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Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad to see Edward is digging. I can't imagine what he will do when he finds out. He will not be a happy camper!
I really love the way you are building this story. It's like a nice slow build, where you know something big is coming, and want it to come, but you are really enjoying the trip.
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
please go on. I want to see how that plays out. I like your writing style.
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
You have me totally hooked! Please update this story soon because I have to read more about how Edward goes about finding out what happened to Bella and how he helps her through this awful event. Hopefully he'll beat the crap out of James, who I am assuming is the one that raped Bella.
Heather
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
This sounds like an interesting story.
Can't wait to read more
Thanks!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, you have drawn me in. I need to read more to see where this will all go now. ;)
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
Building a lot of suspense. I will try to keep up.. :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hey
I think this is a great chapter. i think it is really sweet that Edward cares about Bella. I also think its good that he is trying to figure out wt is wrong.
x
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Cool story, can't wait to read more
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this is a great beginning. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this fic. Great job! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh that was good
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh that was good
Reviewer: lilyflower (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like what you have so far. I thought you did a good job of showing the pain that Bella was in. It seemed very realistic to me. Thanks for writing :)
Reviewer: alex2sweet (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Poor, poor Bella. So, did the screaming Edward witness happen on the night of the rape? Or was she just having a nightmare of the rape, which actually really happened years ago?
Can't wait to read more!
:)
Author's Response: I am giddy. This is my first fanfic and you have made my day.
I will be updating at the end of the week
Keep a look out
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great, can't wait to see where this goes....
Author's Response: You won't be disappointed.
Thanks so much for the encouragement
I'll update by friday
Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
o god i love it! im already hooked! write faster faster!!!
Author's Response: First Fanfic and you are awesome. This is why I write
Keep reading. The next update should be friday
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
GREAT STORY KEPP IT UP
Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot. This is my first fanfic. You guys are awsome
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Bella...I would like you to continue this story!
Author's Response: Don't worry. I have a lot to tell with this story
Thanks for reading
Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your writing is really amazing. You do a wonderful job of portraying what's going on. This is a really serious subject, but I think you are writing it with a lot of grace and understanding.
I'm so glad that Bella has Edward and Alice. I really hope Bella can start opening up to someone soon.
Please continue the story and update soon! :)
Author's Response: I have a lot to cover with this story. I am so glad you like it.
I will update soon.
Reviewer: redtaxi (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start, I look forward to more.
:) Until, next time.
Author's Response: You won't have to wait long.......
Thanks for the encouragement. I'm a first timer.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. <3.
Author's Response: you said it. Just want to you read the next chapter.
Thanks for the support.
Reviewer: mrsjasperhale88 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
You have me hooked.
Author's Response: I'm hooked too. I love what I have planned. Follow me and you will not be disappointed.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love it so far and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support.
More will be posted at the end of the week.
You are awesome
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey
I love this chapter its great. I also think your writing style is great. I think it is sweet of Edward to be concerned enough to try to find out what is wrong with Bella. I think its truly awful what happened to Bella but i think that the storyline sounds like its going to be a great story. Update soon.
x
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww~ Poor Bella- the night of the rape was sad... I hope that Edward helps her heal. I am looking forward to more soon.
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