another great chapter!!

 

AHH!! So cute! I love it, i was so scared for a second there that edward would push away and say i don't love u like that, but no, they kissed! xD update soon please! 

welllll... i suppose it doesn't help that i don't remember the tone from the last chapter to appropriately correlate bella's mood and mentality. but since when did bella get so lustful?

something about the chapter that just didn't flow well for me. there was little to no angst through any of the previous chapters, they were merely innocent acts of love, but this time it was just so... out of character for her to be wanting the kiss so badly.

i don't know, i felt like the events of this chapter came straight out of left field.

Author's Response:

She noticed him before.

She's 18 and in love for the first time. She just spent a weekend away from him and is finally resolved to show him how much she cares about him. She's not necessarily so much horny, although she is taking notice of him more as a man and less as a broken animal, but rather she's eager and excited to experience her first love with him, etc.

 A couple chapters ago she admitted she loved him, then we had this 3 week gap in which we didn't get much of anything, then we had Alice POV for the run, then last chapter with very little bellaxedward time (although if you recall, she was tracing his abs, thinking about pushing him forward, holding herself back because he was about to have a shitty weekend, etc).

Then she made up her mind to kiss him, came back, and that's where we left off. Although if it didn't sit with you it didn't sit with you. Sorry about that, thanks for reviewing to voice your concerns..

- Michelle

That was fantastic!  What a wonderful kiss and declaration...just amazing. 

And now I'm all caught up and have to wait just like everyone else...oh the sweet torture!

More please!

Yay Bella for telling him what you feel.  I don't think he can say it, not because he doesn't feel it, but because he doesn't know what it is.  He's had such a short time of being treated for lack of a better term, human, that he doesn't know what to do with the kindness.  As always, excellent update.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

That was perfect, just perfect! I loved that they kissed! Boy, what I wouldn't give for Edward's POV on that!!! Any chance of that ever happening? Can't wait for your next post!

LindyP :)

Poor Edward!  Who did that to him?!?!  How horrible, I hope that Bella can bring peace to him soon.

Sqee! Heck, I'm squealing here and I didn't even get a kiss! Yay! Perfect! Although I've been dying for them to kiss, I'm glad it wasn't at the beginning of the chapter, this went so well.

*SQUEEEEEEEEE*

I damn near hyperventilated. That was perfect.

Oh my god!  I'm so excited there was finally some happiness for Bella and Edward, let's just hope it lasts for a little while (crosses fingers)

Cute perfect moment!

That was so touching.  I would have squealed too.  You gotta love vulnerable Edward!