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Reviewer: olympic1340 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, I feel like I could read this story over and over. I love how Edward is so broken and yet still so good. I really like the scenes between him and Carlisle.... he is trying so hard. Please update soon!
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm loving it! can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 7
wow.. edward's a hero, but i feel so bad for him.. he had such a hard life.
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
I loved it and I crave more!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, usually when it's AH, it doesn't generally follow much of the book, but this one does. It's great!!
Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this so far, I promised myself I would only read the first couple of chapters then get on with my work and yet I just went through the first 6 in one go!
Your writing's great, I can't wait to read more and see where you take the plot...
Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ugh, I'm getting so sick of this signing in crap. Everytime I try to read your story the website signs me out for some odd reason, unless I read it within 10 min or something!
Anyway, I've began to really really love this story, it's great, really! I can't wait until you continue again. Seriously, great story and I can't wait to read more! I just hope Edward forgives himself sooner rather than later, but with the things he's been through it's not really surprising he's acting this way at all. Either way, I still can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Nicely done with the Van scene. Great job.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
i feel so bad for edward! but i'm so thankful that he can run as fast as he can, because bella would haev been seriously injured. anyway great job!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter, you're showing Edward's emotions really well!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG I was like crying after that dream that edward had of his father's death! But i have to say that Alice playing tinkerbell is a perfect part for her.
Reviewer: mastiff mom (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Prologue
Good Job! You almost had me all weepy for poor Edward there at the end!
Can't wait for the rest of the story!
Reviewer: fuzzytomato (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am enjoying your fic so far. I'm a fan of angst goodness. So thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
ngh god that sucks poor edward!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh God...he was what, five? Oh, that's awful, I'm almost crying for him right now. That's just, oh my. Great chapter, but the last part's just, oh. Wow.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
k, ok.... I undertand that girls before doesn't interest him, but I think it was completely rude not to even give his name when Bella introduce herself.
I am expecting a very distant Bella because of his behavior. I will if I were her.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying your story! I am looking forward to seeing what is going to happen!
Reviewer: rightshadeofcrimson (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
oooh! i really like this, can't wait to see were this story goes!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
awww i feel so bad for edward! but this is a great story!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
I like this. I can't wait to read where you go with it.
Alice.x
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
i can't wait for the next update!!! it's good to see edward broken...good to see that he is not always the savior... :)
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting spin on Edward's internal monster. I look forward to seeing how this develops.
Reviewer: Shug (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, this is so sad. Poor Edward. I feel so badly for him. Thank goodness for the Cullens.
A very intriguing beginning. I'll be looking forward to more.
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