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Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:54 AM · On: The Party
Evil Humans....ergggggggg
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:52 AM · On: The Party
SQUEE!!! LOVED when she sees him in the living room and he wishes her Happy Birthday - so sweet. sigh.
I'm glad he is finally starting to warm up to Alice...
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:51 AM · On: The Party
Awesome! I'm so glad its humans because let's face it, the Cullens could kick some serious human ass! luvs!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:47 AM · On: The Party
Seriously good chapter. I could have sworn that we knew that it was humans from the previous chaps when he told Bella that he had never seen a vampire before meeting the Cullens.
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:46 AM · On: The Party
i was so excited to see this update. I figured it was humans buttttt I thought maybe it could be the wolf/humans
Reviewer: PinkPrincess (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:37 AM · On: The Party
:) love it
this story is so sweet
i think i prefer it to twilight etc.
but i'm confused.
when did it say his name was edward?
loveyou
x x x
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:27 AM · On: The Party
I don't know what I'm feeling. I do know that there is a definite sense of impending doom. I don't like it. This story keeps me on the edge of my seat and all my emotions in a turmoil.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:24 AM · On: The Party
I am so happy he could join the party, great update!!
Reviewer: chrom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:22 AM · On: The Party
her last birthday... LAST... that humans are puzzling... maybe Edward didn't know he hs strenght of a vampire? maybe those people didn't know he is a vampire?so many questions! thanks for an update!
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:21 AM · On: The Party
Hi Michellephants,
I abolutely LOVE this story. It is so achingly tender and beautiful. Your writing mesmerizes me, and I sit transfixed before my computer screen, clearly visualising everything you write, and somehow channeling everything Bella feels. You are amazing.
Thank you so much for all your hard work. Your writing is such a gift!
Sweetmama xox
Reviewer: vanessarae (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:17 AM · On: The Party
Yay for knowing it was humans! Yay for Bella loving Edward and knowing it! Yay for Edward going to the party! Yay in general!
Reviewer: gtg178y (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:15 AM · On: The Party
lovely chapter
Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:06 AM · On: The Party
Great chapter as usual! I'm getting the vibe that is was similar to the initiative from BuffyTVS. Can we have more fluff? xx
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 07:04 AM · On: The Party
Phew! Humans! I'm a little bit surprised, and very relieved that it wasn't the Volturi. But I'm more pleased with the way Bella and Edward's relationship is progressing.
And I'm still confused about Edward's still having to be fed by Carlisle. I wonder how long that will last and how Edward will learn to feed himself. Can he hunt or will he have to learn? Hmmmmm. Lots of questions!! Love this story! So glad you're moving forward with it!
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:57 AM · On: The Party
I just officially fell in love with your Edward, great chapter.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:52 AM · On: The Party
Checked out the art...it is fabulous!!!! Tell the girl she has some major TALENT!
(Since I don't have an account there)....
Kathie
Reviewer: march14th (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:51 AM · On: The Party
i suspected the quileute. they'd have enough reasons. they could learn a lot. it could be so useful. and what kind of human could it be? no idea.
Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:47 AM · On: The Party
Humans? How can that be? I'm sure you'll tell us when you're good and ready.*scratching head puzzled*
Wonderful Alice, Edward bonding. Emmett, dear sweet Emmett, what more can I say?
That was a nice sized chapter. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:30 AM · On: The Party
So many steps forward here...
Alice spilled the beans on Bella loving him...shivers in expectation!
Edward downstairs, amidst the family...sigh...what a lovely picture that was...
I totally love when they sleep together...well, her sleeping, him finding comfort in her sleeping...touches me each and every time...
Off to see the art you mentioned...
Thanks so much for sharing your vision with us...
Kathie
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:27 AM · On: The Party
Great chapter. I so LOVE how this story is unfolding and how their love is growing. I'm touched Edward made it down the stairs for Bella's party.
I am surprised it was humans. I had the same questions Bella had.
I just love this story. Keep up the great work. I hope r/l gets better for you.
Reviewer: reedinthewind (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:24 AM · On: The Party
Mmm, not too surprised that it was humans. I guessed a couple of chapters back. Also good that Bella has admitted her feelings. And Emmett was watching OSU football!!! Too bad it wasn't the OSU-USC game on...it would be nice if OSU won that. But just about as unlikely as the Volturi not taking an interest in Bella. Lovely chapter, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:22 AM · On: The Party
I'm glad there was no blod shed at the party, I don't think Edward was ready to jump in and save Bella. I thought a couple of chapters or so back that Edward mentions that humans did this to him! Any way I love Emmett coming in and acting like it was no big deal for Edward being on the couch, I love Emmett. I can't wait fir the next update.
Reviewer: mistressbionerd (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:21 AM · On: The Party
This was fantastic! He came downstairs! He interacted with the family! (sorta) Freakin' Emmett! I guffawed at him and the unreturned fist bump!
The way you write the connection and affection between Edward and Bella is just amazing. I'm awed with every chapter I read and left waiting so impatiently for more. I really can't say enough how great this story is. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: scarhett89 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:08 AM · On: The Party
Wow!!!!! Amazing!!!!!! I am really surprised that it was humans, because I, like Bella, am wondering how they restrained a new-born vampire... I am sure you won't disappoint!!! :)
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:05 AM · On: The Party
Awww best birthday ever for Bella...so sweet! It'd be my best birthday too if I were curled up next to Edward! LOL. Another fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more!
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