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Reviews For Fearless
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 25

One of the best fics around. Thank you so much for writing this! You are an amazing writer and be very proud!

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 25

That was a very sweet ending for them, after everything. Thanks. I'm sad to see this end as well, but I ahve really enjoyed reading.

Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 25

i am sad to see the story end but at least it was a good ending to a good story!!!

Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25

this has been my FAVORITE story on this website. i find it so amazing that this was your first one im really going to miss it. that being said i would really love it if you considered the possibility of writing a sequel. once again great job and i cant wait to read more of your writing!  

Reviewer: twilove (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 25

Excellent story! Can't wait for the alternate ending and the different POVS!

Reviewer: aag513 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 25

this was a gret fic! keep on writing!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 25

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this story was sooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood and great and origonal and brilliant and awsome i loved it your a great writer.

x

 

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oh, sweet adoption!  I thought that they had already done that, but Yeah!!! All is well with the promise of many happy tommorrows!!!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

LOL, nope, they originally took him in as a foster kid.  :o)

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 24

Oh, I didn't want him to beat Mile up, jst out do him by finally joinin a varisty team and becoming captain right away! Nice closeure.  Off to the next chapter!

Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 25

i loved how you put the title as the last word that was really cool it gave it a sense of completion!!!!

i loved your story soo much im sad thats its over =[

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 25

yaaaaay! good job :) I think the ending is perfect as is. thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 24

Wow, great end.  I really liked how you killed off James...I felt like you gave your Edward a lot of closure that way.  I loved the trip back to Chicago too.  It was very sad, but Edward had a chance to talk to his parents and say his goodbyes, and he even has a reminder of his dad now.  Very sweet.  Great story!

And I would definitely be interested in reading about what the other characters were thinking.  Even if it's just for particular chapters of Fearless, or the whole thing.  Either way would be fine.

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hahaha, I'm glad Emmett got some good punches in.  James deserved having his ass kicked, and more. 

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 22

NOOOOO!!!!  I actually teared up a little when I read Edward's notes.  So sad.  He'd better pull through....Carlisle is a doctor, after all!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 24

that made me cry, great chapter

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 24

Edward is out of the hospital and getting better. I'm gld he's getting some closure on Chicago, the house and his old life. With James dead, he won't have to look over his should for the rest of his life.

I agree that it needs a sequel. Usually I feel like people just tack them on but this wouldn't feel quite complete to me. You've let us see the horror he lived with for so long and the depth of it; it would be nice to see some depth of the joy and comfort he's going to experience as well. I'd love to see a HEA - he deserves it. If not a sequel, then a long epilogue. I'd love to see everything he pictured in the gym - graduation, Carlisle and Esme so proud, collage with Bella, acceptance to medical school, marrying Bella and being an uncle to Alice and Emmett's kids. Really truly living life. Right now the proportion of horror over what he's lived with and the fear and nightmares greatly overshadows the healing he's been doing with having a loving family and Bella in his life. I'd just like to see a little more happy time.

Reviewer: Musikkfreak1 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Prologue

I'm so sad the story's coming to an end! I'd LOVE to read a sequel, different POVs etc.! Please, keep on writing!

Reviewer: quiet17 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

aweeee! yes you should DEFINITELY write a sequel!!! uhm maybe you could have a random long lost ___ pop up or something and try to take edward back r have james have an avenging brother that wants to start up where james left off but this time the brther wants to hurt edward by taking away a loved one [bella]. haha i guess i have no idea and i should be forbidden from brainstorming ever again haha. but a sequel would be greatttttttt!!!!!!

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 24

I love your story...so glad he was able to overcome his past and look forward to facing his fears and a bright future ahead.

Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 24

YAY! A SEQUAL!!! I would love to see a lot of sexual tension between Edward and Bella. Something that would want to make me take a cold shower :)

This is the best fan fiction I've ever read! :D

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 24

Wonderful! If you changed the characters so that they're not so recognizably Twilight, this could be a Young Adult novel that would touch the hearts of many. It would make a terrific plot to a movie on Lifetime, too.

While I know your current readers would love to hear more Twilight/Fearless, please consider what you might do to bring this story to a wider audience. If you have any interest in that, indicate it in your response to this post and I'll write back with some websites and other resources.

Best of fortune to you in the future. You are a very gifted writer!

Author's Response:

Hi.  I am curious what you mean by bringing the story to a wider audience....definitely interested.  :o)

Reviewer: daddys_little_cannibal (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 24

Oh...... this was so sweet!!!! Ha Ha I got on to Twilighted and I went to my favorites and, immediately I thought 'my fearless senses are tingling!!! It's been updated!!!!!' It's so sad that htis is almost over!!!!! but still please post the last *sob* chpter soon!!!!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 24

ohhh i love this story! you did a great job with it! and i at least would be very interested in different characters pov, definitly something you should do! (I'm totally encouraging you so start writing them right away :p)

a suggestion: how about not edward confronting mike but alice or emmett or bella...?

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 23

Really beautiful wrap-up. So nice how you switched the plot positions of Edward and Bella (the who saves who). Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us!

Reviewer: wannabebella (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 24

You could do the college years and Edward and Bella's wedding, first child etc

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