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Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:02 PM · On: The Hunt

I have very pecific standards to what I read fanfictionwise... I only read AH because I find it pretty much impossible to write realistically something one doesn't have actual experience with... and I read more mature (AKA smutty) fics, because if I'm going ti spend time reading about characters that people want to toy with, I might as well live vicariously through them. XD

That said... I've had people rec'ing this story to me left and right for quite a while, and as I procrastinated responding to reviews for my newest chapter (lol) I needed somethign to do besides WORK on the next chapter for once... And I saw this. And I saw the banner and I'm like "Wow... she used THAT for the banner? I guess I can start reading, and if I don't like it I can walk away..."

And now I have to say I'm a bit peeved because I really like where this is going! I'm intrigued! And I like the vamps here, and the buffy reference, and Bella knowing about their secret from the start instead of dragging on and on until she found out... So yeah. The very concept of the story is amazing, your grammar is impeccable, and I'm hooked. Thanks a bunch for helping me with my procrastination needs, love. ^.^



Author's Response:

I'm so curious to see if you continue to enjoy it! So -- you like the banner, you hate the banner? You like the statue? I'm curious about this banner reference -- like what it did for you. So awful that you wanted to read it or just that you love the statue. LOL!

 

Anyway -- I'm very excited to see how you take to future chapters. The first chapter is a little different than the rest, so we'll see :D

 

Thanks so much for reviewing hon! And no probs on the procrastination front -- your review allowed me to procrastinate a bit as well :P

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:01 PM · On: The Jump

thanks for the update!!!


“What about a syringe?” he finally asked, almost too silently for even me to hear.

 

 

Was this how Edward was changed??????? I still haven't figured it out but I wonderd if this how it was done to him

 

loved the bella/edwardness

 

loved the sister brother conversation between edward and alice

 

please update ASAP

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:53 PM · On: The Jump

Run, Edward, run! It's so awesome to see him becoming the vamp we all love so much! I noticed your chapters are getting longer too. Thanks!

Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:17 PM · On: The Jump

It was worth the wait!

Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:15 PM · On: The Jump

Edward is so cute. I love this Edward and Bella. I was sitting there reading  begging her to peck his lips. Poor things they just don't know what to do.

Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:15 PM · On: The Jump

GREAT UPDATE>>>Still lovin' it!!

Reviewer: JAustenlover (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:14 PM · On: The Jump

Michelle,

I have not been the best of reviewers, I'm afraid. My apologies. I have loved this story from day one, and it continues to surprise me and delight me.

Thanks for continuing to make it unique. You deserve an award for this!

I loved the interaction between Edward and Alice. I'm sure he is learning at vampiric speed - we don't necessarily see this because of his hesitance to talk. Reading minds will give him a more balanced perspective of what goes on around him.

And yes, I am a bit terrified for Aro's visit. But also looking forward to it.

Thanks again for keeping me so entertained and mesmerized with this!

JA

Reviewer: JJ1 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:59 PM · On: The Jump

yyyaaayyy i love it when you update!

Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:50 PM · On: The Jump

Hi Michelle I'm REALLY enjoying your vampire in the basement story. It's not predictable in anyway and i have a few ideas on some things so i might message you and see what you think. And the only reason i say that is coz i'd HATE for you to run into a wall and stop writing chapters. i really want to see what's going to happen. thankyou keep writing i'll be reading =)

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:49 PM · On: The Basement

Bella really has no self preservation. Is the vampire edward?

Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:42 PM · On: The Jump

Loved it! Nominated you at those Bellie award thingies! Awsome job!

Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:41 PM · On: The Jump

Lovely as always, and I'll definitely be nominating this one for something!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:36 PM · On: The Jump

Another great chapter.  Thank you so much for your willingness to share your story with us all.

Loved the growing interactions between Edward and Alice.  It's inevitable that they will come to love each other like siblings, but it's very interesting to see their relationship blossom.  

Also loving the budding relationship between Edward and Bella.  It's such a fun twist to see them in reversed positions (somewhat) Edward as the shy and scared one, and Bella as the strong and somewhat confident one.

Can't wait to learn what actually happened to Edward, but I'm going to practice patience, I know it will be worth the wait.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Rowzy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:34 PM · On: The Jump

Awesome... I dont know what else to say... Now to go nominate you!

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:28 PM · On: The Balcony

Wow I wasnt expecting him to reveal he woke up in a cage! Thats crazy!!!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:23 PM · On: The Jump

I am very happy that you are well. RL can mess up the best laid plans. 

I like that Alice is also bonding with Edward by getting him out of that room and stretching his boundaries. The conversation about her gift while they were outside was really well done, especially the weaknesses of her visions. I can't believe Bella once again grabbed her vampire and took him upstairs. She missed the opportunity to reinforce the work that Alice started by having him socialize with the Cullens, while she continued the game.

I missed my vampire story very much. Thank you for updating. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:21 PM · On: The Jump

good job i love that edward is finally getting aware of his self maybe he'll talk to the rest of the family if not carlise and esme

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:14 PM · On: The Jump

Thanks for the update. I always look forward to new chapters. Glad Edward got to get out and run!

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:09 PM · On: The Bath

Oh my!!! Gosh I got teary eyed when he spoke

Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:01 PM · On: The Jump

aww, I loved Alice's POV. It was great seeing them bond a little bit. I'm glad Edward is coming out of his shell!

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:01 PM · On: The Jump

That was a fun chapter.  It is like he is doing vampire physical therapy.  I hope E & B have some progress before anything scary happens.  Maybe a little kiss?

I guess the Volturi should be arriving soon.  I'll hold out hope they are noncanon and end up being on the good team.  The evil scientists that tortured a vampire into needing a blankie deserve a round with the Guard. 

Reviewer: Zipkins (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:51 PM · On: The Jump

Wow. This is truly amazing. The manner how you reversed the typical E/B role is simply wonderful and Edward - the poor dear, my heart goes to him. I really don't think there is much I can add to your 3000 odd reviews that are doubtlessly full praises. I've already developed some theories in regards to Edward's past -evil werewolf scientists, anyone? ;), but I'm sure that whatever you've come up will trump any theory of mine. And your character portrayls... All that really is left for me is to heap more additional praise on you truly amazing fic. Brava! And good luck with future chapters.

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:37 PM · On: The Jump

Don't apologize. The wait was well worth it. I just love this story and I will stick with it to the end!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:10 PM · On: The Jump

Alice rocks!

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:07 PM · On: The Jump

YOu trulu amaze me with chapters that outshine the last....thanks

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