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Reviewer: brighteyes87 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

This story hits awfully close to home...

Thank you for telling it with caution and beautifully. It's a tense subject... And... Well... It wasn't as bad as I'm assuming Bella's situation was... But I wish I had had an Edward in that period of my life.

I'm looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

I just discovered this story, and plowed through it in about 45 minutes.  I adore it, please post again soon!

Reviewer: stargazer (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good chapter with lots of good info.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ok, I think I know exactly who did it now.

I hope Edward can talk Bella into talking to Esme and also into pressing charges against the perp. Though since it's been a few dyas there's going to be hardly no evidence, with the exception of the scratches and bruises, which are paritally healed, so even if it does go to court, it's going to be a he said/she said, and the defense lawyer is going to make it seem like a next day regret and that she liked it rough.

That being said, I'm saying the perp is going to be James. He's scumbag enough to do exactly that. Particularlly with what we know of his personality from canon. Because I distinctly recall S. Meyer writing that he acted friendly when he commented on using her mom's video camera and goign into her house in Phoenix.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  I'm not really giving out spoilers, (think what you wish)  but the percentage of date rapes cases that are actually brought to any DA or to a school disiplinary hearing is less than 10% within the college standard age group.  After saying that, you should know I am a firm believer in Karma.  The mystery is how that Karma is played out.

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

Your Esme is amazing. I would like Auntie Esme to go please! This is an incredibly important topic, and the way you handled it, coupled with Edward's reaction, was perfect and realistic. I think a lot of women who haven't experienced or don't know someone who has experienced sexual assault think along the same lines. "It would never happen, I'm responsible, I would never let someone do that." But it happens, and it sucks, and most people don't ever report it. I hope your next update follows quickly, thanks for sharing this story with us!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for the fast update.  I can't wait to read more.  Oh and thanks for putting that info out there for all to try to understand.

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

OK -- that was absolutely phenomenal.  I truly feel like I learned something in this chapter.  I hope I never need to use this knowledge, but unfortunately I probably will . . .  Thank you so much for putting a much needed focus on obtaining PROFESSIONAL help for such serious issues. 

Please update again soon!!  Awesome.

 

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

uhm... I like this story :^)

I cant wait to get caught up.

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

I wonder when Edward will find out the truth.  And the she?  Could it be Esme?  He has already refused to talk to Alice about this.  Esme could probably understand, and Bella could use a mom right about now. 

Bella is trying to deal with this on her own, and she does need help.  This is very difficult, and not something that should be borne alone.

Reviewer: Rylee Skye (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Gah! Who is he going to call?!?!?! This is a touching story Beth, I can relate to Bella so well in almost every way here. Thank you for that!

~Rylee

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

awww how sweet! i like where you have taken this...its not too cliche but you still have that classic air to it...i love it! update soon!

 

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Two chapters?  Really?  So far I only see this one.  I will keep my eye out for that wonderful email that tells me the other is up.

I can't wait to see who he called.  And how she will help.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the que just waiting to be validated....

Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 6

I'm enjoying this story and I've added it to my favourites. I've got a few too many stories on the go and I can't remember what happened in the last chapter - I need to go back and re read oops.

Like Edward being a nice guy though - I've read a few too many Playerward stories recently so this is refreshing.

Looking forward to an update

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hey this chap was really cool im glad he showed her that he could keep her safe now =] and the way he seees her is reallt sweet as well =]

Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ugh, it seems like we're getting sooo close to Edward finding out what happened.  I love this story - keep updating!

Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love how he wants to make everything better for her - what a guy! Great chapter!

Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love it! I'm curious to see who Edward called. His mother? Maybe, I'm not so sure. UD soon please.

Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

ewwww... who did he call?  Esme?  Rosalie?  Ahhhh is it Rosalie?  She would be perfect to help in this situation!  Can't wait to find out!

 

Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 6

OH! im soooo interested! please update some more! i cant wait for the love scene. its gonna have me jumping out of my chair and practically raping my boyfriend! please update soon!



Author's Response:

Have to state, that although I love that you love my story, it is a date rape scenario.  I highly doubt Edward and Bella will be having sex anytime soon.

But thank you for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

hmmmmm, i wonder who edward's calling??

loved the chapter(: 



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long, it's in the que waiting to be validated

Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving this fic! I can't wait to see where you take it.

-Alyx

Reviewer: stargazer (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

Good chapter, I like how Edward is not pushing Bella but letting her lead.

Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm waiting for Bella to let Edward help her!

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

awsome love this sory. update soon i really want to know how this works out. i wanna see what happens when edward finds out who did it.

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