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Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:23 PM · On: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this story! I am a hardcore B & E fan, but I enjoy a well-written B & J story now and then. I particularly loved the ending scene with Edward. I could really feel Jacob's fear of her leaving him. Hope to read more of your stories.
Author's Response: *chuckles delightedly* Always good to hear that a member of The Other Team enjoyed one of my fics! Isn't ff fun to let us explore other ways the Saga could have gone? Glad you enjoyed it <><3
I actually started a parallel fic of Edward's "life", on hiatus due to RL pressures, that I hope to pick up again soon.
Reviewer: alishab (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:10 PM · On: Momentum
to be honest it doesnt seem very bella . hmmmmmmm shes just so much shyer then that even in her head she wouldmt have explained things in such graphic cetail ya know i mean i could see that from jake but not bella just and errant thought. love the story though. oh and shes not so blunt about things jake would have had to drag the take the brakes off thing outta her
Author's Response: A huge part of the motivation for writing MS was not only to have Bella end up with Jake, but also to explore Bella as she moves away from her passivity and starts becoming a participant in her own life.
Bella's refusal to allow herself to feel and think and grow was a major dissatisfaction with the Saga and, alas, with many fics. I don't find that very romantic or desirable.
Likely SM's Bella's fear of change and self-responsability is what made Edward and being a vampire seem appealing. Fic is a wonderful thing <><3
Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
I haven't read this for awhile and its still perfect and lovely-darce
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie! A re-read is the highest compliment...<><3
Reviewer: fullmoon422 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Interlude - Jacob's POV
Awesome. But I really hate it when men name their penis - "Little chief". Ick. Just my personal opinion.
Author's Response: NO KIDDING! Even darling Jake is, well, a guy! They can't seem to help some things;D <><3
Reviewer: fullmoon422 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Black and Blue
Love it. Great stories about the Blacks. good stuff.
Reviewer: fullmoon422 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Black and Blue
Love it. Great stories about the Blacks. good stuff.
Author's Response: I just knew there had to be something behind it all, Billy & Jake's closeness AND J's amazing patience with Bella! <><3
Reviewer: fullmoon422 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Tiny Fish
Terrific! Loved it.
Author's Response: *grin* I don't think I could have left the hatchery at all...! <><3
Reviewer: mal005 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Morning
Love the story. I would live to read chapter 9 in Jacob's POV!
Author's Response: *grins happily* I guessing that you've probably read Chap 11 by now -I'd love to know what you think...So happy you're enjoying the fic! <><3
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 02:53 PM · On: After the Fall
So this is one of my favorite stories-- I'm gonna re-read because my other favorites just are not updating and I need a fix. I read the epilouge again-- it is to die for. Love, love, love it!!!! Anywho won't be reviewing all the chapters again but wanted to let you know. All aces story, good enough to read again.
Author's Response: Thyank you, my sweet! Knowing my fic is worth a re-read is the very best of compliments! <><3
Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 06:10 AM · On: Epilogue
Oh I SO loved this story-drama, love and really hot sex! way to go diamondheart!! darcy
Author's Response: Thanks again, my sweet. Someitmes I feel like I should have tried to come up with some wild-ass plot with Victoria combining forces with Severus Snape & hijacking the Enterprise to enslave the good citizens of Forks...or something!
But really, I just wanted to write what could/should have been and make the outcome more satisfying for myself and, it seems, more than a few wolf girls! <><3
Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Epilogue
Oh I SO loved this story-drama, love and really hot sex! way to go diamondheart!! darcy
Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Black and Blue
love it-darcy
Author's Response: Are you re-reading? COOL! That's the highest compliment... <><3
Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved it alot-love happy endings-darcy
Author's Response: *big grin* Thanks - I just had to make the story turn out RIGHT! <><3
Reviewer: ShannonEG2000 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Night and the Forest
Oh, gosh, guys ALWAYS have to say something like that the morning after, don't they? At least with Jacob, I can take comfort in the fact that it's not something stupid like an STD.
