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Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Oh my god I am crying my eyes out, that was so sad I'm glad he lived and that he was adopted by the Cullens and that Bella didn't loose him. That was painful to read because it hits home. The fear of loosing someone you love is painful. You did a great job!! Did you cry writing this?
Author's Response: Um yeah. I pretty much bawled the whole time. LOL...I'm not sure why I felt the need to write this, but the niggling in my brain is gone, so that's good. Thanks for the review...I am glad you could appreciate what I wrote :o)
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Ok so right now I am in tears and could barely read the words, awesome ending, I love happy endings but I also love the ones that catch you off guard. Great second ending
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
i cried... a lot... your so damn emotional. *cries more*
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
alright, lots of crying there
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 25
Awesome story, you have made me fall inlone with reading again, I got so excited everytime I would see a update. Great job on this story.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
I've seriously been crying for about ten minutes. That was so sad! I'm glad that wasn't your real ending, but I do know what it's like to have a storyline knocking around in your head until you write it. Thanks for posting it!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 25
<----can't stop crying long enough to type anything....oh wait, i guess i just typed that!
seriously though...tons of tears on my end! This was/is an absolutely amazing story!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 24
*grabs tissues* such a great chapter! the scene at the cemetary was very moving! I'm sad that the story is almost done, but I'm happy that Edward is getting his HEA.
Reviewer: jamiejackson42 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 24
I think it would be great to add more POV's to this story to see how everyone was seeing edward and walking on eggshells.
however for the confronting Mike thing, i think you could do a lot of diff things. You could have Bella just walk up and deck him, or have the girls play a prank on him, or maybe just having Emmet knock him out again.
the next plot......well the only thing i can think of is to do something with alice or emmet's bio families, either reliving an even, or have a relative find them. idk just a thought
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 25
I can't wait for more stories. I would love if you did a sequel or pov stories like if a chracter besides edward were in that chapter you could write it in their pov. Hope you write a sequel,
melanie
Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 25
I can't wait for more stories. I would love if you did a sequel or pov stories like if a chracter besides edward were in that chapter you could write it in their pov. Hope you write a sequel,
melanie
Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 25
This was an amazing story!
I can't wait for the extras!!
Reviewer: angelawy (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
Just wanted to say congratulations! Looking forward to anything new from you. :)
Reviewer: IlCantante527 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 25
This was a heart-wrenchingly beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. Great job! =)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 25
Wow! I just read the whole story and it was amazing! Very emotional.
I would love for you to write a sequel. I would love to read what happens as Edward moves on with his life.
I look forward to reading your alternate ending and the other POV's.
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 25
Aww these last 2 chapters have had me crying! I'm sad the story is done, but you ended it perfectly!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 25
great....loved it...
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 25
very sweet! and i'm glad you decided on doing the different pov! can't wait to read them!
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 25
Awwwwwwwww crying here that is sooooo sweet! Awww, aw thats just aw! Well done to you!! Honestly that was better than most that have written fanficns before and i for one loved every chapter of it. Well not the one were edward almost died that was terrible for him but nessicary for the story. You rock can't wait to read what else you write :)
you rock xox
Reviewer: Estelicia (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 25
That ways beautiful
i'm crying like a baby
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 25
I loved it! Still my favorite ff ever. I can't wait for the alternate ending and different POVs. AND the sequal :) Lol I'm looking forward to some sexy scenes between Edward and Bella ;D
Thanks for this ff!
Reviewer: mastiff mom (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Prologue
What an AMAZING first story!!! The last couple chapters especially are very well written - way to capture the emotion!! Thanks so much for sharing with us. I can't wait to see the other POVs and alternate ending!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 25
such a sweet ending - thanks for sharing the story with us :)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 25
It's over...:(:( I can't believe it. Well done on finishing your first story, it's AMAZING!!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 25
i cried reading this....and the little full-circle ending(??) was beautiful.
If I were you, I would write this MARVELOUS story in diffrent POV's...like you said.....but i want to hear the whole story in diffrent POV's as well....start with Bella's, then go to.....ALICE!!!!!!!!!! I love her, and i know other people do as well..... This story was AMAZING and the end took my breath away....literally......so kep up the good work and continue to write more fanfiction. If you write other fanfictions, 520 reviews will probably double.....
so in conclusion.....LOVED IT AND YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR....so far.....seriously....srry this is sooooooooooooo long.....
OH... and i know that the rating i gave you looks like a 10....but it wouldn't go to 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,
000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,00,00,00,0,0, o-okfghgfhamuc9ftmu9gvfguuli......
so just amagine it did...MUFFINS!!
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