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Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Hey! When's Florida coming? I can't wait!! :)
Author's Response: Very soon! Renee's still making up her mind about Jake... <><3
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
I LOVED that! I wish there were more JPOV. Like what was he thinking about the breakfast basket!?
Anyway, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad it was a hit! <><3
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Aah-ha!! He did howl!!!!!
Author's Response: So, uh, I guess what you're trying to say is... you sorta, um, like the story?? Thank you so much for the reviews! <><3
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Morning
That was SO NICE!!!! I LOVED the way Bella told Jake she LOVED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Night and the Forest
That was VERY TASTEFUL & NICE!!!!! And PLEASE tell that Jake DOESNT imprint on on another girl!!! I dont KNOW if i could take THAT OF ALL THINGS!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Wildlife Management
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Momentum
HOT DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAY-UM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LITTLE HOT UP IN HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Black and Blue
Oh yes wolf riding here we come!!!!! And cant WAIT for ch.7!!!!!!!!! mm-hm!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Tiny Fish
Damn i aint know Bella got down liike THAT!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Conversations & Reflections
I Loved that chapter!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Insights
What the heck JACOB?!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:36 AM · On: A Study in Black
That was so FREAKING AWESOME!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
so glad to get Jake's side of it:) Well done
Author's Response: Thank you, It was really fun to write! <><3
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
I'm such a lucky girl my two favorite stories were updated the same day! I like your chapter because I really like Jacob and his POV. But as my brother says it, he doesn't understand how girls can write from a man's POV because we don't think at all like them. I responded that we don't need to think like men to be able to know what Jacob thinks! He still doesn't understand but it's just because he doesn't know Jake^^
Author's Response: And yet, through the ages, MEN have felt perfectly qualified to write from the woman's point of view! Typical. <><3
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
I knew hearing Jake's side of things would be awesome. Everything about this story right now is hot.
Author's Response: Thank you. This chapter almost wrote itself! Very inspiring... <><3
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:21 PM · On: After the Fall
VERY NICE!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, enjoy! <><3
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Damn, that was hot! My first BxJ lemon! I still think Edward is better, but this is good too.
Author's Response: Thank you. Just let yourself be won over by that wolfy charm... <><3
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Morning
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Night and the Forest
I liked the tiger line! Bella, you're not suppose to think about the ex after sex. That's a no no. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hee hee! Let's just call it closure....<><3
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Wildlife Management
Great chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what Renee thinks of Jacob.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! it was nice to see the total jump like that.
As you've doubtless guessed, I'm not really a writer - in fact ,my career has taken me about as far from writing fiction as one can get. (See bio) I mainly wanted to see where things would go if B would get out of her own way and let people who care about her help her heal... I just had no idea that they would all be so danged talkative! <><3
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Momentum
really hard for me to picture Jacob and Bella together, but that was amazing. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Black and Blue
Oh dear, poor Billy and Jacob to have to deal with that kind of mother. At least he grew up right.
Reviewer: istousi (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Morning
Jake/Bella is my absolute favorite ship to read/write. Even though I'm an E/B shipper at heart J/B is a close runner-up, if not tied! Anyway, I love the story. Lemons are wonderful, as is pillow talk, LOL. I'm not sure I understand what the "tetonic shift" Bella experienced was though. Did she imprint on Jake?
Love the stiry. Keep it up!
Author's Response: It goes back to Ch. 5 Tiny Fish and, yes, that is the implication. <><3
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Tiny Fish
The ravishing lines were hysterical. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Conversations & Reflections
The story is still moving a bit slow, but I'm still intrigued to where its heading. Good chapter.
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