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Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 15
Nice transitional piece and build up...I think Edward will still kick Mike't tiny butt. More please.
Reviewer: twilighted4ever (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 15
i'm really enjoying this story, im glad that edward is beginning to see that he is worth it1
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 15
jeez i can just feel the drama that's going to come (or maybe i'm just imagining it?) anyway - more! :)
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
Another great chapter! Please keep updating quickly!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was absolutely wonderful! I loved the dream. It made me almost cry. Terrific!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 15
Uh oh spaghetti oh! Yeah, I'm acting like a little kid. Love the chapter!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 15
Uh oh spaghetti oh! Yeah, I'm acting like a little kid. Love the chapter!
Reviewer: twilight101 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter9
i love this chapter it's so sweet!
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great Story! I love it, and Bella is so sweet to Edward.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14
HaHa, got caught by Carlie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked how you incorperated Alice and Jasper's history (<3<3<3<3JaSpEr<3<3<3<3) and Emmett's and Rosalie's way funny. UPDATE EVERYDAY, YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!!?!?!
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 13
That was simply beautiful.
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh thank you. My poor Edward needed some serious sleep and something to eat. I was really starting to worry about him. I love the road you have Bella on. Her anger towards his mother is appropriate and eventually he will have to see that he harbors some of that also. I will be waiting on pins for the next update.
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 14
No, I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep going.............PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 14
It definitley wasn't boring, it was great! As much as your ability to write great angst is what I think makes the story so brilliant, it was nice to have a little break!
You've also made me really want to eat brownies now...lol!
Looking forward for more of the drama, hopefully you can keep updating as quickly as you have been!
Author's Response: I still can't get over people calling my story brilliant. Insane. And yes, I should be able to keep updating quickly because I actually ahead of what I'm posting. :o) Thank you so so so much.
Reviewer: IlCantante527 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
Boring? Are you kidding?! Edward DID need a reprieve, and I'm glad you gave him one. This was cute. I'm not gonna say I can't wait for the rest of the drama and angst to play out, but I know that's what your story is, so I'll just stay I'm still on for the ride =)
Reviewer: ECullen23 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
Okay, I love this
It really does like make me cry and i love Edward and Bella's relationship.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 14
very sweet!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 14
I really liked angst free Edward. I hope he doesnt have too much more drama headed his way!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a great chapter. I loved his speech about the book!!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 14
Not boring at all!! The poor boy needs some happiness in his life : )
Author's Response: I am so glad! Thank you!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
Urg, angst... oh well, we knew it was coming, right? Nice break for him and when will he ever tell the whole story to either Bella or Esme/Carlisle? We wait and watch I guess. Thank you again and more plz!
Author's Response: More is coming, I promise.
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awh. Bella, the savior
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
This was so not boring, I enjoyed the sweetness of Edward letting his guard down and letting himself be happy. Thank you for this really beautiful story. I smiled so much as I visualized the tenderness!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I smiled when I read it :o)
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
This is so beautiful. I love the dream and how Bella is leading him out of the prison in his mind.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 14
How sweet!! He deserves a sweet day.
Author's Response: I thought so too :o)
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