said they were not vampires, and i dont think the wolves would do it thus...has to be humans.
i'd like to know what he thinks/feels about bella!! any chance of an EPOV??
its very entertaining! very different!
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:28 AM · On: The Party
awsome chapter-great story. i was getting worried since u havent posted in so long dont do that lol.... anyways im glad hes opening up.. cantwaitfor next chapter
Reviewer: cdls1992 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:18 AM · On: The Party
Yay! You finally updated!! Great Chapter!!
Update soon!
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:16 AM · On: The Party
:D :D :D Every time Edward speaks, I squee.
I had a feeling it was humans. Dunno why.
Thanks for the wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:15 AM · On: The Party
You have smooth transitions and believable pacing. Consistant characters and sincere emotions. Never a word wasted. And I love the way you weave elements of the origional story into this one. So all in all, a creative, heartfelt, and well written story. It's no coincidence you have over 3000 reviews:)
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:07 AM · On: The Party
adorable!!! this is such a great story!!!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:06 AM · On: The Party
No, not surprised... Edward did say that whoever captured him were humans. Of course the next natural questions are what they did to him, why they did this to him, and what happened to Edward to end him up in the forest for the Cullens to find?
I know... all in due time.
This chapter is sweet though - no cut finger, thank goodness, and Alice is really making good progress with Edward too! That's great to know - at least when Bella's not there to look after him, it'll be Alice, not Rosalie. I still can't stand her. I'm sorry - I really can't! I think I started disliking her when she voiced her displeasure of having Bella comforting Edward earlier in the story, as if she was claiming territory already. I mean, who did she think she was?
Anywho... this is another brilliant chapter, as always. I always love reading it. :)
Reviewer: jazsaimin (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:01 AM · On: The Party
i squeeled in delight when this story came up at the top of my profile! i adore this story, its the first one that i came upon that got me really interested in fanfiction. this story is wonderful and i havent come upon anything like it.
the suspense is KILLING ME and i am anxiously awaiting the next update!!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:00 AM · On: The Party
Another great chapter. I think you could write that Edward moved his pinky finger, and I would cry like a baby exclaiming "he moved his pinky finger, he moved his pinky finger." That's how I felt when he wished Bella a happy birthday, and then even more so when he told her that he didn't want to miss her party. Tears just flowed freely from my eyes.
I'm kinda surprised that Edward didn't pull away from Bella once he heard Alice's thought about her being in love with him. But as I thought more about it, she is his only anchor right now. He needs her too much. It's so weird, but refreshing, seeing her as the superhero even though he is the vampire.
So it was humans. That's what I thought in the beginning. A vampire is involved to some degree b/c someone changed Edward. It's also interesting to me that it was humans that did all this to him, yet he feels the most comfortable with Bella.
Reviewer: twilighteuphoria27 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:58 PM · On: The Party
Beautiful chapter!! Loved how Alice slipped and made it known to Edward of Bella's feelings. I also loved that he was present for her birthday ahhh!! love it , love it!!!! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:57 PM · On: The Party
It was so adorable that he came to her party! And he talks now. Great chapter.
Reviewer: lilroses_89 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:54 PM · On: The Party
I enjoyed the scene between Edward and Alice. After Carlisle, I think Alice would be the next to really bond with Edward [Bella aside, of course].
Edward saying 'happy birthday' was also very sweet.
I had a feeling humans were Edward's captors -I wonder if they're like modern vampire slayers?
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