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Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 17
Thank you for a happy ending. I love the balance between the fluff and angst in this story. I'm glad you chose to have him reveal his secrets upfront, much in character for Edward. And also realistic, for that matter. And I am glad that you didn't have it be all fine and dandy afterwards. Edward still feels the guilt almost the same as ever, but with a small glimmer of hope. The angst in the story is within, him coming to terms with his own guilt rather than the "big" revelation to his family and then it's all over. Nice plot with Alice.
Reviewer: hershortness (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 17
This is a great chapter. You have such a good sense about healthy family relationships and how much Edward needs this to be healed. Thank you for taking us through it through his eyes.
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
*tears* so very touching (:
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 17
sniff* sniff* AWWW, that was beautiful :D
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
"But more importantly, for the first time in nearly ten years, I felt the safety of unconditional parental love."
That line just tugs at my heart! He knows he's loved and wanted by his new family and Bella! Now he just has to get rid of the demons in his mind that keep telling him he's responsible for his mother's death. Thank you for quick update!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
What a heartwarming chapter. I enjoyed reading every single word. It came to life and you are an amazing writer. Be proud!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I was a little worried about Alice and Emmett. But deep down I knew that it was nothing.
Reviewer: Lady of Shadows (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love this story. It is very well written and the characters are amazing.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
Very good chapter. I'm so glad the "family" talk went well. Poor Edward!
Reviewer: bandmlove (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 17
Aww, the ending made me teary eyed. I love a good happy ending to a really angsty chapter. Definitely made my day by reading this.
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 17
yay! some success!
Reviewer: xoyourstrulyxo (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 17
seriously i just got like teary eyed at the end! this was soo good! i love the cullens and i loveee this story cant wait for more!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 17
That was good. I was really disappointed in emmett and alice at first
Reviewer: arianna (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
It's so clever the way you've linked the events of the book/film canon with your own story. I'm fascinated by this, can't wait to read it all!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
THE CAN'T TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE TOMORROW OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
Sad chapter, but very good. I hope Edward wil get the help he needs to see that he isn't responsible for his Mom's death.
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 16
argh! please update soon! I want esme to shake some sense into edward!
Reviewer: Forever and Always (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 16
Oooh nice cliffy... That one has me shakin in my boots. Seriously though great story
Reviewer: Estelicia (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 16
please keep the fantastic work up, i love it. i have never cried so much with a book, I LOVE IT. its sad but so touching, so so ... i can't even explain with proper words the feelings this story makes me feel, it amazing wonderful. keep writting. you have talent mate don't let anyone tell you different okay
Reviewer: Hayley_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 16
Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. I can't believe you just stopped it there!!
Btw, I want Mike Newton to be killed ;)
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
MY GOODNESSS! The guilt that Edward feels is overwhelming! That poor guy! I'm so glad he has the Cullen's and Bella in his life! They are all going to help him through this. Especially now that he says that he wants all the guilt to go away. Now they can get him some help!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 16
Poor Edward! :(
Great chapter, though! Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
*GASP* WOW!!!!!!!!!!! oh I can't wait untill you update next!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 16
AHHHHHH! This is going to drive me insane, you have to update....PLEASE????? For the love of everything that is sacred????
Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh sure, just end it there! While I'm sitting here WAITING for more. Great chapter! Great story, update soon!! It really is a fantastic story!
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