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Reviews For Moonshadow
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Magnetic North

Good chappie!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! More is on the way. <><3

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Magnetic North

Wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank you! <><3

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Magnetic North

I have to say, the way the Pack rescued Bella was really creative!  Awesome read!  I'm glad Bella is OK and Victoria is dead.  The wolves really work well together, I feel safer already! HA  I can't wait to see whats next!



Author's Response:

Just give those wolves a chance to serve & they really come through! Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Magnetic North

yet another excellent chapter can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you, coming up soon! <><3

Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Magnetic North

I just love this story. I love reading about Jake and Bella. It's a perfect love story. Thanks sooo much for letting all of us read it. 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you like it! Be sure to check out the Bella & Jacob Chronicles...:) <><3

Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Magnetic North

Great chapter...oh how I love stories with excitment lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon :o)



Author's Response:

Happy to satisfy! <><3

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Magnetic North

Very good story-telling. I felt like I was watching all the action happen right before my eyes. I truly enjoyed it.

thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much  - that's exactly how I wanted it to be! <><3

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Magnetic North

Good, good, good!!! Now I understand what I didn't in the last chapter!!! I'm glad Victoria's dead!!! And the end's perfect!!!



Author's Response:

;D I knew I could count on you to catch that bit at the end - nice to have it turn out the right way, wasn't it! Emily's pretty brave isn't she? <><3

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Magnetic North

WOW! What a great read! I love how you've captured Jake's sweet, smart and fun character so well. (Kind of nice to get away from all of Edward's angst for a while.) I thought the chapter from Jacob's point of view was very tender and absolutely smoking! MORE! MORE! MORE! (pleeeeaase?) 



Author's Response:

Isn't Jacob terrific - I'm sooo jealous of that Bella! ;P <><3

Reviewer: Xiggy C (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Magnetic North

I'm so glad this chapter isup! I've been checking on it daily since i started to read!I'm so glad i started it, it's really good. I can't wait for hte next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your patience! Glad you found it worth the wait! <><3

Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Magnetic North

Great chapter.  It was nice (I guess that's probably not the right word considering what he went through) to see the events through Jacob's POV.  I'm happy our lovebirds are together and free of the Victoria threat.  Though, I'm intrigued by your teaser for the next chapter!  Great job.



Author's Response:

So happy you liked hearing Jake's pespective on the ordeal *whew*. Good thing he has such stalwart brothers - and a sister! thank you! <><3

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Magnetic North

Wow poor Jake! And Leah is just so freaking awesome! I'm anxiously awaiting an update! I'm excited. The Title seems interesting and can easily be interpreted so many ways. Is bella pregnant? Is that why jake had to leave? Is Emily expecting? I think its a pregnancy chapter lol maybe not. I'm mostly always bad at guessing. Lol. Well anyway Update soon!



Author's Response:

I don't wan to give too much away, but your guesses are creative! Glad you liked the Leah bit! <><3

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Magnetic North

Good catching up chapter!  Somehow, though, I get the feeling that "normal boyfriend and girlfriend" won't ever really apply to these two...

And that teaser!  Mean! :) 



Author's Response:

Hey, Bella can dream, right? <><3

Reviewer: shorti (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Magnetic North

OOOH that was an amazing cover up I can not wait until the next chapter please update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you , glad it was a hit! <><3

Reviewer: kaykay86 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Magnetic North

more please! :) awesome stuff



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Magnetic North

yay i feel like the wait for that was long even tho i know it wasn't lol X's and O's



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in there! <><3

Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Magnetic North

As always, nice job!!  I <3 your Jake. 

*sigh*

Jake (stares off dreamily...)



Author's Response:

Yes. Ahhh, Jake... Thanks, love! <><3

Reviewer: Fsternu (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Black Hole

when will a new ch be up?



Author's Response:

Got it! *whew* <><3

Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Black Hole

YAY!! good job!! now please please post the next chapter ASAP!!! like today!!

Author's Response:

YAY! here it is! <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Confusion

Loved the chapter... lol. Makeup sex ... nothing better than that LOL... it seems like some tension is finally gone between them on some issues.. that's good. :)



Author's Response:

Pretty much worth having a fight to begin with... Glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Renee

Cute Chapter. love how Jacob is such a gentlemen and impresses Renee. Very cute.



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear. <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV

*jaw drop*

This POV was HOT!!! hearing it from Jacob's side somehow intensified the other chapter by like.. oh lets say 100% haha... AMAZING!

Oh, best quote.. I could not halp laughing at "the thought of unsuspecting hikers coming across a giant, naked Indian wanking in the woods." --that is HILARIOUS! I just had the funniest image of some hiker totally walking in on that and going "OH MY GOD" HAA!

 

Intense chapter, hope to see more of this in the future... and more Jake's POV... hot hot hot!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! Most of the reviews of this chapter have been 'polite' - I thought I'd really missed! How about that "study question"? ;D  <><3

Reviewer: monikalopez (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Morning

This was a real sweet chapter... I thought it was kind of funny how Jacob didn't believe bella realy when she said "I love you".. haha.. "sure sure".. typical responce.. but still cute.



Author's Response:

I guess ol' Jake just couldn't believe that dreams really do come true... <><3

Reviewer: Shiloh Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Momentum

Seriously hot - not tacky in the slightest, very sweet, honest and HOT



Author's Response:

thank you; I felt that they needed to make the plunge, but tried to keep it IC - and memorable! <><3

Reviewer: shorti (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Black Hole

Please update soon I have read this whole story twice since you last updated!!!



Author's Response:

So-o-o happy you're enjoying the fic so much!! The next chapter is in the queue! <><3

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