I'm familiar with the Native American description that you describe, and I think it's sweet to see it brought to life in a fanfiction. Jake's such a sweet guy to do something like that for Bella... At least your Bella has enough sense to appreciate it! ::sighs like the fangirl I am::
Oh, and this is like from 3-4 chapters ago, but I laughed my ASS off at the whole bumper sticker thing! No idea where you got that one, but it was hilarious!
Author's Response: Well, wha Jake has to say will be a bit...startling! Glad you liked the nest, it was a real 'pet' of an idea: the need for privacy mixed with the camaradrie of the tribe and Jake's desire to make something Really Special for the girl he loves'
You wouldn't believe the flame I got on ffnet (from someone who had previously lambasted me 'cuz my Jake isn't a virgin!) saying , among other things, it "would be better" if he made it all himself...obviously no idea that the sense of community is hugely important in that culture & to Jake as an individual, a tribe member and as a wolf. Thanks for getting it! <><3
PS - the bumper sticker is one I actually SAW on a truck in Houston about...20 years ago? *gasp* Obvo, it sorta stuck in my mind!
Reviewer: ShannonEG2000 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Wildlife Management
Oh dear gods. You put Jacob in a doo-rag? Are you kidding me? ::rolls eyes:: I personally don't like them, so I hate the thought of my beautiful Jacob with that thing on his head. Aside from that, I swear I DID enjoy the chapter and as soon as I hit "SUBMIT", I'm off to the next chapter. It is the one, after all! ::SQUEE::
Author's Response: Mostly, I agree, just seemed the thing he'd wear while working at the garage - to keep the grease out of that beautiful black hair that he's growing out because Bella likes better long...think I'm starting to hyperventilate here! <><3
Reviewer: ShannonEG2000 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Momentum
The punctuation? You're worried about the punctuation?!?! LMAO! I know, I know, you were kidding, but it's still funny to think about. But come to think about it, if I was reading a really hot lemon scene and the punctuation was crap, it would be a total mood-killer for me... ;)
LOL, so I was reading along and got to this point and realized, "HOLY CRAP! I just finished chapter 7 and haven't reviewed since chapter 1! MUST RECTIFY IMMEDIATELY!"
As for the lemony goodness, it was totally freakin hot! I'm just dying to read the next chapter! Speaking of which, I LOVE the teasers at the end of the chapters! Imagine all your poor, innocent readers waiting anxiously for their update alerts...
Onto chapter 8! Werewolf dating etiquette, you say?
Author's Response: *grin* Those fics where the main characters (any characters, doesn't have to be J & B) just somehow end up in the sack by the end of the second chapter always seem to be...lacking somehow. (Not that I have anything against PWP, mind you, but this isn't that kind of story!)
That sense of breathlessness, before you "know" what happens only comes along once in life, and since writing this fic was all about living vicariously through Bella, well...
Glad it was a hit, just consider it a "labor of love" o my part! <><3
Reviewer: ShannonEG2000 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 10:05 AM · On: After the Fall
Oooh! I LOVE Jacob's last line there! THAT'S SO TRUE! In canon, Bella is so convinced that her grief is special, somehow more important, because why? Because Edward was a vampire? To that I say, SO WHAT! Because he was her "Romeo"? Like your Jacob so aptly put it, Romeo and Juliet didn't turn out so well...
I think you have hit the nail on the head, diamondheart! You've honed into one of my favorite lines from Eclipse, where Jacob says to Bella, "With me it would be as easy as breathing... I'm the natural course your life would have taken..."
So, needless to say, I'm headed on to Chapter 2, to see exactly where this story is headed! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!
Shannon E
Author's Response: Well, that review put a big grin on my face!
I got so frustrated with Saga Bella, she started out seeming like a sensible girl, and who can blame her for falling wildly in love with Edward, but COME ON! Who wouldn't recover quickly with the likes of Jacob Black around *fans self*
Glad you're enjoying so far, I think you'll find that it gets better still... Thanks for the r&r! <><3
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Epilogue
That last bit was fabulous!
Well, the whole story was!
But that last bit made me laugh so much.
Every chapter did actually, thanks so much!
I love a Bella and Jacob story. (:
Author's Response: That last scene was in my head from the very first moment I started thinking, "Hey, I bet I could write a fic..." It just fit so well!
