Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
ohh and i cant wait to read the sequel and the other point of views im soo excited =]
Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
thats super depressing im soo glad it didnt actually end like that i have to read the real one lighten up my day
its still really good though
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Wow, Way to make me cry! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
I'm not too crazy about the alternate ending (because Edward died, of course) Lol, but it's still good.
Can't wait for the sequal! (Where Edward's alive!) :D
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 14
Not boring at all...just incredibly sweet and wonderful.
Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
I can't even see the words I'm typing so I hope everything's spelt correctly. God, way to make me bawl.
I just read another story where they wrote Edward dying. So not a HEA.
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
no more i cant take it that was sooooooooo sad i def like the other ending
=(
Reviewer: fergi81 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Entirely plausible ending, possibly leading to further chapters!!! However, I like my Edward alive and adopted as in the original ending, just because warm Edward feels better than cold! HA HA
Great job!
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
I don't merely enjoy your writing, I am addicted!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Hey this is soooo sad i prefere the other ending deffinatly i think it was so sad how she would sit at the piano and smell his jumper.
Reviewer: hurley1003 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Wow. This is quiet the alternate ending. It was powerful and a great ending.
Reviewer: Rosa Clementine (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
You have a writing style that just begs to be published. Awesome.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
i have to say that i don't like this ending, but don't freak out yet. i don't like it, not because it wasn't well written, but because it was too WELL done. hauntingly so. the scene of his death really stuck with me. and then the depression the family sinks into (which is normal of course) was devastating. you did a very good job on this chapter, so much so that i can say i hate how it ended, and i am not one of those people who always require a happy ending. i have to say i hope the epilogue is from the original ending. i'm not sure i can take much more of the aftermath. very well done.
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Good. Heavens. Bless you for not making this the official ending. You'dve broken my heart entirely.
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Well crap. So glad you didn't end it this way. I have to go back and read the real ending now.
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
so fucking sad
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
omg that was brilliant but i love the other ending better LOL ok i love happy endings LOL
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
so fucking sad
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
wowo...i absolutely LOVED it....keep up the good work
~MeIshAlice
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
wow... tear-jerking and not quite a HEA ending but still very poignant
Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Wow, that was so sad. I could only skim through it because I couldn't bare to really read it all. How do we get to the other POVs and your sequel? PS-I'm so glad that was not really the ending...
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Shit. I never read tissue warnings, because I never cry. I'm crying. Yeah. Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: carson_maverick_girl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
oh wow. I haven't cried like that over a story since I read new moon the first time
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
This was way to sad. I cried. The other ending was so much better.
Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Oh my god I am crying my eyes out, that was so sad I'm glad he lived and that he was adopted by the Cullens and that Bella didn't loose him. That was painful to read because it hits home. The fear of loosing someone you love is painful. You did a great job!! Did you cry writing this?
Author's Response: Um yeah. I pretty much bawled the whole time. LOL...I'm not sure why I felt the need to write this, but the niggling in my brain is gone, so that's good. Thanks for the review...I am glad you could appreciate what I wrote :o)
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