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Reviews For Moonshadow
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Insights

I like the spin on the "bite" and the explaination on the obsessiveness of their relationship.... also love the "tender" side of Jacob!  Excellent reading!!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:57 AM · On: A Study in Black

Love Jake's humor... I laughed at the bumper sticker scene... too funny!

Looks like I wont be able to put this down till I've read the entire thing!  So far, I am loving every word!!!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:41 AM · On: After the Fall

Just started your story.... LOVING JACOB.... his kind but wise words.... Can't wait to read more!   Ohhh and I LOVE that Bella is going to the funeral, I never liked how she wasn't there for Charlie in the original....

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Confusion

so very hot. :)



Author's Response:

Maybe - 108F?

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Dots

your got me hooked and now I am waiting for more please write more soon!!! thanks for your story I really enjoy it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Next chapter is being polished right now.<><3

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Night and the Forest

um...HOT! And very romantic. You did a great job at balancing the two. Perfect for these two lovely characters! :)



Author's Response:

um...it was inspiring to write - I wanted something really special for them!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Momentum

loved it! awesome looking forward to more

Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Dots

This story is so fun to read.  Its well written and gives some fun fresh new perspective to the characters.  Thank you for updating and I hope you keep going!



Author's Response:

Thank you very, very much! I really wanted to follow 'the road not taken' in the saga, the one B regrets so much at the end of Eclipse... <><3

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:56 PM · On: After the Fall

I just discovered your fic...now granted, I am a big Jacob fan, but so far I like it. A LOT. :) Great kiss! You're quite a writer. :) I'm looking forward to getting caught up ans seeing what happens.

Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Well, if you liked the kiss ...!!! Glad you're enjoying. <><3

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Dots

freaking awesome chapter! I just wish we knew who the vamps were and if they're with victoria! Or what the hell is going on lol! oh well I hope to see an update soon!



Author's Response:

Great! Sounds like I'm developing the suspense part just right... (gives creepy laugh!) <><3

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Dots

Yea!  I've been dying to read a wolf ride!  I know it will be awesome even before I read it.  Loved the chapter!  Loved what you did with Leah and Bella; I'm glad it wasn't Edward (if he needs to make an apperance thats fine too, but I'm glad it wasn't yet).  This is one of my favorite J/B stories.  I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I thought Leah needed a friend and a chance at a life... <><3

Reviewer: Elizabeth Keller (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Dots

This is SUCH a good story!!! I have enjoyed reading it all day! AND, I even tried some of the food you mentioned ( looked up some recipes) and now my family thanks you as well! haha!  Great story!  i can't wait for more! This chapter gave me goose bumps!!!



Author's Response:

Goose bumps are great! Thanks! i'm glad someone noticed the food, a subject as dear to me as Jacob...<><3

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Dots

Thanks for the dedication, that's very sweet of you!!!

Oh I really want this wolf ride! You promised it several times but we never  had it. At one point I thought I had completely skipped it in one chapter but no. I liked the chapter though it was very long! I wonder if Charlie will ever know about the wolves? And when Billy said that Bella wasn't the only Swan to fancy a Quileute I thought that Charlie and Sue were making out or something!



Author's Response:

I know it was a long one, there were just several things that needed to get mentioned at this point, plus I wanted to show how much B's life has changed since she made the choice to start living again... Charlie, too! <><3

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Dots

Thanks for the update! I love how Leah is coming around and isn't such a hard ass (not that I blame her) as Bella gets to talking with her.  Hmmm...Charlie has Quileute in his blood..interesting!!



Author's Response:

I was always intrigued by Leah, having pursued a man's career, I know what it's like being the only girl in testosterone-ville! <><3

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Dots

poor bells:(



Author's Response:

Yeah, but she's got Jacob... makes up for a lot in my mind! <><3

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:55 PM · On: After the Fall

Romeo and Juliet were not a success as a couple.  Get it?"

LOVE that line.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I thought Bella needed a dose of reality! <><3

Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Dots

i missed this story. It would be crazy if Bella was somehow related to the pack. I guess that's why she kind of imprinted on Jacob. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

I promise that the "dots" will get connected, all in good time... <><3

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Dots

It's so good!  DRAMA!  Got ta love it!



Author's Response:

Can't really have a tale of supernatural beings w/o a little suspense, can we? Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Confusion

LOVED it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was wondering where you were... <><3

Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Dots

Nicely done!  Love this story with all my heart.  A diamond-heart, in fact!  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, my sweet. You may have noticed that I fixed a couple of things as per your observations! <><3

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Confusion

Long but enjoyable. I always like your chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my sweet. Looking forward to more "Kangaroo"! <><3

Reviewer: 092816gil (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Confusion

This is amazing! I was always Team Edward. Then I started reading Jacob/Bella fanfic.  I love them together!  Please update as soon as you can! I anxiously await!!!



Author's Response:

Alice told B "I sorry you have to choose between two good things.", it would be tough - but I think I'd rather be warm! <><3

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Momentum

WOW!



Author's Response:

Thanks! ;D <><3

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Confusion

Wonderful!  More please!

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Confusion

Wonderful!  More please!



Author's Response:

Coming up soon. Happy you like it! <><3

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