Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:56 PM · On: this fight he cannot win
Great chapter :) I love the length and the details. I don't necessarily like rereading the same thing twice, like what you're doing here, but it's working for you. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Strange and beautiful
Wow! You've started off great! I loved the little quirks you've given Bella. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: joannacamilley (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:53 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
You know that 5+7+1+0=13, which is an unlucky number? lol, just saying. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Strange and beautiful
Great first chapter. Makes me want to read the next one.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:46 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
I love these two! I can't believe that you had him drop her TWICE!!! She is stubborn and so is he...I can't wait to see what is in store for them.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:37 PM · On: World was on fire...no one could save me but you
More please, I love it!!!
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:08 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
more please.
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:25 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
man why does he keep dropping her? well anyway it's a great storyso.....please update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:03 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
I don't know, but these two have some anger issues to work out!
Reviewer: inbetweenthemoonandyou (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:56 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Oooh, can't wait for the next chapter!!!! And congrats, that's awesome!
Reviewer: Juvarni (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:22 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Ouch! He's gonna break her tailbone if he keeps dropping her like that! ;-)
I really like this story and where it's going. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:54 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Great start!! They're both so stubborn and pigheaded!! lol
Continue!
Reviewer: Starla ann grace (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:18 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Great story I can't believe Edward dropped her on her ass twice. Congrats on the med school hope all works out great for you.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:42 PM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Great story! I can't wait to see what's next.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:28 AM · On: this fight he cannot win
I love the way you write! I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:15 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Congratulations on the upcoming med school graduation, and securing a residency! That rocks!
Wow, Bella is really not playing nice! She's mean, needy, frustrated, and unfocused. I guess you could say the girl is in shock! Maybe even has a bit of a concussion, I imagine? Poor Edward is fighting off his desire to eat her, and his attraction to her (although her current demeanor seems to help with that), and is probably wondering where that sweet girl went.
I do hope it's not a few months before you post again, but RL is more important. I will try to be patient.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:15 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
great chapter! can't wait for the update. congratulations!
Reviewer: purpledragonfly74 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:15 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Match week! It's been crazy around here too! Did you get your first pick? (I obviously work at a med school myself...)
Oh yea, and I love the story too.
Author's Response: I actually did get my first choice...which I am ecstatic about! I'm sure you must have been busy with all of the festivities at your school, too. Thanks for reading the story!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:49 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Very interesting story!
I am really enjoying your writing.
Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:30 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
congratz for your almost graduation & getting into residency, must be really exciting.
anyway, a human Alice? ooh poor Jasper, i wonder if he will somehow stumbled upon Alice and change her, and give the Cullens a surprise visit...
i applaud Edward's treatment to Bella...whats gotten into her bonnet, really... one moment she thinks she doesnt deserve him, and next she earn it all these while she clearly remembers the kiss....im like DUH
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:32 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Well it is Bella we are talking about she will find some kind of trouble to walk in don't you think? Alone with Edward on a deserted island hmmmm!
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: PixieGirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:08 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
This is a great story, Its really different from what i've read before...
Keep writing!!!
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:21 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Gah, these kids and there rediculous emotions. Bella acting like a brat and Edward losing his cool. I am glad they are both in one piece!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:01 AM · On: rescue me before I fall into despair
Good luck and congratulations with med school! That's awesome! I would love to read more but I can only imagine how busy you must be. I'll take what I can get, though :-)
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:47 AM · On: this fight he cannot win
This was beautifully done, the move to blood lust, then to lust, and then to love. Completely believable.
I will go on reading and counting on updates
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