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Reviewer: brighteyes87 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love lots more E and B... I hope to see more soon... I was wondering when you would update as I missed this story so much. Seriously, it's one of the best ones that I've read in a long while (in terms of content and style... There are a lot of good 'fluffy' stories but so few that are well written and deal with the harsh realities of life). Thank you.
I am without a doubt anxious and excited to read more!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
I just started reading this tonight. It's well done - dealing with a truly difficult topic. I'll be watching for updates.
Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter - looking forward to another one soon!
Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
More! And yes u have the feelings down for a rape victim.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 10
I loved Edward's revelation about his feelings for Bella. I love Edward and Bella chapters, but I think it was important for Edward to discover his true motives for wanting to be around Bella and Alice was just the right person to get him to that place.
Great job! Please update soon!
-m
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 10
Too Short.
Good, but short. I like lonnnnngg chapters :)
It was good having Emmett joing Edward for the run. Edward is carrying a heavy burden and he has to be able to let go sometimes. I'm wondering if Bella saw The Person at the cafeteria and that is why she left Alice ? Will she show up for class?
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
This story is going great please update soon! I just love Alice's intuition! lol
Godd job!
Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
Yay, I wondering when there would be an update. I almost cheered when I saw you had a new chapter up, actually clicking the link to quickly to really take a good look at the banner, I'll have to go back and check that out. This chapter was great, but there is still so much more I want to know and get out in the open. When will Bella confront her rapist, and when will she and Edward finally get some more things out in the open? Your Emmett is totally cool, I hope that we find out more about how he helped(I'm assuming Rose) through her difficult time. Please update soon, although this chapter was well worth the wait!
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
I am trying to allow my brain to function – I just read the story and am totally and utterly speechless. This story really touched me in a profound way.
The emotions behind the words and the feeling from the words are just ... just...just.
From the way that the story has progressed it could almost be read from a victims Biography. The fact that it is always drilled in to you that if you are raped the first thing you have to do is go to the police but what if you are afraid of the police there is almost no sane explanation to not go to the police but there is a 99% chance that they have no idea of what you are going through – ppl always try to empathize with you – I know how you feel, its ok, you will be ok, its going to be fine, I’m here for you but unless you have lived through such and event those words mean very little and you can never know what its like or what it feels like some times you just want to kill the next person who even thinks about saying the words ok, alright, I know.
It’s always the strongest that fall the hardest and the 4 small insignificant words that Edward said can almost be enough to pull you through it all with the support of the person saying them.
Author's Response: That was awesome
Thank you ... so very much
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
i've had lots of time lately to read the stories that i wasn't drawn to at first. i must say, i cant believe i passed this one up bc its very well written. another chapter soon? please and thank you!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
What an amazing story. I'm so glad I found it.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow.... I am so glad she has edward and was able to share what happened.
cant wait to see where this takes them...
Udpate soon
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 7
Well, now he knows what he needs to do...sort of. Good chapter.
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
**Le Sigh**
Fracking fabulous!
I can't wait for the next chappie!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
it's very scary to think about things like this happening. A friend of my a few years back went through something similar, except I tried to play Edward's part. In this case things didn't work out as well. i don;t talk to that person anymore. I found that she used her pain to her advantage. She never wanted to get help, for a year i walked around with her burden trying to think of ways to help without betraying her, without making her hate me. I had one person who helped me through it and I will always be grateful for what he did. But I got tired of hiding her secret, of dealing with pain every day when she wouldn;t do anything about it herself. I sometimes feel like I failed her.
So this story kind of hits home. I understand Edward. I like how he is actually doing bella some good. I cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
wow, that was a big step.
your an amazing writer.
can't wait for the next chapter(:
Reviewer: Edwards Bella (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is so good - and Edward's reply was just perfect. He's doin' a great job, and I'm sure Bella will get through this. Please keep updating!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 6
That's so sweet. I love how he slept next to her...sort of. That was cute. Good chapter hun.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 5
Cute chapter. I like the fact that he counted how many times he made her smile. That's adorable. Love it!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I like how they spent a little time together in the quiet. It was very sweet. Great job!
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
Okay, typing through tears here, so please forgive any and all typos.
This was so beautifully written, and so hard to read. Knowing the pain she was feeling, and reading as Edward had the confirmation of his fears for the first time was heartwrenching. He was so afraid of hurting her further, only wanting to bring her peace.
I loved Emmett. The way he was willing to put aside his own personal wants to care more about Bella as she lay crying in Edward's room His not-so-subtle reminders of the guy Edward used to be, and yet his willingness to put that all aside as he realized that Edward was only trying to care for Bella. He's going to be another one who will be out for blood when/if he finds out what happened, as well as needing to be restrained when/if he finds out who did it.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, to find out what Edward does. Does he recommend her talking to Esme? Does he try to find out who did it? When it happened? He knows what night it was, will he put the pieces together, and try to figure out which frat brother was responsible? He will be all about vengance at the moment, and I would love to have the rapist have to answer for his crime, even if he was drunk.
Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
Omg you just made me cry!!
Reviewer: Emoeverafter (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
oh, my god!! that was absolutely amazing!!!i cant wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the fact that this story has a darker edge to it. The whole story isn't dark but there are some darker elements to it. I like it. Great job so far.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, now i'm confused. Bella is in her junior year right? Did the rape happen her freshman year or the other night at the party? Other than that, great chapter!
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