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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Insights
That was such a great chapter!
I LOVELOVELOVELOVE how you dealt with Bella's inability to get over Edward.
Perfect!
Author's Response: Something really weird: I had another idea in mind re: the scar, but as I sat at the key board Billy's greater experience & wisdom lead me to the truth! Freaky!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Insights
Oooh, I'm so glad I found your story! This is amazing! I love your writing style!
Reviewer: babyfrog (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Insights
please write more chapters
Reviewer: Arena (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Insights
Man...another great chapter, Damn Seth for barging in like that LOL. Can't wait for chapter 4.
Reviewer: sommer (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 03:02 AM · On: A Study in Black
wonderful! Keep it coming. The writing style, the idea of the story, the way it matches Stephenie Meyers style, I was irked when it stopped, I'd like to read more :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for those very kind words! SM wrote something about how she developed Jacob as she did to give Bella another, really good, life option. I always felt that J. deserved better than to be second runner-up. This is, in truth, the romance that I would like to have with this yummy wolf boy!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 06:28 PM · On: A Study in Black
Love your story so far! Looking forward to more!
And yes, there's always room for one more Jake and Bella story! (At least one as well-written as yours!)
Reviewer: kmarieluvsemall (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:59 PM · On: A Study in Black
i am really enjoying your story so far! i cant wait to read more
Reviewer: rosie_girl (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:48 PM · On: A Study in Black
i love it. . . . it is just how i would have put it. jake is amazing. good work. . .
keep it up!
;)
Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 11:27 AM · On: A Study in Black
Well, I'm liking this story so far. I'm just afraid. I'm waiting for Edward to come back and ruin everything. That's usually what happens in these stories once I get attached.:( Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm anxious to see how Jacob/Bella play out together.
Reviewer: Arena (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 10:08 AM · On: A Study in Black
Please update soon...I can't wait. You've got me hooked.
Reviewer: 18 and Life (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:40 AM · On: After the Fall
and I forgot to mention.....PLEASE have the ovaries - I would LOVE to have the tension you're building come to fruition - not too soon, of course, but eventually....please.
Reviewer: 18 and Life (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:38 AM · On: A Study in Black
Oh, my gosh. I flippin' LOVE this story! I love how Jake is just letting her stew in her attraction to him - make her notice him on her own - brilliant. Keep up the great work and please update soon!!!
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:28 AM · On: A Study in Black
oh I CAN'T WAIT for the next one!!! Love this storyline - love what you are creating here!!! more, pleeeeease!!!!
Reviewer: picklevictory (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:22 AM · On: A Study in Black
Nice chapter. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:20 PM · On: After the Fall
This is FABULOUS!! Love your writing style - would LOVE to read more please!!!!
Reviewer: Arena (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:05 PM · On: After the Fall
Wow, you're off to a great start, you've left me wanting more. Can't wait till you post again...keep it up!
Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:38 AM · On: After the Fall
Excellent start! I enjoyed it. One can never get enough of Jacob. lol
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