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Reviewer: Emoeverafter (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
amazing story!!! i can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hey great chapter i am glad at the end that edward didnt say anything or comfort her i think the space will be better at the mo =]
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I"m glad you caught that fact that Edward didn't try to comfort her. There is no real comfort after what happened to her. Later on eventually, but not now. It's too soon. Thanks for the support. I think you will really like the next few chapters. Coming up soon is the Frat party and pinning of Em And Rosie. So stay tuned.
Reviewer: lollipopstick28 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
This story keeps making me cry. I can feel Bella's pain and the burden she has by keeping what happened to herself.
This is a great story!
Reviewer: jovo_xo (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great story, I love the EPOV and the whole unfolding of the story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ohhh... Poor Bella... I can't imagine that the next chapter finding her back at the frat house is going to go well. I just hope that Edward has the strength to help her at the time.
Please update soon...
Reviewer: angelt1029 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is a great story you have going here! i can't wiat to read the next chapter. But I am a bit confused. In the first chapter you said that it was October, however; in a later chapter you mentioned it was September. Also, you first said that Edward met Bella halfway through freshman year, and later said they met as sophmores. I was just wondering what the time line is.
Great writing!
Tarin
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up on the confused timeline.
It is the beginning of October and Bella and Edward met during freshman year, but got to know each other sophomore year when alice and jazz started dating. I"m going to clarify that up in an edit. Thanks and I'm glad you like the story.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awww...of course Alice is always right. But it's always food to jave that confirmed. This waas another great chapter, seeing how Bella is being drawn to Edward and the life that Edward leaves. I love the Emmett eants to pin Rosalie. I do hope we get to see that! Thanks for the update, I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: SnoopyPuppy1106 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
Please put up more chapters
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is great. A very nice addition to the story.
I especially love the conversation between Alice and Edward. I like how you made their relationship.
Can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
Glad to see another chapter. Thank you. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hey this is a great chap i think it was sweet at the end where alice said about tthe way they looked at each other.
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Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
Please update! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: peanutmachiela (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
So am I under the right assumption when I say that Bella was raped (duh) but that James thinks they had a drunken night of sex? Or is that coming up? And when I think of Edward being the RA I picture him looking like a prefect from Harry Potter.... maybe it's because its almost midnight and I am trying to read my updates. That will teach me.
Author's Response: I can't give you too much info, otherwise I'll spoil the plot. But yes, Bella was raped, but James involvement will be brought up much later in the story. Let's just say, he wasn't that drunk....
And yeah, I can totally see Edward as a prefect
Thanks for the review
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh he wants so much to make sure she's okay and he can't because like Alice said, it will push her away.
Good chapter!
Thanks
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. Too bad Edward couldn't get more info out of Mrs. Cope but it probably would not have helped as much as just talking to Alice did. Please update asap.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Haha...it's kinda true that "I'm fine" never really means that you're fine! I can't wait for another update :)
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Interesting chapter...hope he gets to talk to her in the next one!
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is cool. Looks promising!!! :)
Reviewer: BitterxSweetxLuv314 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome......please update ASAP!!!!!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
hurry up and type then!
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 3
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow. That was really good. I loved your writing. Very intense.
And the story is very different. I like it a lot.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a great beginning to the story...it really pulls you in and makes you want to know more. One critical piece of information we did learn...Alice is not someone to reckon with, and you always want her on your side. :)
Reviewer: ginnypooh24 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: emmettisahottie (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
i liked the story so far and i cant wait to see how the story pans out
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