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Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Wildlife Management
The colors thing was a really coolidea. Really fun to have a way of the pack mind explained. So excited about the next chapter.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Momentum
Oh my god. I would say it was pretty close to perfect. It could get a little more graphic for me, but I can understand not wanting to take it to the point where it gets non-character fitting.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Black and Blue
Yeah!!!!!!!! I'm so glad it seems like Jake and Bella are meant to be. I have to go read the next chapter. It feels like I've been waiting years for them to get it on.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Tiny Fish
The way you described the earth tremblor made me think of imprinting. Crazy your teaser for the next chapter is about imprinting. Coincidence? I guess I'll go find out.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Conversations & Reflections
Cute chapter. Hopefully she'll find an occasion to wear that bikini somewhere with Jacob. I have the feeling that he would appreciate it.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Insights
That kiss was so sweet. I liked the talk between Billy and Bella too. It gave her a place to put the blame on someone other than herself and a way to look at things differently.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Night and the Forest
This story is totally hot! I'm not even team Jacob, but I think it gives a more realistic approach to the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's exactly where I have been trying to go.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Night and the Forest
whoohoo!
Author's Response: Oh, yeah!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Night and the Forest
That is one of my favorite Jacob and Bella encounters. Other stories I've read just rush through their time together. It was very sweet and gentle. Loving the story; can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted it to be really special for them...
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Night and the Forest
Hmmm... I wonder what he has to Say. I hope nothing too bad. Yay. They finally did the deed. LOL. And gave them selfs to eachothr.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I think they did too...
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Night and the Forest
I've been dying for a new chapter and it was awesome! But what you write of the next chapter, I want it now!!
Great job. Keep on writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is almost ready - but the beta only works week-ends... a bient tot!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Wildlife Management
I'm really enjoying your story! I like the relationship you are developing between Jacob and Bella. It's very sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, hearing from y'all really helps the writing.
Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:42 PM · On: After the Fall
This is so good!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you like it.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Wildlife Management
I loved your ideas about the pack stuff! Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I always wanted to know more about the wolves, too. Thanks, Jacob!
Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Momentum
I think this is very tasteful and, although very "engaging," *wink, wink* is also very sweet and exudes deep emotion. I've read some extremely "lust-centric" stories out there that don't seem to convey the deep love of the characters and the magic of intimacy between two people who share such a strong spiritual bond. I encourage you to continue writing more Jaccob/Bella stories, as there are are not enough out there to satisfy all of the "wolfgirls" out there! LOL! BTW, I think I HAVE read a book about a red-head who was captured by a Duke pirate. LOL! Good read, but your story hits it out of the park! ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Most (but not all) of the B+J stories were so unsatisfying that I just had to write my own!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Momentum
I loved it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks again, good to hear from you.
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Wildlife Management
Cool chapter -- It was neat to hear more about the pack! I always wished we had more details about them! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I was glad Jake opened up, too...
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Wildlife Management
:) Keep up the awesome work
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <><3
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Wildlife Management
Great chapter !!! That was a very interesting chapter. Though you didn't imagine all these things it was a pretty amazing discussion. I read National Geo. too but the French issue^^.
Looking forward to your next chapter (if this is the one^^) !!!
Author's Response: Thanks, cherie!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Wildlife Management
The one for what? LOL. They fit good together. I need to start reading more jxb stories. Im finally starting to see that ....They make a cute couple.
Author's Response: Happy to be an influence... <><3
Reviewer: dyinglight (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Wildlife Management
Woot!! This is good, I like the way their relationship is progressing. I look forward to seeing how the trip to Florida goes!! Hee hee!!! Ah, I love this story! Keep up the good work, I'm excited for the next update!
Author's Response: I think Renee will be impressed!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Black and Blue
Good chapter! Excited for the next!
Author's Response: Thank you! The tension builds...
Reviewer: emilij (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Momentum
Well this is only the second review I have ever written, but I wanted to let you know that it was very tasteful yet very exciting at the same time. My mouth fell open at the very end--I am sure you can guess which part! I hope you write the next chapter very soon! Really good job!
Author's Response: It was when J. admited to having read romance novels, right? Hee hee!
Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Momentum
"I meant as a passenger." His mouth twisted in my favorite grin. "I recall promising you a wolf ride quite a while ago. You'll love it! Better than the bikes, even. No noise, no fumes and you can go anywhere!"
OH MY Carmen!! When chapter six ended with the above paragraph, I was expecting chapter seven to begin with Bella riding Jacob after he had phased into his wolf form. I didn't expect her to be riding Jacob on her living room floor!! WOW! Talk about HOT!
I am not a writer..........just a voracious reader!!
Author's Response: ROTFL! An actual wolf ride will be mentioned in more detail in a later chapter...Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Momentum
Absolutely love your perspective - this is excellent - it's perfection, as is your story!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it, thanks for your very kind comments.
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