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Reviewer: justwant2read (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
I cried sooooooooo much reading this!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awesome!!! Best cgpter ever!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
Wow!!!!!!! I read your story all the way through, because I was just so wrapped up in everything.......it was so overwhelming all the emotions that are in this story........I am gald you went with the original ending...... so much better...but your alternate ending was truly amazing.......I don't think I have cried so hard and had to wipe my eyes so much just to be able to read it!!!!!!!! I will be putting this on my favorites list so I can read again at a later date.... I promise to review all chapters then........
Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
Yeah, I'm crying like a baby yet again.
Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Alternate Ending
Yeah, I'm amazed that I could finish reading this because I was crying so bad! You are an amazing writer, and I'm glad that you added this chapter but I am soooooo happy that it did not end like this.
Reviewer: lovebitessobiteback (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 22
Holy crap!!! Edward's letter to Bella made me cry! I love your stroy! Great job!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
I seem to be re reading all my favorite stories.... It's be sooo long since I've read this one....
I forgot him much I absolutely LOVED it!!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 2
I am kind of choked up...it is a good chapter...
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Prologue
Why, that bastard...how DARE he?
I am already so proud of Edward...
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 23
thank goodness he is ok!!!
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
I am really enjoying how you incorporate the SM version of the story with your own characters. But I am getting nervous - I want a happy ending!!! Eventually...
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
It's interesting to see Edward as the new student in this story. I'm eager to see how it unfolds...
Reviewer: with-the-vampires-of-course (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
i dont think i have ever crieed so much in my life while reading.
wow i cant even see the keyboard
this was an amazing story. i definiatly prefer the orgianl ending lol
Reviewer: commonlyunique (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
I started reading this story two days ago, and haven't been able to stop. I agree with the A/N, the happy ending feels right, it's how I prefer to see the story end. But I also want to say that the alternative ending, oh, it is so beautiful. Heartwrenching, so sad and I couldn't stop crying, but so very well written. So even though it is sad and heartbreaking, it's beautiful. Your writing is fantastic.
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
i cried so many times i didnt really like alternate ending it was way too sad no offense.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 25
i love this story so much. Very angsty but beautiful...pooor edward ....i am glad the ending turned out so well for him....This doesnt seem like the writing of someone who has wrote there first fanfic...good job
Reviewer: Sandman (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh, this story is making me feel all warm and fuzzy! I love Edward!
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
i don't like the alternate ending its really sad why did you write it?
Reviewer: HinderGoddess (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 25
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am enjoying Edwards character development.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
I have been waiting a long time to read this story. I am enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: Divaisdancing (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 25
I loved this beautiful story.
It had me in tears,giggles and full blown laughs(especially the halloween maze)
Great Great Great(you get it) Story.
Reviewer: edwardismine212 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Prologue
question: what was his weapon of choice?
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 27: Alternate Ending pt. 2
Living without the person you love is a very difficult part of life. But how much more difficult would it be to lose someone who loves as passionately as Edward Anthony Masen Cullen? Poor Bella would never be happy, truly happy because love like that is so rare that finding it again would unfortunately never happen.
As difficult as it was to read these last two chapters, this probably happens more often in "real" life. All those poor babies, children, and teens who are abused by monsters posing as parents.
I do plan to start on the sequels to this story just as soon as the puffiness goes down from my crying eyes. Thank you for telling such a heart touching story.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oh Edward!!! I hope someone comes to help him...Emmett or Chief Swan??? I wonder who James is going to make him write to? Or is James' plan to make him write a suicide note and then go back and kill the Swan's and Cullen's.
I'll have to say that your telling of your story makes me so excited that it is painful to take the time to write a review...all I want to do is go to the next. But, you deserve the love for such a great story!!!
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