What a great story!  This is not the kind of storyline I usually read but I am glad I gave it a chance.  I love how Bella protects "my vampire" and I just love all the medical  drama you have added.  I hope this story continues for a long while it has become one of my favorites. 

i really like this...and i don't review things. i like the struggle that everyone seems to be enduring in one way or another

great chapter

Loved it! Update soon!

Michelle,  The categories in the Bellie Awards were trickier than I thought.  I nominated this story for "Plot You Wish You Came Up With", since I think your story is so very unoriginal, and so very, very cool.  I thought about it but felt I really couldn't put it under "Favorite Darkward" since Edward is so very sweet to at least Bella.  Anyway, good luck.  I'm pimping you out to all my TW friends.  I LOVE your story!

 

keep it coming!! :-) please!

And please don't let the Volturi do anything too horrible... :-(

 

woohoo Edward got to RUN! It's good to see that he's allowing Alice to chip away at him now :)

nice

:((((((((

She put clothes on him.... :((((

excellent chapter despite my immense disappointment at the end, Lol.

So Bella was being attacked by another vampire when Alice found her? That's how she knows of their existence? I wonder if it was Jasper or if it was James or someone... hm...

Crap! I had to leave 4 minutes ago! bye! XD

This is a turning point in that Edward is finally starting to realize his abilities as a vampire! And Alice & Edward are starting to bond, which is so great! I can tell that is is already concerned that Alice sees Bella becoming one of them. I wonder if he actually wants that in your story & would want to do it by syringe so it is less painful for her. And I love that Bella is making herself more "girlie" for Edward. Great chapter!

LindyP :)

i came to check it out, and stayed up almost whole night. i'm still recovering, but i hav to say-it's beautiful.

i simply adore edward bella interaction, so unique and...special. when he spoke to her the first time, i almost screamed from joy and emotions!

and when he said to her that she's perfect....wow....:)

oh i love it-you got one more obsessive reader after tonight, in any case. ;)

p.s.: note to alice: i know you're unprepared and quick in your thinking, but you can't just blurt that your bf is in love, to the person she's in love with, when even she isn't clear on that!cccccc!:)))

 

Author's Response:

Aww, I'm very happy to have one more obsessive fan! Thank you so much hon, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

I'm trying (hopefully somewhat successfully), to incorporate the difficulties of learning to deal with Edward's mind reading into the story.

There are all these little intricacies that people often just completely overlook! But the side plots are all there, and the cullen clan learnin' to deal with Edward's mind reading and coming to terms with it is one of 'em! Thanks so much for the note to Alice, I love it!

And for the review. Thank you, so very much.

I love this story! I'll wait as long as I need to for updates. I need to know what happens and what happened to Edward! Although, I do appreciate quick updates, too.