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Reviewer: viqii (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
AWESOME
Billy and Charlie are just two old gossiping ladies. I love them.
Author's Response: Arent they cute? They just had to get the last word in...! <><3
Reviewer: maxwellicus (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Insights
:) :) :)
Author's Response: ;> <><3
Reviewer: maxwellicus (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:37 AM · On: A Study in Black
Ooooo. I'm can't stop reading!
Author's Response: Perfect! :) <><3
Reviewer: maxwellicus (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:14 AM · On: After the Fall
This story is really good so far! It's very well written & I like how Jacob is so understanding & insightful. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: maxwellicus (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:14 AM · On: After the Fall
This story is really good so far! It's very well written & I like how Jacob is so understanding & insightful. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Isn't he a darling? Just the BF I want... <><3
Reviewer: twilightluvr (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
EDWARD HAS TO COME BACK he loves bella and he cant stay away from her but when he does come back bella doesnt love him anymore she stays at jacobs side at all times because jacob owns her hearth now
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE AWESOME
Author's Response: So nice to provoke such a response! What a dilema for Bella: two such fantastic guys... ;> <><3
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
The conversation about the future and between the dads was poignant. Everything's winding down and you leave us with that teaser?! I don't know what to expect, but know it will be a doozy. You're skilled!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much m'dear. I think you'll find the epi... enlightening! Heehee! <><3
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Night and the Forest
What a great chapter!!! I had always wanted to see a true b/j story and finally we have one...and yet she still had in the back of her mind Edward b/c first loves really do that! They stay with you esp if you had been as hurt as our dear Bella.
Author's Response: First loves do have that effect, even w/o supernatural powers!
Be sure to check out The Bella and Jacob Chronicles ( a series I started here on Twilighted w/another wolfgirl) for more fun! <><3
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
dun dun dun. i just had that cheesy "music" in my head, like from a soap opera or something. im half-asleep though so my brains all foggy when i actually try to think right now so im sure that doesnt make sense. im kinda sad to hear that this story may be ending soon, i hate when i finally find a good story/movie/tv show & it ends. i know, i know, "all good things must come to an end", blah blah blah. but i want the good stories to go on forever, but i guess ill just have to settle for reading books til they fall apart & reruns, haha. cant wait to see how this unfolds & eventually ends. eek
Author's Response: I have all kinds of books held together with tape - no Kindle for this girl! I wish I could have spun this out longer, but J & B said evry thing I had for them to say... :( <><3
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
omg the epilogue sounds soooo intense! does edward come back? :] love this story, keep updating please haha :]
Author's Response: You know I'm not going to tell you that! Epi is in the queue... <><3
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
Wow! I am kinda sad to read that this wonderful story is almost over. It has blended the perfect amount of action, adventure, drama, love and lemons (although there could always be more of those!). The only good part of this story being over, is the fact that I can always go back and read it over and over again.
PS - In regards to this chapter, I am glad Bella had her own kind of closure with Edward, and that Bella and Jacob finally got their big date. Charlie and Billy are too cute!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm blushing! Isn't fic wonderful? Glad you enjoyed the chapter... kinda wanted to draw some threads together. Definitely thought that the dads deserved the last word! Epilogue coming up! <><3
BTW the companion piece I'm outling has two lemons (so far!) - in a one shot! ;> (working title 93 Million Miles)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Momentum
Okay since you asked for it i'm gonna tell you! I loved this chapter! The lemon was sweet and dirty all at the same time. Loved that Jake was experienced and how nervous Bella was about telling him.
I could totally visualize the entire thing too!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, just the effect I was hoping for! I had to cast my mind back a very long way... (silly to think that Jake couldn't take his pick of the girls! What a hunk!) <><3
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
oooh hahaha edward's back next chapter :)
Author's Response: oooh hahaha, indeed! Just you wait... <><3
Reviewer: Ruby Jean (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
My first fan fic read, and I read the whole damned 19 chapters at work this afternoon. Amazing....I am Team Edward...but damn, this was good...Team Jacob doesn't seem so bad now.
