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Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:32 AM · On: The Reunion

Great chapter! I'm glad that Bella told him what she was feeling. I'm curious of what Aro was thinking and I can't wait for Edward to tell Bella that rest of what happened in the next chapter.

I'm glad that Edward trusts the other Cullens and realized that Carlisle jumped in front of Jane to protect him. Again, great chapter, you never disappoint with each update and its worth the wait.

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:22 AM · On: The Reunion

SO beautiful. I don't even have the words.

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:18 AM · On: The Reunion

Oh my word.  That was absolutely beautiful.  Amazing.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:18 AM · On: The Visit

GOOD FUCKING GOD!  THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER THUS FAR!  You don't know how long I've waited for Edward's history to be revealed.  It was and still is driving me crazy.  The mystery is almost too much. 

Aro was absoloutely terrifying in this chapter.  He's the picture of easy going evil.  He's got a kind face and a black heart.  The detail with the gloves was great.  Nice white gloves, reminds me of an anime called Hellsing. 

I say again, THIS WAS SO FRIGGIN AWSOME.  And now Bella is in Floraida  away from her vampire.  Jane was terrifying also, the little she devil.  Apt description of her as Satan.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:18 AM · On: The Visit

GOOD FUCKING GOD!  THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER THUS FAR!  You don't know how long I've waited for Edward's history to be revealed.  It was and still is driving me crazy.  The mystery is almost too much. 

Aro was absoloutely terrifying in this chapter.  He's the picture of easy going evil.  He's got a kind face and a black heart.  The detail with the gloves was great.  Nice white gloves, reminds me of an anime called Hellsing. 

I say again, THIS WAS SO FRIGGIN AWSOME.  And now Bella is in Floraida  away from her vampire.  Jane was terrifying also, the little she devil.  Apt description of her as Satan.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Reviewer: Galathea82 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:16 AM · On: The Reunion

Ahhhhhhhhhhfuck that was awesome!!! I have a goofy smile in my face after that kiss ahhh

Awesome chapter Jane is a bitch!!!!!

bye 

Reviewer: grosie (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:09 AM · On: The Reunion

I LOVED IT!!! Please update ASAP

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:01 AM · On: The Reunion

That was perfect!!! Wonder where the relationship will go from here. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:00 AM · On: The Reunion

Oh I loved it.  I have been waiting for that forever. LOL.  can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:33 AM · On: The Reunion

You made me want my first kiss all over again. Oh golly and the slow torture of him not immediately saying he loved her back *sigh*

I think it was perfect how she chose to be completely honest with him over her fear of rejection. And I nearly had heart fail when he questioned her about why she had ever come to him at all.

 

MmmmMmmmm good

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:27 AM · On: The Reunion

Agony, agony, agony.....and then the first kiss!  YES!!!  I never thought they'd get here!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:19 AM · On: The Reunion

AWWW, just awww.  Sweet reunion!

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:18 AM · On: The Reunion

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!*
FINALLY!!!!! I am so excited! They kissed! Yay!!  Oh, I'm not going to be able to wipe the smile off of my face for the rest of the day now! Yay!

Reviewer: Anne Shirley-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:15 AM · On: The Reunion

Best.Kiss.Ever.

Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:06 AM · On: The Reunion

You're doing great! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:59 AM · On: The Reunion

“I need you, too,” he whispered,

Your Edward makes me melt, and you capture the very best of Bella.  This is so sweet and tender and perfect.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Castle Branche (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:33 AM · On: The Reunion

:) Yay!!! Finally they know how they feel for each other.

Reviewer: jkhjc1019 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:32 AM · On: The Reunion

SIGH.....what a chapter.  I love this story and this chapter is one of my favorites.  My heart so breaks for Edward.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:27 AM · On: The Reunion

AH!!! YAY!!!

I'm soo happy right now from this chapter! You gotta give her credit, it would be hard to tell someone you love them if you really don't know how they will react and if they feel the same way. And then he didn't say anything...that would be hard to handle. But I loved their kisses! So sweet :)

What did he mean by "Jane knew"...like she knew his history and what had happened to him? And Aro was hiding stuff...did he know too?

Ahh! Great chapter!

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:25 AM · On: The Reunion

It was more than awesome!

I can't believe you tricked us like that in the beginning.  I just KNEW there wasn't going to be a kiss after she stopped in the beginning!  And then POW!

Even if you didn't mean it, I like how it was kind of symbolic that Bella had the blanket this time.  She's always comforted Edward with it.  He's always the one left vulnerable and had it as his only shield.  The places were switched for once.

And his happy smile!!!  Just aaww lol THank you!

Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:18 AM · On: The Reunion

YES!!! I just squealed along with Bella! I was so disappointed at the beginning when there was no kiss, so imagine my surprise when it came!!! "I need you too." <--- That's pretty much as good as 'I love you too' in my book! My heart is bursting with happy. Go Edward and Bella!

 

Edward isn't going to leave, is he? You've got me worried with his questions to Bella about it being better if he was gone. If you pull a New Moon, I shall be very put out...

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:15 AM · On: The Reunion

Things I love:

* Bella's struggle... even if I desperately wanted her to pounce on him immediately.

* Edward in a wet t-shirt

* Edward sniffing her under the ear

* The way Edward touches his bicep when starting to talk about Aro, such a little detail but so something that we would all do.

* Bella's ILY confession. 

* Edward's concern for her

* The concept that Aro was lying in his thoughts, manipulating

* That he realizes Esme & Carlisle's involvement in trying to comfort him

*  "I can see why you love them." - alarms, bells, whistles - he understands LOVE!!!

* The forehead smooch

** God, I hope he wanted to try what I wanted him to try. **

* EPIC description of an EPIC first kiss - worth the wait... even when I didn't want to wait. :-)

*  Edward's INY confession

* side by side noses

* The playful "let her wait" quick kiss w/ smiles

*  squeals

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:15 AM · On: The Reunion

There first kiss, yeah.

Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:12 AM · On: The Reunion

Great chap!  E is so meek, I'm wondering when he will recover enough to share more of himself with his new family.  I'm also happy for B.  Still nervous about the Volturi though...

Reviewer: ShesGonnaRun05 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:11 AM · On: The Reunion

:-O

They need to kiss more often...that was amazing!

Very good job...I felt just as anxious as Bella did for their reunion haha

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