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Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:37 AM · On: The Reunion

AWESOME!!!!

Reviewer: kaiyla (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:15 AM · On: The Reunion

Wow, that was just awesome. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:50 AM · On: The Reunion

Ah fuck! *geeky smile*

Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:10 AM · On: The Reunion

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: chica_b108 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:37 PM · On: The Reunion

They kissed! They kissed! They kissed! You made me so freakin happy!! This chapter was so sweet and intimate. I cant wait for more! You rock Michelle! Love ya.

~Cristina

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:30 PM · On: The Reunion

So beautiful, the writing and the content.

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:48 PM · On: The Reunion

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

 

HELL YES.. that was the most perfect first kiss I have read in my entire life.

 

period.

 

Do they happen like that in real life? where can I get one? hehe.

Reviewer: Cendy Hale Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:27 PM · On: The Reunion

A-MAZING chapter!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lilg24 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:17 PM · On: The Reunion

this is amazing....i'm absolutely loving dis...looking 4ward to the rest

Reviewer: sb7 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:57 PM · On: The Reunion

I like talkative Edward :)  His version of the events going on mentally between he and Jane and Aro gave a very nice new dimension to the version in the previous chapter.  You always get the impression, with Aro, that he's fake with Carlisle.

I'm glad Bella didn't fling herself at Edward, and her mental deliberations were pretty accurate, "I totally should...well, maybe not....yeah but why not....stop being greedy...but maybe he wants it..."  And then she got what she (clearly Edward too) wanted.  I think I like it most because of the line "I need you, too." It's not "love" but it's getting there :)

Oh yeah, and I like how he was feeling Bella out now that he knows how dangerous it's been for her to get so close to him.

Reviewer: Pari625 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:21 PM · On: The Reunion

Oh YAYYYY! What a juicy chapter. I loved the anticipation of them leading up to that kiss...her battling her desire to give him a tug...his breath on her face...whee! Great chapter. Loved it. And now I really can't wait for your next update. Yum!

Reviewer: Love_Twilight (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:20 PM · On: The Reunion

Amazing!  I have really enjoyed these past two chapters... thank you for the declarations and kisses! 

 

 

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:14 PM · On: The Reunion

OMG they finally kissed, I just love your Edward!  Never thought I would enjoy a storyline like this but this has turned out to be one of my favorites if not my fav.  Please don't wait long for an update.  My heart can't take it!

Reviewer: amandasj (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:09 PM · On: The Reunion

SQUEAL!!! What a lovely chapter...so happy they had their first kiss and it was perfect :) But he hasn't said I love you yet!!!

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:27 PM · On: The Reunion

Wow! what a kiss!...poor dear Edward...what an unfortunate series of events.

Thanks for writing...looking forward to more!

I can't sleep just thinking about the next day.

 

Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:07 PM · On: The Reunion

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:05 PM · On: The Reunion

Giddy screams over here too!  While the gravity of the situation isn't lost, and there seems to be alot to overcome and deal with, Bella has found her reason for living-and maybe Edward too!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:43 PM · On: The Reunion

Oh my god, you almost killed me with anticipation for that kiss. But it was priceless..loved it. And when he said "I need you too"...oh my god. I squealed like a little girl too. Can't wait for next chapter, and more kisses. I was wondering..are you planning on writing some chapters on EPOV, or maybe outtakes for some chapters...I would kill to know what Edward was thinking when she told him she loved him, or when he thought about kissing her. Great chapter as always. :)

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:38 PM · On: The Reunion

Thanks for another great chapter. Edward in the rain hugging Bella was very romantic. I am truly impressed how this reunion opened up Edward's character. He actually spoke a lot. I love that you still maintain the rule that when Edward speaks it is not filled with nonsense. Everything said is important. It makes me listen that much harder for hidden meanings and clues. It was so sad that Aro's visit forced Edward to see things that he did not want to remember about his torturous time in captivity. I loved how he opened up to Bella about what he observed about the true intentions of Jane and Aro. I look forward to hearing more about what Edward read from Aro. I also loved that Bella and Edward revisited the Twilight debate about him being too dangerous for Bella to love. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:26 PM · On: The Reunion

OMG!!! That was awesome!!  I have so missed this story....RL has been kicking my butt, so I have had a folder of email updates of stories that I need to read...and this one was at the top of my list!  So not only did I love this chapter, the kiss was so worth waiting for....I also read that big long beast that was the previous chapter!!  Aro still creeps me out, and I wanne beat Jane up, but it was good to get a little more insight into what Edward went through.  I hope that since Edward has seen how wonderful the Cullens really are that he will eventually become more at ease around them.  I do have to admire Bella's restraint cuz I would have jumped Edward and molested him the second I saw him!!!  Oh and hell yeah and thank you for the mind picture of Edward in the rain....yum!   So thanks for two kick ass chapters and a new fix of my favorite crack!!!

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:07 PM · On: The Reunion

Awwww!   Very touching and sweet.  And I hope you know that the anticipation almost killed me!!  lol   Great job!   Thank you so much for writing.     :)

Reviewer: g-riley (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:54 PM · On: The Reunion

I love this story.  I was so excited when I saw that the story was updated.  I saved it until evening, so that I could savor your masterful writing.  Thank you.

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:49 PM · On: The Reunion

Absolutely charming.

Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:46 PM · On: The Reunion

Oh, this chapter was magic! I was all okay with her not pushing and kissing him, because I got that it could really freak him out. Then, you go and have them kiss! Awesome!

She told him she loved him! Although he didn't say it back exactly, I think him telling her he needs her too is well, just perfect!

I tell you what, this story pwns me! Big time! I just love it each time!

Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:40 PM · On: The Reunion

helplessly romantic....

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