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Reviewer: LikeToRead (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:37 PM · On: The Jump
I love that is starting to hang out with Alice and agreed to go running. I can't wait to see what will happen when the Volturi come to visit. Yikes. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Pire (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:36 PM · On: The Jump
I just love how you're forming Alice and Edwards friendship. Not many have done this (well, I haven read any, but I'm assuming there's maybe a few).
I've always been slightly curious to see how their bond forms and how she becomes a sort of sister figure. I really love this.
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:34 PM · On: The Jump
Edward got to run! Yay! I hope it helps him and gives him a chance to feel even more free. Can't wait to see what the Voturi are going to do and say about things. Especially if they find out about Bella, which I'm sure they will. Maybe we'll find out Edward's story then? It was nice to see Alice get Edward out again. I like how they're opening up to each other, it seems to give Edward more confidence in himself and the Cullens.
Great chapter! Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:29 PM · On: The Jump
Sigh... I LOVE that Alice got Edward out to run, and gave him a little confidence. I just want to hug him and kiss his forehead like Bella. I hope this is the beginning of more progress.
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:21 PM · On: The Jump
Question - How frequently is regularly?
Reviewer: WiththeMurf (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:17 PM · On: The Jump
He's already thinking about the syringe! I'm so glad he's healing. And, I can't deny that I'm ready for the romance to begin. What can I say? Eh. :)
And the Volturi? That should be interesting...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
<3- Rebecca
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:16 PM · On: The Jump
I really loved this chapter, Alice did good :) Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:11 PM · On: The Jump
I love this so hard...I'm worried about the Volturi coming...I find it VERY interesting that Edward is wondering about how you become a vampire. A syringe? Hmmmm... It sounds like Edward is thinking on how to make Bella a vamp, eh?
Thanks for the update! As ususal, you do an amazing job!
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:06 PM · On: The Party
another wonderful chapter! I'm so excited to get updates on this story!
I love that he's getting to explore his nature a little bit more.
I am curious though now, does he just want to figure out what happened to him, or does he want Bella to be like him (with the syring question)? I love wounded Edward. And I love that he loves Bella.
*sigh* You've made me happy. And good for Alice doing good things for the poor vampire!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:03 PM · On: The Jump
Oh, what a gorgeous chapter. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, thank you.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:58 AM · On: The Jump
I'm kind of stuck on the conversation between Alice and Edward regarding Bella. That was... somewhat illuminating? Not sure. We now know that Edward knows that Alice has visions of Bella becoming a vampire. That's one important thing. But the question about the syringe... that has my mind going in all sorts of directions. But my brain keeps coming back to the possibility that Edward is considering ways of changing Bella? Is that too much to hope for? The mental image of this Edward biting Bella doesn't really jive with me, so it kind of makes sense for his mind to be going towards alternatives. We don't know how the traumatic and horrifying experiences that Edward has gone through has changed him from canon. Perhaps he simply cannot stand the idea of going through existence without Bella now. One thing for certain, he doesn't have the arrogance that canon Edward has. How could he?
I'm guessing/assuming that Edward knows that Bella is leaving for Florida next weekend to avoid the Volturi. It will definitely be interesting to see how he reacts to that. I'm really worried about how he and the Volturi are going to react to each other. I hope Aro doesn't decide to come along! It seems more likely he would simply demand they bring him to Volterra though so he can get his greedy little mitts on Edward and suck the truths out of him.
Thanks so much for the update!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:51 AM · On: The Jump
Well I reviewed on ff last time, so it's Twi's turn again.
- Love the opening line. It introduces the passing of time while still really drawing you in.
- (I learned how to do list formation.)
- love to the ipod sharing! Of course now I want to know what music Bella's loading it up with. I vote ol' Rufus.
- (do you see how orderly this shit is? it's almost as good as pink tracking)
- Did you really just foreshadow something via a new pair of shoes? You might be my hero. It is kind of my fetish you know.
- (Your other reviewers think I'm certifiable now)
- Um, Edward was totally digging for the goods on Bella in his first conversation with Alice. "so I'm going to do it? um, yeah when do I get a taste of that sweet ass neck? I want to lick it."
- (cue DMX growling)
- HANDHAIR!
- nice subtlety about the syringe. I think we now know how he was changed?
- (he was all nonchalant about it with his half grin...total smooth operator)
- The crushing rocks, running around, jumping rivers was a world of win. It's fantastic to see him discovering himself and his abilities.
- (do i sense that Bella has a thing for the jocks? She seemed to like this post-run trembling balls and swagger.)
- I loved them both being so damn eager to reach out to one another. We're beginning to see the inevitability of their love and being together, and it is such a beautiful thing.
LOVE IT HON!
Reviewer: marvelousmarbles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:44 AM · On: The Jump
Jasper, what's Edward feeling now??? HUH???????? Does he looooooove her yet???
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:41 AM · On: The Jump
Best chapter yet. Go Alice for helping Edward! I so appreciate the growing love between ExB.
This has become one of my very favorite stories. I'm definitely voting!
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:41 AM · On: The Jump
Great Chapter as always! It was nice to see Edward and Alice bonding and him learning about his own abilities. I noticed the foreshadowing with the needle or was that a nod to Breaking Dawn?
Reviewer: buterfli0403 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:32 AM · On: The Jump
hey i loveeee your story
i dont remember if i told you or not but i meant to.
and wat are the bellie awards?
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:32 AM · On: The Jump
Awesome update! Can't wait for the next chapter, as always. :D
Reviewer: thejamster (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:30 AM · On: The Jump
Thanks so much for the update! I looooove this story and can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:28 AM · On: The Jump
ahhhh,, you cut it right there! please please please continue.. i hate to see bella go tho..
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:24 AM · On: The Jump
Great chapter. I loved seeing Edward be more free. I love his interaction with Alice and he seems to love Bella, which is always good.
Reviewer: adair (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:22 AM · On: The Jump
I loved the interaction between Alice and Emmett. Emmett is still very childlike and sweet, but without making him seem dumb, which I love.
Also, Alice and Edward is one of the most interesting relationships in the Twilight universe, and yet there's not a lot of people who really go into that in fic. You did it beautifully. I love how their powers play off each other and how Edward is learning to trust Alice.
The running scene was fantastic. It was very well described without lagging in the story at all. It's equally as freeing for the reader to see Edward running and learning about his abilities as it is for him.
Thanks for another amazing chapter. This fic is quickly climbing into the ranks of my all-time favorites.
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:21 AM · On: The Jump
fantastic as always
Reviewer: chica_b108 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:20 AM · On: The Jump
Aahhhh, I feel a sweet relief not that you have updated. Your story is like a drug to me, so that would make you my dealer...haha!
This chapter was just awesomely sweet. I love the interactions between Edward and Alice, they are such kindred spirits. Alice is such a sweet person, but is forceful enough in her own to get Edward to progress for his own well-being.
I am so seriously anticipating the Volturi vist. Thanks so much for another wonderful chapter, you rock!!
~Cristina
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:19 AM · On: The Jump
enjoyed, . .
Reviewer: JennSven (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:16 AM · On: The Jump
I love the Alice/Edward time. Hes able to learn so much more from her, and hes really starting to trust her. I'm anxious for the volturi chapter. I'm hoping Aro will touch him and tell what happened to him. Hopefully he won't take him... Great chapter!
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