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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Momentum
tastful and well written
Author's Response: Thank you. It was a labor of love....
Reviewer: dyinglight (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Momentum
Argh!! That was so hot! I think that this was very well written and not too "vulgar" (for lack of better terminology). This felt right, like this is the path that Bella and Jacob would have taken. Very well done! I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks. Your comments help with the, um, plot development!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Momentum
charlie is team jacob !! ahah well found.
i liked this chapter especially because your jacob already has experience (in the others fics generally he doesn't).
i want more !!!
Author's Response: I just didn't see how someone as hunky, sweet & funny as Jake could possibly NOT be attractive to other girls!
Reviewer: CHANTIL123 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Black and Blue
ummmmmmmmm! that wuz great i totaly luv jacob
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Tiny Fish
That was a fun chapter! I LOVE it when people give Jake something to do besides mechanic work! :)
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Black and Blue
GREAT!!
Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Black and Blue
Carmen, (aka diamondheart) how long have you been 17? You write as though you have had some life experiences that normal teenagers have not yet had. I liked the interaction between Bella and Billy. This is the first piece of fan fiction that I have seen that actually shows his wisdom and develops his character.
I'm glad you still have ovaries. Use them wisely. ;) (Mine are gone due to surgery last August...but that's OK, I am a post menopausal mother of four and no longer need them any way. LOL!) Your story has been added to my list of favorites and I look forward to updates.
I am not not a writer.....just a voracious reader!
Author's Response: Hmmm, shows that much does it?
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Black and Blue
love this story!! Will anxiously await your next update and thank you!!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Black and Blue
whoo! An update:) Exciting stuff. Lovely as always. I'm looking forward to seeing how Bella reacts to a wolf ride:P
Author's Response: So nice to see regular reviewers. it warms the heart to know people are keeping up and wanting more!
Reviewer: dyinglight (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Black and Blue
Oh my Jacob!!! I love this story, positively love it!! It's so good it should be fattening!!! I look forward to more soon. Great job, very in character and such a refreshing story for me. Jacob deserves some good lovin!!! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Black and Blue
i like your sotry about Jacob's mother though it's quite sad. it was great to have a talk with emily and sam, which we can't get inthe twilight books.
looking forward to the next chapter !!!
(i really like the quote from eclipse)
Author's Response: I actually scaled back the angst re: Sarah Black - it started out much more grim. I decided that no one would want to read such a dark story!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Tiny Fish
very cool story. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Tiny Fish
he better have inprinted on bella. LOL. Or that will make their relationship harder.
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Tiny Fish
great chapter as usual^^
looking forward for this talk about imprinting (which seems to be a classic in tha b/J stories^^)
Reviewer: Autumnal (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Tiny Fish
I love this story. I love edward and all, but Jacob is way under appreciated. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Tiny Fish
What a lovely story so far!
Reviewer: Arena (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Tiny Fish
Once again another great story, I just can't seem to get enough of Bella and Jake...he's just so damn adorable, even if he does have and ego that won't quit. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for putting me down as a favorite author! it gives me a glow...!
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Tiny Fish
I loved the setting of the hatchery!! Will anxiously await your next update & thank you!!!
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Conversations & Reflections
great story i like it. but i'm not very difficult because i like all the B/J stories !!! yours is very well written and i'm looking forward for the next chapters !!!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Conversations & Reflections
Nice chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! More action next post...
Reviewer: teamtaylor1991 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:07 AM · On: After the Fall
i'm new to this whole site, but i'm a huge team jacob fan. i love your story and think it's off to a great start. go team jacob!
Reviewer: noel presh (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Conversations & Reflections
So, to start off, in all honesty, I'm not usually the hugest fan of Jacob (but I think sometimes his character does get an extra-bad rap). But, I read this and I'm enjoying it and really intrigued. It's different and I like this Bella and Jacob. So I'm giving Jacob another chance. :) Your story is great so far!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Conversations & Reflections
I really like this, I can see that she is really moving on with her life. I'm very curious of what happens next especially with the sneek peek.
Author's Response: Things do start to pick up...hehe!
Author's Response: Things do start to pick up...hehe!
Reviewer: BeverlyB (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Insights
I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy reading your story! I can't wait until the next chapter is up!
Reviewer: MrsKeel (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Insights
You just cant leave it like this. I need more, please finish this it is really really good.
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