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Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:39 PM · On: The Reunion

Perfectly written first kiss!

Reviewer: ajoyce86 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:08 PM · On: The Reunion

Awesome.  What more can I say?

Reviewer: photomama (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:00 PM · On: The Reunion

it has happened! TVITB is officially cute! :)

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:30 PM · On: The Reunion

Loved it!!! Perfect!! She got her kiss!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:03 PM · On: The Reunion

omg! i just started reading this story today and i love it love it love it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:21 PM · On: The Reunion

aww they kissed, this is so sweet, please update soon

Reviewer: BellaCara (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:13 PM · On: The Reunion

Swoon. Perfection!

Reviewer: Sarahhh (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:09 PM · On: The Reunion

*giggles*

This story is really good. (:

Reviewer: SanDiegoFan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:59 PM · On: The Reunion

Ahhhh!!!!!  They kissed!!!!  That was SUCH a fantastic chapter!!! Yay! :)

Reviewer: rohmareng (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:36 PM · On: The Reunion

perfect

 

[thoughts:

1) go and kiss him!

2) okay, you're right, it's too much to ask of him....arrrrgg anyway, kiss him!

3) nooooo her rational side is right, but just kiss him!

4) yaaaaay he kisses her!!!!]

 

I especially liked your style there "and suddenly we were floating...." and "it was ecstasy" and "the moment was perfect"

Reviewer: Alisha (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:56 PM · On: The Reunion

Thank God;) I thought I was going to have to wait for that kiss lol. I'm very much still enjoying the story. I can't wait to see more intimacy between Bella and her vampire. Thanks:) I wa sso excited when I saw the story was updated lol.

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:52 PM · On: The Reunion

oh my gosh! i just finished this whole story and i am LOVING it!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:09 PM · On: The Reunion

Ooh, they kissed! Good for Eddie. More soon Please.

Reviewer: Rowzy (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:56 AM · On: The Reunion

omg awesome.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:34 AM · On: The Reunion

Oh, how tender and beautiful.  Wonderfully written! 

Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:35 AM · On: The Reunion

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so baeutifull!!!!!!

I swear it melted my heart with this first kiss,so so sweet.

I love how things are progresing.

Reviewer: Eliza Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:20 AM · On: The Reunion

Another fan-freaking-tastic chapter!  I'm completely overwhelmed. 

Aro's hidden thoughts scare me, actually they terrify me.  It's far from over and the Cullens had better be prepared.  Yikes!  There is so much here!  Holy crow!  He opened up about the torture he endured at the hands of his captors.  There's always so much in your story, food for study, I suppose.

Hmmm, Edward's comments regarding how it might be for the best if he leaves have left a cold stone of worry in the pit of my stomach.  I just hope he doesn't decide that in order to protect Bella he must leave.  However he does seem to care for Bella, and despite what Bella thinks he does understand love.  His comment about knowing why she loves the Cullens proves it. 

THE KISS!  Absolute perfection! Beautifully written!My heart throbs at the sweet simplicity of the moment!  Thank you!

I can't wait to see where this story is going to go!  Cheers!

 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!

You're right - it IS far from over, but the Volturi aren't supposed to be terribly villainized. Yes, they're creepy, but they're not the bad guys, and as of now, they're on the same side as the Cullens :)

So glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing :)

Michelle

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:39 AM · On: The Reunion

Wow, this is one of the best fanfic stories I've read! It's well written and I just love it! :) I'm glad Edward is feeling better, and their kiss...aww:) I can't wait to read more!! :D

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:17 AM · On: The Reunion

Squee! More progress. At least he looked happy at the end, because he was definitely not happy when she told him that she loved him...

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:57 AM · On: The Reunion

That was amazing, such a great first kiss!!! I can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: Bellward (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:41 AM · On: The Reunion

Great Part.

I'm glad that they let each know their true feelings, and I'm glad that Edward had Bella to talk to after such a traumatic experience.

 

Reviewer: mikki13tx (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:21 AM · On: The Reunion

awww

Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:40 AM · On: The Reunion

squeeeeeeeeee they kissed they kissed they kissed -dances about- oh you do realise this whole chapter was a work up to them kissing right? tee hee thanks michelle  hanging for more as always <3

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:28 AM · On: The Reunion

AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GENUINELY SWEET AND SATISFYING!!!!! i love you soo much for that kiss!! i've waited for it and then it came and not just once but twice... two kisses. you are so kind to your readers. i love it!!

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:17 AM · On: The Reunion

awzies

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