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Reviewer: robsten63 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

i cried :(

but i like the sotyr apart from be bawling ....

wish there was more but i dont think so....

:)

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

its really sad bu interesting to go back to chicago at that time

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

This was very powerful.  The emotions were very intense.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  Great job.

Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 10:11 PM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

that was deep.  I've never seen anything like it. Very orriginal.

Reviewer: amelia (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

Very sad, yet very beautifully written.



Author's Response: Thanks for such a nice compliment. I loved writing this story, and I'm hoping to write more like it soon. Thanks again!

Reviewer: xsnowx (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 01:33 AM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

That was so sad, but well done

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I love anything bittersweet, so that's the mood I was trying to go with.

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 01:22 AM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

This kiss was powered by tragedy, not happiness or even lust.

I really, really love this line I wish I would have thought of that.



Author's Response: Aw. Thank you. I like that line, too. :)

Reviewer: Greenteabook (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2008 06:42 PM · On: Chapter One. EPOV

Your description of the Masons house was beautiful. The sadness that permiated the hospital was overwhelming though.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad that you picked up on the omnipresent feeling of misery, however. That's how I imagine life was during the Spanish influenza epidemic. Again, your review is greatly appreciated.

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