Author's Response: WOW! I am so flattered! Really happy you enjoyed it - don't get into trouble at work now!
i like to think of myself as Team Good Story - but my heart really belongs to Jacob! Thanks for reading. <><3
Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
Wow, that was so beautiful and sweet. I like the fact that Bella wrote that letter and then burned it, because, as she said, it was more for her and not Edward. She needed closure on that part of her life. THe date with Jacob was wonderful and what they said to each other...well, you really captured that moment beautifully. And of course, Billy/Charlie are always histerically sweet together. I'm really sad that the Epilogue is next though. Although, I think you've pretty much covered everything you wanted to...there's still that sense of wanting more. Anyway, great job as usual. Can't wait to read the final chapter. I hope your little teaser doesn't ruin things for B/J because that future they pictured together sure is wonderful. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, love!
I'd rather leave people wishing there was a bit more than have readers saying 'so enough already'! Life just isn't that tidy, wanted to give the feeling of life & living going on.... Glad you liked the B & C bit.
I wept copiously through the writing of this chapter! Sad, but pleased too. The Epilogue will do what epilogues do... <><3
Reviewer: blusaphyer (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Confusion
Alright, I wondered about this a few chapters ago and now I'm just going to come right out and say it. Condoms? Birth Control? You can't really assume that one is on birth control. Great writing by the way. I will not be upset if Edward accidentally on purposely dies.
Author's Response: It actually was brought up in ch. 4 (B's promise to Renee) and J does use a condom in ch. 9 - but I didn't want to obsess about it! In my mind they discussed it at one point, just didn't fit neatly into a chapter... Thanks for mentioning it, tho': I always think the lack 'planning' in fics is a little odd - not to mention irresponsible - considering what a major preoccupation it is for so much of a woman's life! ;D <><3
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
That was very sweet! Hey I just had an epiphany! This chapter just made me think that Bella came to Forks and found her fork in the road. Jacob led one way and Edward the other. I haven't read anything about this but I'm sure it's out there somewhere and I'm just a little slow on the uptake! I hope Edward is okay and just coming back to give them his blessings. Waiting patiently for the epilogue...
Author's Response: Hmmm...that sounds like a one-shot in the making...! Your patience will be rewarded soon... <><3
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
oh! epilogue! I loved the charlie and billy conversation it was too darn cute!
Author's Response: I knew that these two old pals would have something to say about the kids! It seemed only natural that Billy would offer his wisdom as a father of girls to Charlie (obviously floundering!) <><3
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
hunh so no edward return.....no galliant fight? sniffle sniffle.......KIDDING ok i like this story haha its a nice J&B and no one dies lol the last j and b i read was great till jacob almost acidently kills bella then edward kills jake i was like OMG WTF AHHHHHHH so ya hehe xoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response: Glad I missed that one (no offence to the author!) I just had to write my own JxB in response/antidote to some of the fics I've read - whose authors apparently read an ENTIRELY different saga than I did! <><3
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
I alway love a little Charlie/Billy, they always make me laugh. Love your story!!!
Author's Response: Aren't they cute? I just knew they'd be so happy that their kids got together! <><3
Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
Awww so sweet! I can't wait for the epiloge...I'm hopeing we get to see some wedding? Can't wait...although I'll be sad to see this end.
Author's Response: Well... I don't like to give too much away, but there will be some wedding action! ;> *grin* <><3
Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Easy as Breathing
Oh I'm sad you're going to end this story :( I'm always so happy when I see that there's an update.
I liked that chapter very, very much and I must admit that I was feeling that the story was coming to its end. It's always so sad to finish a work but hey! You still have one chapter to go!!!
I liked the interaction between Charlie and Billy, you got them pretty well like in the books, Billy not really caring about Bella and Jacob relationship and Charlie so lost about everything!!!
Oh, by the way, I wrote my entry for the contest, too! It's called "Lovely" and I must say that the title of your entry is more than intriguing!!!
Author's Response: They finally said (just about) everything they had to say! *sob* ...epilogue...
Now maybe I can get caught up on R & R-ing all the Chronicles fics!!!! (Well, after I finish my SOB entry, and the companion piece [working title '93 Million Miles'] and the smut fic I'm diddling with and.... :D) Looking forward to reading 'Lovely', cherie!
The dads segment practically wrote itself - just seemed so natural! <><3
Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
another great chapter, it was nice to read about charlie and billy in this one,
Author's Response: Thanks! It felt so right for the dads to have the last word! <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! <><3
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
Sweet, sweet chapter. Hate to see this great fic end!
Author's Response: Thank you... I'm really sad, too; but it's been so much fun! <><3
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