Would it be crass of me to gently suggest that you might like the follow-ups (encompassed in The Moonshadow Continuum)? Plus, I just submitted the first chap of "The Fractured Angel", the EPOV of MS. I take it that you've already accessed The Bella and Jacob Chronicles.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! <><3
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Black Hole
"You want to have some fun BITCH? Come play with ME!" - LOVED THIS!
Hahahaha.
Author's Response: That line pretty much resonated with me, too! <><3
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Momentum
So disappointing: Jake isn't a virgin!
It's weird that he has so much experience when I thought of him still as an awkward teenager. Isn't he still only sixteen or so?
It's such a good story though, right on to the next chapter after writing this, haha.
Author's Response: Disappointing? All I can say is that people aren't always in the same place in life...
In a chapter note (wa-ay back at the beginning) I had mentioned that I added a little to Jake's age, this was mainly to side-step the submission rule that minors can't be intimate with legal adults (which would have been the case in this AU) - joke's on me, I think I'm the only author who has paid attention to that rule! ;P
I do have to admit to having 'come of age' in a more permissive era than the current one, that doubtless colored my view of such things!
You are my 600th review! How cool is that? <><3
Reviewer: lizzieblackthewerewolfsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Momentum
definatly NOT to much!! i rocked!!!!! keep going the way ur going and ull have a best seller!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to discribe that breathless feeling of young love, before you already "know" what's going to happen...a place we're only in once! Glad you enjoyed it...<><3
Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Dots
I just love this. It's so well done. Not only is the story line great, but I love that you really keep the characters themselves. 8 )
Author's Response: Why, thank you! That's exactly what I was trying to do - allow the characters to develop naturally without "undue influence"! <><3
Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 03:21 AM · On: A Study in Black
I like how this one is progressing naturally. The relationship btwn Jacob and Bella doesn't feel forced. 8 )
Author's Response: Thanks! I like to think that Bella would have reacted this way if only one thing had been different...(no Alice!) Glad you're enjoying it! <><3
Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Epilogue
k..got timed out again. sigh. why does that happen? alright..again, let me say, that i felt like a part of this group, watching from the edge, everyone smiling, living life. loving. i cried when you wrote about Billy, laughed when you wrote about Paul and Rachel, gasped when you wrote about Leah. made sense though. LOL. i so didn't want this to be over, so i am thrilled to see there is more for my hungry heart to get into. god, if only it had really ended this way. but then, there would've been unhappy people on the other side to. you capture the chemistry between them, the chemistry that is palpable, even off set, they smile together..there is something there that i truly love. so thank you for the island of Jacob and Bella where i can live happily ever after. I'll just pretend this is how it did happen.
hugs
Author's Response: We-e-ell, if the Saga had ended satisfactorily (for me) I probably never would have found the world of ff - or found out that I could write something other people would like to read! To say that writing Moonshadow was a transformative experience is putting mildly! SOOO glad you liked it, and glad you noticed the follow ups, plainly the Muse isn't done with me...(I'll put in a plug for The Bella and Jacob Chronicles, too)
I like to think of Moonshadow as 'the Saga that should have been.' <><3
PS: I'm probably the only one in the fandom who hasn't seen the New Moon movie, I didn't think I could handle the shock of seeing it all go "wrong"...feel me?
Reviewer: nativebreeze (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Easy as Breathing
k..i was in tears. you brought that scene in, the one that tore me apart, with the black haired children, billy, the "what could be" moment from Eclipse..made it just that much more "real" for me, this tale. how crazy..you are making a "fictional" story more "real" for me..from a "fictional story". LOL..wow. you write the dialog so damn well between everyone, love the humor, the ease with all the characters, i truly feel the bond between them all.
hugs
Author's Response: I've read that scene, and the one where J's in bed all broken, about a million times -sobbing for every one of them (and I'm a grown woman!!). I just HAD to turn that the RIGHT way! Even before I turned completely wolfish, I tho't "how could she pass all that up - for tousled bronze hair?" So glad it resonated with you, too! Fan fic is a wonderful thing... <><3
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